Great descriptions.

[Lizzyluna]

First adoptive son of Music Paper and Paper Doll, this hatchling is a living legend: rumors say it was made with doomed paper, and so you can kill a person by writing his or her name on the hatchling's wings. This is irrational, of course: the owner tried this trick herself and nothing has happ

 

The dragon is obviously named Lizzy's Death Note

 

 

My personal favorite.

 

Amour Dans L'air ('09 Valentine)

 

Aww, my baby!

Edited February 27, 2010 by Lizzyluna

[Zovesta]

Paine: I love that first one you posted, the I am totally serious. So much win. <3

[Ahavah]

I would like to show a very pretty one. The dragons belongs to a friend and fellow writer and I own one of his sons.

 

The name of the dragon is Haggis the Fearsome

 

And the description: All Christmas dragons embody the Spirit of Christmas, but there's something slightly off about Haggis. He embodies the Spirit of SAD (Seasonal Affective Disorder). Haggis has a chip on his shoulder because he was born with bright red stripes, and all of the other dragons used to laugh and call him names. He constantly got into fights as a hatchling and quickly gained the moniker "Haggis the Fearsome" after defeating the scroll hotshot, Han Sum, in three consecutive schoolyard battles.

 

Haggis usually smells of strong eggnog, and he loudly bemoans his holly-leaf wings whenever he's drunk. He rails against commercialism and will completely trash any yard he finds decorated with neon reindeer.

 

I just love how she wrote that

And I promised to describe my Haggis-son as well but so far I did not come up with a description that can live up to it.

Sweet! Thanks, Nalyua! I just saw this linked in another thread. Haggis the Fearsome is probably my very favorite description. I'm really glad to know that others like it too. This made my day.

[Dr. Paine]

Just a small reminder- while posting your own descriptions is fine, this thread is more for sharing ones you've found on the scrolls of others.

[Obscure_Trash]

I've gone through a lot of descriptions in the past few days and there's still one that sticks out at me.

 

Green Dino:

Dino Dance Revolution, or "DDR" received his name after winning a worldwide dance battle. He has now retired, but still break dances on weekends. He enjoys having a mild cup of coffee while listening to "Now That's What I Call Dinoz 5503."

[Dr. Paine]

Onoez, this may die D:

[Obscure_Trash]

Gah. I shall go on a mass reviewing spree so there can be some more to see.

[Lizzyluna]

Vyrasmureg is highly picky. He only drinks the blood of dragon with blood type 'Z'... and very few dragons have this rare blood type, so he normally starves. Most think his hunger is just because he's very polite and kind and doesn't want to hurt people, so he often gets a kind nod of the head. He views their nods as a way of saying "My neck, back off." As such, he likes to drink only the blood of hatchlings (as long as they have a Z blood type).

Due to a freak accident involving time travel, dungeons, dragons, and monsters that live in pockets, he found his home only after he was wandering for two years. He now lives in a coffin, sharing with a true vampire. The vampire died a couple of years ago, though, not that Vyrasmureg noticed.

Too bad vampires are unbreedable...I want him in my lineage!

No listed owner.

[Dakki]

I've come up with some stupid silly ones in my time. First time logging on since December last year, though! D:

 

I barely remember my dragons.

[Zovesta]

Too bad vampires are unbreedable...I want him in my lineage!

No listed owner.

That would be me! Thanks, I'm all tickled now.

[Lizzyluna]

Neon Duct Tape of Mashugana

Neon is an energetic, colorful dragon. She loves to play games of any kind and no one has ever seen her in a bad mood. Neon has a strange love for anything sticky, from duct tape to glue to tree sap, and can usually be found sticking something to something else one way or another. Neon has even gotten herself stuck to the ceiling before. The story is that she 'accedentally' fell into a tub of glue, was startled and flew up, running into the roof and sticking there. Some dragons doubt this story and say that she wanted to test the glue's strength, so she went swimming in it and stuck herself up there on purpose. Either way, Neon loved the whole experience and still says that being superglued to the roof was the most fun she's ever had. The same can't be said for the human Keeper of the clan, who had to spend about six hours peeling away the glue bit by bit to try and get Neon down.

 

Lilly Cake

Lilly Cake and her mother, Lill Miss Cookie look so much alike that it's almost impossible to tell the difference between them. Once, a crazy dragon got sick of it and tried to sneak up behind Lilly Cake to nip off part of her ear so he could tell by that mark which one was which. It ended up in a big fight where the crazy dragon lost both ears.

[Obscure_Trash]

Just approved this description for a chicken:

 

It was a Friday night. The hens were out having fun. Some glasses had been emptied. Decisions were impaired.

 

It was just one simple dare. Just one bite. Just one little bite. She couldn't lose face in front of her brood.

 

But she developed a problem. She was addicted. She knew it was wrong. She knew it was horrible. But she liked it. She had a problem and she liked it.

 

But what could she do... She knew secrets didn't last long among the hens. She needed a reason. She needed a cause. She needed . . . science.

 

She ate chickens for science.

 

x3 Lolwin.

[Lagie]

Just approved this description for a chicken:

 

It was a Friday night. The hens were out having fun. Some glasses had been emptied. Decisions were impaired.

 

It was just one simple dare. Just one bite. Just one little bite. She couldn't lose face in front of her brood.

 

But she developed a problem. She was addicted. She knew it was wrong. She knew it was horrible. But she liked it. She had a problem and she liked it.

 

But what could she do... She knew secrets didn't last long among the hens. She needed a reason. She needed a cause. She needed . . . science.

 

She ate chickens for science.

 

x3 Lolwin.

I knew I recognized that! Its owner posted it in CPA ages ago.

Thanks for approving it, Sockie.

 

I reviewed a description once that was far from great - it was spaces and punctuation only.

 

I like this one ~

 

Fojill, who thought of himself as male, often wondered what he tasted like but was always afraid to take a bite. A few months ago, he met another cheese dragon and found she also wondered what she tasted like. They both agreed to take a bite of each other's wings. What they discovered was that Cheese Dragons taste like chicken.

Edited October 25, 2010 by Lagie

[Stunningfire]

I love the chicken and the cheese! =3

[Kaini]

Broken Feather's story is a sad one. He has had a hard life.

When he was much younger, he was as all of his kind are. Curious, sweet, gentle, if not a bit timid. But he had a partner in crime. He called her Alu as a nickname and she called him Duster, mocking his feathers. He still prefers to be referred to as Duster, the few times he's seen. She loved to collect shells with him and he could always find her on the beach, being that she was a Bluna and loved the water.

Duster grew up before Alu did and realized he had feelings for her. But he didn't act on them. Instead, he let her finish maturing in peace and left the cave he had lived his adolescence in.

Unfortunately, the same night Izdati, the murderous rogue, set fire to the hatchling's caves. When the smoke cleared, Duster looked desperately for Alu. But he never found her. In despair, he fled.

To this day, he sits as a gargoyle,where they met, a pile of shells and a sad tune on his lips.

 

 

This one is a sweetling. It teared me up, it really did o.o I think it's pretty good, and of course sad. Not something you always see for a sweetling. Anyway, it impressed me.

[Charu]

I'm rather fond of my vamp's description. (Sparkleface Cullen)

 

I freaking love that description! You win Internetz!

[LadyNightshade]

Just approved this description for a chicken:

 

It was a Friday night. The hens were out having fun. Some glasses had been emptied. Decisions were impaired.

 

It was just one simple dare. Just one bite. Just one little bite. She couldn't lose face in front of her brood.

 

But she developed a problem. She was addicted. She knew it was wrong. She knew it was horrible. But she liked it. She had a problem and she liked it.

 

But what could she do... She knew secrets didn't last long among the hens. She needed a reason. She needed a cause. She needed . . . science.

 

She ate chickens for science.

 

x3 Lolwin.

Huh-zah Glad you liked it and thanks for approving it!

[Obscure_Trash]

x3 Thank you for writing it. I love modding descriptions when I come across ones like yours.

 

Another I just approved (a whiptail):

 

I haz a bukkit was often bullied as a hatchling due to her slow speed for a whiptail. The fact she was bullied made her find a bucket and use it as a hiding place. As she got older she began to take the bucket everywhere with her. Because she always had her bucket she was named I haz a bukkit although she no longer can hide in it she still takes it everywhere.

 

Too kyoot!

[Nine]

I just got my first approved description after about a month, which I must say I am rather happy about =) Good encouragement to keep on writing more!

 

...Or maybe write less. Think I pushed one dragon's description to 999 characters on the mark If only his code was 'TLDR'.

[Obscure_Trash]

Another I just approved.

 

MY TAIL IS A SNAKE is quite the oversized drama queen, as can be deduced from his name.

He can often be found screeching at the top of his lungs when his tail comes into his range of vision. The other dragons have learned to ignore his attention mongering.

 

x3

 

EDIT: Had to go look at their other descriptions and was not disappointed.

 

Has the Dumb is a sweet, gentle dragon who follows his mate like a docile puppy dog, and ruins all her plans to take over the world on accident. He can hardly move without breaking something, and can never think of anything to say (if he knew any words).

 

She is constantly speaking angrily to him, but all he hears are sweet words of love.

 

Unfortunately, the only way he can show his love for her in return is by making a romantic fire out of the 'evil' plans she has put on stolen paper. See, isn't he just the sweetest thing.

 

The Bubonic Plague, otherwise known as The Black Death, is bad enough to have the 'The's in BOTH her names capitalized. She's bad enough to put female Hellfires, Grays, and Vampires all to shame.

 

Unfortunately she is mated to "Has the Dumb" who, as you can imagine, isn't quite as fearsome as she is (for obvious reasons).

 

He follows her everywhere, and has caused quite a blemish on her otherwise flawlessly evil reputation due to his "special" nature.

 

The Vampire Handbook: Book 4, page 354.

 

"Why everyone is secretly doomed" by Life Sucks.

 

It seems like a Vampire's life is full of danger at every turn. There's always a angered White dragon out to vanquish the undead (and 'rid the world of evil'), a self-proclaimed slayer at large, or a rabid horde of fangirls lurking around a corner.

 

It will probably surprise the normal Vampire then to learn that the "true" living creatures have it just as bad. While they don't have fangirls, they have to put up with horrifying, life-threatening things like "Sunburn" and "Indigestion". Basically, everyone is doomed.

 

-About the author-

 

Life Sucks, a very young, and despised (for obvious reasons) member in the Delta Coven, has been giving motivational speeches to other dragons for several years now.

 

He believes very strongly in something he calls "Murphy's law" and almost always refuses to leave the cave (he calls this "tempting fate" and will not take a part in it).

 

Socky approved and sometimes a potato. Oyea.

 

EDITx2: And another.

 

Stonehen, despite her keen scientific mind, was thrown out of the Space Chicken cult for accusing them of covering up the discovery of a robot head on the moon. Relegated to the late-night cackle circuit, she blows the lid off conspiracies, fields jibes at her sanity with gravel-voiced aplomb, and occasionally takes time off to sneak onto historical sites with scientific gadgets she probably invented herself. Her watchword is vigilance, and one day, she's certain, she is going to save the world.

 

Ha, nice!

Edited October 29, 2010 by SockPuppet Strangler

[urusta]

I have a few approved Description, some people seemed to like those two:

 

My Deep Sea Dragon Scylla Mueta:

Plentiful are the stories told by the sailors about all kind of sea monsters, which wreak havoc to whole fleets. Many of those are cock-and-bull stories to be sure, but some of them are indeed true. They all begin with a ships boy seeing stars underneath the water and, more often than not, end with the destruction of an entire ship, by a  massive snakelike beasts - Scylla Muerta.

 

 

My Magi Dragon Faeress:

As one of the Twelve Guardian Dragons of the great Library of Magecraft, Faeress has dedicated her entire existence to the preservation of knowledge of all kinds. For knowledge in itself is a force to be reckoned with and thus feared by many. Be it fanatics who seek to destroy the Library or evil magi trying to steal some of the arcane tomes, Faeress punishes them equal. She is known for her ruthlessness thence the only acceptable punishment for those "heretics", as she terms them, is death.

 

I am always glad, if someone gives me some feedback, since english is a foreign language to me.

[Obscure_Trash]

This dragon is a complete nutcase. When he was a hatchling he almost died when falling off a tree. He hit his head so now he is a bit of a wacko.  He enjoys shouting "OOOOOGGAAA OOOOGGAAA BOOOgaaa" at hatchlings to confuse them. His hobby is licking trees.

 

Looooooool.

 

Jemal is a large dark dragon who may look vicious but is actually a kind soul who loves having fun and playing with his friends as well as pulling pranks on his enemies...before barbecuing them and chewing on their flesh and bones.

 

Seems like a pretty standard description...until the end, lol.

[littleangelamy22]

I was reviewing descriptions, and found this piece of gold...

 

Fluff the magic chicken hates the sea and also hates misty autumn days. One day, a creepy human called Jackie Paper kidnapped Fluff, luring her with sealing wax and other fancy stuff to a boat with a billowed sail. For a few pennies, Jackie would exhibit Fluff to wicked Kings and their spoiled offspring as well as to the most rotten pirates one can imagine.

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Finally, on a grey night when Jackie Paper was distracted by a girl called Cherry Lane, Fluff the magic chicken saw her chance and cast a fire spell on Jackie Paper. Since then, that little brat has never been seen again, and Fluff happily inhabited her cave to continue her peaceful life, sometimes chirping the tune of the song "Disco Inferno" by the popular Dragon musicians "The Trammps".

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And the moral of it is: A chicken lives forever, but not so little boys.

 

It's brilliant.

[spillatey]

And sometimes a potato is just awesome! I love it!

[Obscure_Trash]

And sometimes a potato is just awesome! I love it!

I demand to see more descriptions with this line in it!

 

Some from last night I really enjoyed:

 

Jinkies believed he had something of a psychological problem as he keeps hearing things, particularly the voice of a young woman calling his name. However after consulting the clan's elders about his problem he learned he was not in fact crazy, just sensitive to a rare form of temporal flux, which allowed him to occasionally pick up sounds from another reality. 

 

Happy he had a explanation for these odd events Jinkies went back to his life at the lagoon content, although he did develop an interest in these 'Scooby Snacks' he keeps hearing about.

 

Since I love Scooby-Doo, lol.

 

This chick was first seen during a thunderstorm and seemed to appear out of nowhere. It seems to be obsessed by a dragon called Sarah Connor. It calls it a "mission" to find this dragon, but to the average observer the behavior of the chick cannot be labeled anything else but obsessed. The chick asks for the whereabouts of Sarah Connor wherever it goes, but apparently has not been able to find the object of its mission - yet.

 

Supposedly the chick possesses unnatural strength, endurance and power. Rumor has it that this chick entered a cave - where a fierce gang of Black Dragons consumed fermented fruits - bare-feathered, and left dressed in all leather, leaving behind a crying dragon with a broken limb, but that must surely be drunk-talk.

 

One thing, though, is a fact - the chick has an imperturbable determination to find Sarah Connor. It looks everywhere, it will not stop, it does not take no for an answer, and if it cannot search a location now, it will be back!

 

For the last line alone. :B

 

This hatchling is the head of the Department of Diagnostics at the Princeton-Plainsboro Teaching Hospital Cave (PPTHC). It is due to the unbelievable diagnostic skills of House that the PPTHC is one of the most renowned medical institutions of Terra Draconis. House is a medical prodigy and saved countless patients from the brink of death. The chick often applies unconventional, if not immoral methods to diagnose a case, generating all kinds of trouble for his subordinates as well as his superior. House is a cynic and a narcissist and avoids relationships with other people. It is no wonder that his only friend is Dr. James Wilson, an indulgent white rooster who maintains an ambivalent relationship with House.

 

House's latest success was the diagnosis of a rare type of bacterial draconitis on a Mint Dragon. His team first assumed a wolf bite to be the cause of the infection, but if House discovered one universal medicinal truth, then that it never is Lupus.

 

If my sister played DC, she'd love this one. x3

 

But my favorite of them all?

 

Tina Mutant Ninja Turner lives in the underground parts of New York Cave ever since retiring from the music business. The hatchling tried to join a gang of turtles trained in the martial arts, but was rejected because it somehow did not put on the green gang colors. Nevertheless, it stalks the turtles everywhere and started to wear a face mask in a distinct pink and yell "Cowabunga" at the most inept times. Living underground has alienated the hatchling; its only friend is April O'Neill, a female Water Dragon working for the Water Pond Channel Network. April O'Neill reports news for Cave 6.

 

The main food source of the hatchling is a certain type of flat, baked bread topped with tomato sauce, cheese and various types of other food - except anchovies.

 

All hail TMNT! x333