Posted March 29, 2011 Like so, Zov? Not quite, Sand. Have the right end of the outline start right behind the head. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 29, 2011 Much better. ^^ I think a single more pale shade for the lightest areas would really make it pop, though~ loving it. <3 Share this post Link to post
Posted March 29, 2011 *Flails* Butbut the photoooo. Do you mean a whiter white or another transition shade? Share this post Link to post
Posted March 30, 2011 Whiter white. >_>; Photos are wonky, go with yer gut instinct if you're in doubt. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 30, 2011 (edited) I need some help with this. This has been the progress on it: -->-->--> and well I know there is something wrong with the tail s1 and the s2 head any advice? fixings? (Ignore the black lines on the last s2 I was going for the orange ones only >_>) Edited March 30, 2011 by Siryuki Share this post Link to post
Posted March 30, 2011 Ohkay. I tried on the gold, I really did, but apparently I can't curve tails downwards. I liked it with a bit of a flail to it. C: I also had no idea where I could put the other back leg on it, but I think the visible one turned out okay. And I didn't think the flatlines on the pillow's tail were that super important, so I left it as is. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 >3> Can I get some crit please? I don't have any wing/arms for it yet because using a mouse is really really hard. ;_; The butt feathers look tacked on, and I'm not sure what I'm going to do to fix it. Near foot is missing a toe, too. >_>; Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 Oh hax, there are a lot of you. I'll probably not get to you all in this post. wonton - in CPA you told me to not crit, so, uh, yes or no on confirmation of such? Zov - will try, thanks. LR - Some of the lines are a bit rough, and the bell just rang. Damn multimedia class, boring as . Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 Alright then. Sorry Sand, I keep doing that huh? I'd say bring that whole line up a few pixels and show the tip of the wing's first finger. LR - The shading is quite inconsistent so I ask that you leave colors out for now, as the lines need to be worked on first. You have a lot of straight lines - the underside of the neck, all along the tail, and along the chest especially. The wing arm anatomy is also a bit odd, as it looks like it's got three sections instead of two (humerus and radius/ulna). You'll probably want to merge the two middle parts of the wing arm into one. I'm also seeing jags in a lot of lines, though it's a bit hard to see them all because of the shading. The eye could do with an outline to make it more obvious.' Siryuki - Which one do you want me to crit, exactly? On all of them the curves and body position are rather unnatural-looking, with very little of the body resting on the ground even though it's not exactly got limbs or working wings. I can't really tell what's going on with the head of the second one as well... 's horns, or a mask, or what? Xbc - The previous positioning of the tail was really wonky, so this is better. However, it's hugging a bit close to the body, which kinda ruined the position of the visible leg - before, it'd looked so chill and relaxed! Have the tail curl around a bit more loosely - I couldn't find a very good match, but something more like this - and try putting the leg back in. The inner curve of the neck is very sharp and looks straightlines, so try to fix that. Make the left (our left) forearm a bit less bendy - it'll end up going almost straight down, elbow, then slightly to the right and with a lot of foreshortening. Shaj - Ah, yeah, though now I'm noticing the tail has a jag. Any way to make it curve a bit more/more naturally? Stef - Hwaugh why are you getting crit from me? @>@ Hm... butt feathers, could you give me a rundown of how exactly they're connected, maybe a quick sketch of what it looks like from the back? If they're sort of ringed around the tail, then they're currently set a bit low and seem to be chopping the tail off. As for the near toe, try adding in onto the side of the foot closest to us? It'll just be a nub and a toe pointed almost directly towards us. Fhuh I should bone up on anatomy, I had to look up what the armbones were called >___> Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 (edited) It is hard to curve it, I saw the mistake but I don`t know how I can correct it, can you may try it? Edit: Here is the orginal scetch: ungendered Edited March 31, 2011 by Shajana Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 Shaj - I'll take a crack at it this weekend, sometime when- wait, the laptop has PS as well! Heck, I can do it now. Gimme a sec. /wishes she'd noticed this sooner Sand - Looking good, though now there are flatlines. Try to smooth the curve out? The position is right, though. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 ok thank you! I really don`t know how to fix it. Yes, I love to work with Photoshop, I did the whole sprite with the program too. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 Because you're awesomeeeee, that's whyyy. I have a sketch of a proposed female from the side, though she's not as round as the male, because I drew in ink. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/lidia1232/Pigdo.jpg Though I'm thinking that even without the feathers, the tail would look weird. @_@; Do you think they're too round? Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 ? Stef - Hm. Maybe try spriting the body and tail w/o the feathers? It does seem quite chubby ^^; Sand - that works. Now extend the wing membrane on the front wing so that it attaches at a point a bit lower down on the body. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2011 Now it really looks better (may I made the tail too short). I really have to thank you for your help rhea, you are really an great artist! Share this post Link to post
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