Posted October 4, 2011 (edited) Username: mrmcafee Character Name: Blazing Fern of Forest (Blaze) Gender: Female Age: Matured Hatchling Dragon Kind: Red Personality: She is not like most dragons. She loves battle training, yet she tries to create rings of peace. She hates fighting, and her eyes will blaze if she is angry. She loves her friends, but she is more of a tomboy, and hopes she will one day be a warrior. Other: She can create rings of peace, if her surroundings are quite and relaxing. Many dragons in her past used her to protect themselves, she can create rings for herself. He main power is Fire/wind, creating storms of blazing winds. However, she does not use her powers unless needed for something important. (I also don't like power playing, and she won't have this power if you prefer her not.) I'm really sorry if your not still excepting people! I'm new at this! Sorry, fixed it, she can defend herself and her friends. Edited October 4, 2011 by mrmcafee Share this post Link to post
Posted October 4, 2011 Couple things but they are not bad just corrections. One: We are dealing with another person here so we are a bit busy at the moment. Two: The second sentence should be in history and well its not very accurate since so far most dragons fend for them selves. But that can be like before the mage coaght her. Three: we are accepting people and you haven't broken any rules so I would say yes but I am a mini mod meaning I send out PMs if somebody brakes the rules. you are fine. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 4, 2011 Oh, sorry. I fixed some of it, and, I guess I'll just leave you alone until you've dealt with that person. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 4, 2011 No that's not the case. she wanted to be an elf and the owner and co-owner are talking about it so You might not get approved yet but I'll tell them to look into it if they don't see it. Or if you are impaitent about it and want to join sooner, you can PM the owner which is dragon girl. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 4, 2011 (edited) I'm the person that needs to be 'dealt with'. I have edited the characters at least 6 times each and they STILL haven't approved them. This is getting ridiculous. Edited October 4, 2011 by athania Share this post Link to post
Posted October 4, 2011 ((Remember to respect each other everyone. Keep that in mind.)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 4, 2011 (edited) Username: Backup77 Character Name: Ink Gender: Female Age: Matured Hatchling Dragon Kind (Pygmey, silver, red, ect.) : Nebula Personality: Ink is normally happy and cheerful, but can be rather cold and unsympathetic, simply because she doesn't know how to show sympathy. She won't give up if she can change something, but once something is done, she knows nothing can be done about it. She is rather mature for her age, and will rarely do anything foolish. She can be quite curious, often looking for anything useful or shiny. She will often horde shiny objects, keeping coins or gems in small crevices. She can be forgetful, sometimes forgetting where she kept a small gem or gold coin, and her willingness to go see if any object is shiny enough for her horde can often get her in trouble. Other: She is adapt at making small, silver-blue, blowtorch like flames, but can't make larger flames without using up most of her energy. Edited October 5, 2011 by Backup77 Share this post Link to post
Posted October 4, 2011 Couple things but they are not bad just corrections. One: We are dealing with another person here so we are a bit busy at the moment. Two: The second sentence should be in history and well its not very accurate since so far most dragons fend for them selves. But that can be like before the mage coaght her. Three: we are accepting people and you haven't broken any rules so I would say yes but I am a mini mod meaning I send out PMs if somebody brakes the rules. you are fine. That does sound a bit mean, 9... Don't be too hard on the newbs. (I just got my bronze trophy today! So excited and I'm not a newbie anymore! ) Yes, 9 is our mini-mod, and you are fine, mrmcafee. Just try not to break any rules and you'll be fine. I like your character, but rings of peace? Ask dragongirl on that one. Hi Backup! Ink, huh? Like in MF! (magic finders) I like your char, nice detail, but what does she do with the shiny and useful things? Share this post Link to post
Posted October 4, 2011 Sorry but I have to help in any way I can, even though that's not my job but I can't help it. I was just trying to help. . Congrats. Got mine a couple days ago. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 9, what do you mean by "pms"? What do you say in those pms? I'm the person that needs to be 'dealt with'. I have edited the characters at least 6 times each and they STILL haven't approved them. This is getting ridiculous. If it is ridicolous, you are calling me and all the players here ridicolous. Are you going to keep this attitude, or wait patiently, otherwise I may not accept it at all. @Rider Shes addicted to shiny things? Thats what I am addicted to x.x. The shiny part is fine. By the way, every plan cannot work. At least page 100, then they'll start working. @Mm (If I may call you that) Blaze is a bit of a Mary Sue, could you change that? @Backup Ink needs one flaw, or two. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 (edited) Tell you about the characters? Not sarcastic but I am confused. Edited October 5, 2011 by 9pmg5665 Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 am a mini mod meaning I send out PMs if somebody brakes the rules. you are fine. ?? What do you do..? 9, you are not a security guard for gods sake! You tell people if they are going somethng wrong. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 9 meant that Mm should PM you if you didn't post in a day or so. (now you did, so thats settled) Okay, I was just being picky. I accept Backups char, provided that you edit her to have a weakness. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 I know I am not. I just I tell them if something is wrong ok, I got it. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 don't feel bad, 9... but yes, that is what you do. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 Um, I'm really sorry, but who is Mary Sue? I'm really sorry, but I don't think I read the disription of Mary Sue, and if you tell me where she is, I'll read about her. I also wondered if Hillary is a power player or not. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 (Also please forgive me if Mary Sue is not a person/dragon.) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 A Mary Sue is someone with no weaknesses (im pretty sure ) @DragonGirl Im sorry its just you seem to be picking on me WAY more then anybody else that has submitted a character. :/ Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 (edited) That's true, who is Mary Sue? nevermind, I got it. sorry walker, everythings fine now. Edited October 5, 2011 by brisingrrider Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 A Mary Sue/Gary Stu is a character that has no weaknesses, is super popular, looks perfect, etc. An anti-sue is the opposite of a sue, basically a character with no perfections, is always away from the group, etc. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2011 (edited) A Mary Sue is perfect, they don't have any flaws, looks super pretty, nothing bad every happens to them. ect. A Gary Stu is a male version of Mary Sue. Oh, Backup, Ink is in :3. @Atha Hmmm. Sorry, I'm in a cranky mood and my stupid keyboard had coke spilt on it yesterday. Stupid mistakes x.x. *pokes sister* You coke addict. Accepted . Edited October 5, 2011 by DragonGirl10188 Share this post Link to post
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