Posted December 7, 2011 (edited) @Bloody, Im not an approver either, but i think limitations to your powers are required, for example, 1. it can only work from a certain range. I.E a few yards away. 2. Can only last for a small duration of time before it wares off 3. Consumes a lot of energy. Something that limits its powers. The way it is at the moment, makes it seem like its flawless :3 Edited December 7, 2011 by TotallyDrow Share this post Link to post
Posted December 7, 2011 Now? Sorry bout that, I'm not too sure of what to do... Share this post Link to post
Posted December 7, 2011 Its better, however what is the range of her attack, and can it hit multiple or 1 target only? :3 Looking for specifics with the powers, otherwise without them the strength of the power can be unlimited :x Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 ohh. Thank you very much. Did I fix it enough? Should I add some other weaknesses? Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 Right. Now its time to wait for one of the approver's to approve your application Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 Contemplating making a 3rd character. However its an unhatched dragon > Im on the fence about it at the moment. Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 :U I would say that if my characters had ALL been adults, then you should let me find it and let one of my characters bite it :3 BUT, they're not, and I believe that vampire hatchlings can't bite eggs because they don't have the venom, so they'd just kill it ...you should still let me find it, though it can be Flu's third "child" the summary of this: I don't care what you do, but you should make a third character three characters are fun~ and I'm kind of sleep deprived right now so yeah feel free to ignore this whole post Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 Oops, sorry guys I just got bored of this rp for a while so I went and played FH. Then I come back afterwards to cheak on whats going on. Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 did Drac back into the bushes where Flu was hiding? Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 Username: Bloodykisses123 Charrie name: Ashamun Gender: Female Type of Dragon: Black Marrow Personality: Rp'ed? Powers (Read the rules): She can whisper a certain phrase and induce illusions or hallucinations into another's mind, but only for about five minutes. If she tries to go any longer, she will lose all of her energy and most likely fall unconscious. She can use this power on about five dragons at a time as long as they are within her sight. Stage (1st stage hatchie, mature, adult, ect): Mature Clan or Loner?: loner but then came into the clan? Other: Did I miss anything? ...I think it should work on only one target... Maybe two or three, but it would limit the time even further. Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 Tiffashy u can approve application's right? Yep. Dragongirl chosen me to be one of her helpers. But I don't offen cheak these OOC offen but for now on I will. Share this post Link to post
Posted December 8, 2011 Ah kk Tiffashy, Im just considering making a 3rd character. :3 @Rixie, Rawr! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 9, 2011 @Rixie, Rawr! O_O ? And awww nuuuuu Vrael ran away! T_T.... Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 He had to get away from that blood curdling shriek some how... :/ Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 oh god DX I just wrote a post to make up for my absence...AND IT HAS A LOT OF WORDS...I'm not even going to count... Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 Lols chibi, im out of idea's for both Vrael and Phayne atm X.x Mental block Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 well, vrael went off alone, maybe he'll think about stuff? Like, his ice powers or his past or his life before the clan or what his life will be like with the clan...or he could probably think about why steel did what he did...Is steel still a guy? Or was he made into a girl purely for comedic purposes? Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 (edited) Okay, I'll give this a shot. (Has been edited) Username: InariRoku Charrie name: Fuwafuwa no Tatsu, often just called Fuwa Gender: Male Type of Dragon: Pillow Dragon Personality: He is a bit on the vain side, considering every minor imperfection a major disaster. Though he can be a bit obsessive compulsive, he also has a bit of a thoughtless streak in him. When wronged he will be quick to strike vengeance and a mighty and just fashion. Other than that he is against fighting. Powers: He is able to secrete a putrid smelling mist from releasing his fur into the air thus causing other dragons to become stunned briefly and to also lose their sense of smell temporarily. There are limitations to this skill though. One is that it does not affect other Pillow dragons and the second is that when executing this attack he also ends up causing a mild rash on himself. He can also use a similar ability to escape others my releasing mass amounts of hair to block vision. Much like a smoke bomb. Wind breath. (Think bag of winds) Stage: Adult Clan or Loner: Clan Other: He has an affinity for shiny objects. Edited December 10, 2011 by InariRoku Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 (edited) He is able to shed mass amounts of tiny hairs that would cause a allergic reaction to other dragons. hmm...I don't like this. It's interesting and cool, but it would cause problems for the rest of the clan, considering there is only one other pillow dragon and she's not even in the clan (yet) MY SUGGESTION: make him secrete something that coats his fur when he wants it to, so that the enemies become allergic to the shed hairs, and it needs to wear off some time. I don't think it should be that bad, either, maybe something mild. The 'secretion' part is sort of like a gland of sorts, I would think. BUT that's just my opinion. I'm not an approver, so...yeah Edited December 10, 2011 by Chibiboru Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 well, vrael went off alone, maybe he'll think about stuff? Like, his ice powers or his past or his life before the clan or what his life will be like with the clan...or he could probably think about why steel did what he did...Is steel still a guy? Or was he made into a girl purely for comedic purposes? Lols, Vrael's already had time to think about his ice powers, his past, he had nightmares about his life before being rescued by shawnee. He thinks steel was just playing along with Vrael's mischieviousness, he doesn't realise that Steel was being serious X.x I have an idea, but i think it would be too rushed, and was planning to use it later on as the story progresses. WTB CURE FOR MENTAL BLOCK Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 well, you never know I'm just throwing out ideas and trying to help you...writer's block sucks DX Share this post Link to post
Posted December 10, 2011 hmm...I don't like this. It's interesting and cool, but it would cause problems for the rest of the clan, considering there is only one other pillow dragon and she's not even in the clan (yet) MY SUGGESTION: make him secrete something that coats his fur when he wants it to, so that the enemies become allergic to the shed hairs, and it needs to wear off some time. I don't think it should be that bad, either, maybe something mild. The 'secretion' part is sort of like a gland of sorts, I would think. BUT that's just my opinion. I'm not an approver, so...yeah Yeah I think you are right about that one. How about something like a furry "smoke bomb" for escape? (I can seriously see him freaking out over his fur after it too. X'D) I'll change it to the gland thing and possibly add the furry "smoke bomb." Share this post Link to post
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