Posted December 20, 2009 This is totally random, but I'm writing out like, my character's stories. Anyways, here's Jadeshine's if anyone cares to read it. ^^ Jadeshine My name is Jadeshine, loyal warrior of ThunderClan. I’m not ThunderClan by birth- my mother and father were both ShadowClan cats. You might think that ThunderClan and ShadowClan are so different they’d never be able to live together, or to learn each other’s hunting techniques, but it’s not true. I’ve gone through a lot to get where I am now, and I’m perfectly happy. Now it’s time for me to tell you my story- full of heartbreak, battles, and peace. It was my sixth moon. I had just become Jadepaw, back in ShadowClan, with Thistlepaw, my secret love and Silkpaw, my best friend. I was so happy- my mother, Petalpelt, and my father, Hawkfur watched me, so proud. I didn’t know that my parents would die that day. Anyways, my mentor, chosen by Birchstar, was sweet Whiteflower- I will never forget her; she taught me so much- had taken me out to learn how to hunt. At sunset, I was padding through the pines, following Whiteflower, carrying my first prey- a squirrel, thank you very much, I saw Thistlepaw. He was with Silkpaw and they seemed so serene, happy together. It was obvious they were together, and it broke my heart. I never knew that Thistlepaw loved Silkpaw! I stumbled towards camp, and I could hardly see for my pain. I couldn’t be angry. I would never be angry at Thistlepaw, whatever happened. I arrived in camp, and put my squirrel on the fresh-kill pile. I ignored Whiteflower’s anxious calls as I made my way back out of camp, but then I heard a wail. That got my attention. I hurried back, and saw my parent’s bodies. More pain, more pieces of my heart shattering. Petalpelt lay there, eyes closed, looking more peaceful then she had been in moons. Hawkfur lay beside her, looking just the same. I let out my own wail of anguish. How could I have not noticed? “How did they die?” I rasped to Blacktail, who was medicine cat at that time. Blacktail meowed gently, “They were ambushed by RiverClan cats.” “No... no...” I sat vigil that night, staring at the stars. Why, why, why?” I would scream in my mind. There was a skirmish soon after then. I had no injuries. It was against RiverClan, and I was fighting in a white wave of fury, knowing that each cat might have been the cat that killed my parents. It was two moons later that I saw Spiritpaw. I had been hunting alone. Whiteflower left me be those days, when the pain was too much to bear. Silkpaw and Thistlepaw had gone somewhere. Probably the Twolegplace, the Clan said. I knew that Silkpaw and Thistlepaw would be together. They had been together for so long, I no longer thought about it anymore. I just had a numb feeling. Spiritpaw was sitting in a pine, staring into the distance. The sun had lit his golden pelt to a shade of bronze, and he looked every inch the noble warrior. It was love at first sight. I called to him, and Spiritpaw jumped to the ground. He didn’t look scared of being found on another Clan’s territory. “You’re in ShadowClan territory you know.” I growled, trying to sound fierce, but I knew I looked very young for my age, like a kit. Everyone said so, with my downy fur and delicate paws. “Does ShadowClan train kits to be apprentices now?” Spiritpaw asked it mildly, with no hint of sarcasm, but he had a guarded look on his face. “For your information, I’m eight moons old.” I shot back. “Oh.” I could hold back no longer. “Will you meet me tonight?” I asked, half-hoping he would say no. Spiritpaw’s guarded look dropped, and he took a step towards me. “Of course I will. I thought you’d never ask.” He meowed, and that was the start of my relationship with Spiritpaw. I met with him for another moon, and found a warmth in him that mended my broken heart. Just a bit. Then disaster struck, and my heart bled again. Spiritpaw loved another cat, a beautiful silver she-cat, named Silverpaw. I had taken so much pain, and so much heartbreak. The loss of my first love, my parents, and now even my second love was gone. It was so hard to keep going, to move on. Yes, I know I really wanted to be a queen someday, have kits, but most of all, I wanted someone to love me, to comfort me when I was down, to visit me every waking moment when I was injured. Firepaw approached me one Gathering. He said he loved me, and I believed him more than ever possible. You would think it was inappropriate to have young cats socializing like this, but in my day, there weren’t really border fights. Cats mingled, and most of the time, different Clan cats could step into one another’s territory and probably walk away without a scratch. I met Firepaw for two moons, in which I became Jadeshine, Firepaw Firestorm, Spiritpaw Spiritset, Silverpaw Silverdawn, Silkpaw Silkflame, and Thistlepaw Thistleclaw. It was so wonderful to see Firestorm’s pelt glowing in the sunlight as he waited for me to join him, to leap across streams and play in the dappled light of the trees. I remember that last day with him so well. It was early leaf-fall, a little after the time when I was born. We were playing in ThunderClan territory, in a little meadow. Leaves were swirling around us, red, brown, gold. It was magical. Firestorm spoke his last words to me: “Jadeshine, I love you. Don’t leave me, ever.” I didn’t know then he’d leave me then. The next morning, I was planning to meet him again in ThunderClan territory. When I arrived, he wasn’t there. I decided to venture farther- straight to the camp. I slipped through the tunnel, careful not to brush my fur on the bushes, leaving scent. “It was very sudden. Yes...” I caught a few words from a she-cat. What was her name? Yes, Nightcloud. I listened some more as I hid in the shadows. “Firestorm and Silverdawn both died...” Firestorm died!? I couldn’t believe it. My heart was torn apart again. I didn’t care about Silverdawn. That was Spiritset’s problem. I ran back to camp, not even bothering to wash off the ThunderClan scent I had on me. No one had missed me. I gave myself a quick grooming, and ate a mouse. How long could I stay alive? I wanted to die, right now and then, and I would at least be able to join Firestorm in StarClan. I decided on one thing: I would become a ThunderClan cat. I wanted to honour Firestorm’s memory, how brave a warrior he was, and I would keep his spirit alive. Besides, no one seemed to want me in ShadowClan. No one even noticed where I went these days. I left that night, and sat at the ThunderClan camp entrance, waiting for the sun to rise. I entered the camp, head held high even though I was trembling on the inside. Whispers followed me. “Who is this ShadowClan cat?” “Why is she here?” At least they weren’t leaping at me claws unsheathed. I asked as politely as I possibly could to some warrior. “Could I see the leader, Dragonstar, please?” The warrior frowned. “I’m Timberfur, Clan deputy. If you have something to say, say it to me.” My breath caught. I was speaking to ThunderClan’s deputy! “I want to join ThunderClan.” The words were wrenched from me as I struggled to breathe. Timberfur’s frown deepened. “How do I know you can be trusted?” “Just- take my word for it. I’ve suffered...” Timberfur seemed to understand the desperate look on my face. “Come, and we’ll see Dragonstar.” Dragonstar was a wise cat, I could see that. Timberfur spoke quietly for a while, and Dragonstar spoke. “Jadeshine, you seem sincere. I will allow you to join ThunderClan.” “Thank you, thank you!” I could barely gasp my thanks, I was so happy. I would be the warrior Firestorm was meant to be. Well... for a moon, I struggled. I was like an apprentice, learning how to hunt. I made a good friend though, a senior warrior named Fernwhisper. Fernwhisper comforted me when I hurt inside, remembering all that happened in the past. It was a long time before I felt at peace again. One day, I was padding through the woods. ThunderClan territory was familiar to me now just as ShadowClan territory had been. Timberfur emerged from the oaks, and told me he had a visit from Aerwyn, his former mate. She had told him to move on, accept who he really loved. At first, I had no idea why he was telling me this. I mean, I wasn’t even a good friend of his! Then realization dawned- I was the one he loved! We didn’t talk about it much until the whole Clan pretty much knew. Spiritset and his new mate, Duskstripe, were really happy for me. So was Fernwhisper- I don’t know where she is now. She and her best friend, Dawnstorm disappeared awhile ago, along with several other cats from the other Clans. They haven’t been found yet. I got along really well with Timberfur. We were like Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight- fighting a lot, but in a good way. For a while, it was calm, and ThunderClan was getting along well. Then the rogues came. The battle lasted for days- the rogues seemed tireless. Fortunately, ThunderClan found the strength to conquer, and we won. For me, it was a single slash, a misplaced paw that sent me to the medicine cat’s den for a moon. I received a long slash down my back that curved around. I still have the scars. Hawkfeather and Skyfire did well helping me recover. Timberfur visited me everyday, and that cheered me up. It was very boring sitting in the medicine cat’s den, day after day, with nothing but Hawkfeather, Skyfire, and the drip of water keeping me company. At last, I went back to the warrior’s den. I was overjoyed to be back with Timberfur, and so was he to be with me. Anyways, that’s my story. I don’t know how it’s going to end, but I can guarantee it’ll be a noble death, and I will be worthy to go to StarClan. Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 O.o You guys must be having a fun fight... thanks DP. I just made it up in my spare time and decided write some more. Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 AND YOUR...DOG! oh yes we're having fun and np holly ; cool...I'm writing a tlk fanfic on one of my chars in the rp Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 WELL DUH! AND YOUR APPLE PIE WITH CHEESE AND PIECES OF DOG MEAT! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 AND YOUR CHOCOLATE PECAN PIE WITH PEANUT BUTTER BON BONS! how did this argument start anyway? Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 (edited) IT DOESN'T MATTER! IT NEVER DOES! AND YOUR BROTHER WITH CHOCOLATE PECAN PIE WITH PEANUT BUTTER BON BONS INSTEAD OF A BRAIN! pardon me, but what it "CHOCOLATE PECAN PIE WITH PEANUT BUTTER BON BONS"? Edited December 21, 2009 by yukinflake Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 meh I made something up ; chocolate pecan pie is good and so are peanut butter bon bons...the latter are cookies made at Christmas time; well not really cookies but balls of peanut butter, butter, chocolate, and rice crispies. YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE A BRAIN! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 THAT'S BECAUSE I'M A ZOMBIE! ...tell me, what's the difference between communism, socialism, and capitalism? Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 communism is a state; a body of people that have something in common...example, a district of residence, religion; joint ownership. socialism is a policy aiming at ownership of means of production and transport by the community. capitalism is a headpiece of a column, chief town, etc. ((all that from dictionary)) OH YEAH? I'M A NINJA VAMPIRE! BEAT THAT! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 O.o Oh yeah... I'M A SUPER-POWERFUL FLYING... uh... STARCLAN CAT! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 OH YEAH! I'M um... SOMETHING THAT BEATS EVERYBODY ELSE! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 hehe ; let's wait to see what yukin will say first before we do anymore silly things Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 (edited) Sure~ And I just noticed... DP... you joined a day before me yet you have like, 6, 000 more posts than I do. ^^' Edited December 21, 2009 by Hollyleaf Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 (edited) Thanks sis!/ Wait im changing Cloudtail's picture to a black cat with a white tail. And when is the next Gathering...I know I missed out on the last one cause of school and that party...but we never had it so do you guys know when? And also when are the Medicine cat going to the Moonstone/Moonpool. I was going to make Bloodstar have a clan meeting so If anyone want's their cat apprenticed or to be a warrior or elder let me know? Edited December 21, 2009 by Sinder Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 today or this week I think and np ; that's fine if you changed his pic Share this post Link to post
Posted December 21, 2009 it is today but it's going to last for this week so that other people can join in when they can. Share this post Link to post
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