Posted November 8, 2011 (edited) Clans of the Valley Story Come, kits. I have a story to tell, a story from long, long ago, when your mother’s mother wasn’t even born yet. Now, kits, settle down, and listen to what this old cat has to tell you… It all began seasons and seasons ago, when leaf-bare struck the lake with merciless force. Cats had nothing to eat. The prey had all gone away! No one knows what happened to the prey, to the mice and voles, to the frogs and toads… all they knew was that they were all hungry. Cats starved to death. Those who didn’t die hungry had found a way of eating the bark off the trees. Others went to Carrionplace for the disease-infected rats that roamed there. That leaf-bare was the longest and hardest in history. It lasted five moons… that in itself is a disaster. However, there was one cat, not a leader, not a medicine cat, but simply a warrior. Her name… was Darkwhisker. Darkwhisker was from ShadowClan, and a great warrior at that. Her brother was a tom by the name of Brookclaw, a tom whose name was well known in the lake. Darkwhisker had a dream, one freezing leaf-bare night. She opened her eyes to find herself to be in a forest of pines. A small stream cut through the land, and little minnows darted underneath the surface of the water. The marble gray tabby’s beautiful blue eyes darted to and fro until she caught sight of… well, herself! The mirror image of her was leading a patrol of cats she had never seen before. Parting her jaws, she realized that this was not ShadowClan. The territory had an earthy smell, and it seemed that the land was filled with prey… One cat looked at the other Darkwhisker, who had crouched down to stalk a mouse. He called her name… but her name was Darkstar, not Darkwhisker! Suddenly, it hit her. There was another territory for the Clans! A territory in a valley, she realized, as she saw the cliffs above her. She had to tell the Clan! Darkwhisker first told her brother. Brookclaw trusted her immediately, and they both went to tell their leader. After careful consideration, the leader of ShadowClan, Brindlestar, explained the dream to all the Clans at the Gathering. Many other medicine cats, with their pelts fading and eyes dull, spoke up and explained that they had had the same dream too, with Darkstar leading the patrol. A leader had spoken up, saying he saw a cat named Brookstar swimming in crystal clear rivers that were tinged with frost. It was obvious. The Clans had to go and search for the valley... and there would be two Clans instead of four, headed by Darkwhisker and Brookclaw. A few sunrises later, the Clans set off on their journey. Sadly, the journey lasted four moons. Cats died from starvation and illness- others were carried off by eagles and hawks. Cliff edges collapsed, bringing down many cats with them. Wolves raided the patrol, along with cougars stalking them at their pawsteps. It was a miracle that they found the valley. All the cats felt their chests swell with pride and happiness when they bounded over that last rock and saw their new territory. Half of it was covered with pine trees, and many could see the small streams that ran through it. The other half was covered with normal trees that were turning amber and orange with the coming of leaf-fall. As the cats padded down to their new home, the leaders gave up their positions so that Darkwhisker and Brookclaw could set up their Clans. Those who wanted to prowl in the darkest of areas, stalking prey unseen, went with Darkwhisker. Those who wanted to be constantly near water left with Brookclaw. The Clans set up their borders and began to live their life as warriors in the valley. However, young kits, the Clans will never be in peace forever… you come from DarkClan and BrookClan, but one day you will meet in battle. Your Clans are rivals, and more than one cat will unsheathe its claws for food or territory. Even I know that. Now, hush, close your eyes… and sleep well, my warriors… Plot You are a warrior from the valley. You can be from DarkClan, who stalks in the shadows, or BrookClan, the fishers and swimmers. You can also be a rogue or kittypet that has wandered too far from home. BrookClan and DarkClan are neighboring Clans, so they are bound to fight over something some day. Your story in the valley has begun… Information Here is information that you need to know before you start roleplaying: Leaders lead the Clan. They have nine lives and their name ends with “-star”. (ex. Darkstar) Deputies are the ones second in command. They have a warrior name and they take over if their leader dies or is too ill to run the Clan. A warrior can only become a deputy if they have had one apprentice. Medicine cats are the ones who heal the wounded and tend to the sick. They are not allowed to mate or fall in love. Same with their apprentice; even though the cat is young, they are not allowed to fall in love. However, they have a warrior name. Warriors are the cats who fight and protect their Clan. Their name ends in “-whisker”, “-claw”, etc. (ex. Darkwhisker) Apprentices are young cats who want to be warriors. These cats become apprentices when they are six months old (six moons old). They are trained by the warriors themselves. Their name ends in “-paw”. (ex. Darkpaw) Queens are cats who are expecting or have given birth. They stay in the nursery tending to their kits until they become six moons old. They retain their warrior name. Kits are simply kittens. They become apprentices when they’re six moons old. Their name ends in "-kit". (ex. Darkkit) Elders are cats who are crippled, blinded, too hurt to fight, etc. They do not usually fight, but they retain their warrior names. About the Clans DarkClan This Clan lives in a shady area of the valley. Pine trees cover the sky, and sun filters down from above. Their camp is a thicket of brambles and bushes. In these bushes are dens, where the elders, apprentices, warriors, queens, etc. sleep in. The medicine den is under a rock; rain has long since eroded the rock away. In the front of camp is Mossrock, where the leader speaks. In their territory run some streams where warriors could drink. The prey that hide from these warriors are birds, mice, voles, rabbits, sometimes hawks, eagles, and pheasants. BrookClan BrookClan lives in a forest much like ThunderClan did. But in this forest run rivers where cats swim and fish. Their camp consists of a mossy hollow where a very small waterfall spills from the cliff in front of the Clan. There is a somewhat large and shallow pool in front of Brooktree, where the leader speaks. The camp is made up of dens made by braiding and stringing vines and twigs together. When the trees are not bare, branches shield the Clan from view. The prey that is in their territory are fish, birds, mice, rabbits, and voles. Moonriver, where the medicine cats meet every half moon, is located closer to BrookClan than DarkClan. These cats take great pride in finding Moonriver in the first place and living so close to it. Rules -No powerplaying, flaming, cursing, etc. -People who play the leaders should watch each apprentice carefully, since you are the ones who will come up with their warrior names. -No other Clans shall be created, unless it is part of a plot that I approved. -No cat can “magically” find out another cat is evil or not. You need time for that. -My word is law, and I am the only one who could accept forms. Later on, I will put a second in command so they could keep watch over the RP when I’m busy. -Please, please. I stress this. Please use realistic names for your cats. No “Dragonpaw” or “Magicpaw”. -You can have two cats that hold powerful positions. You can have as many cats as you can handle. -Be reminded that cats cannot write or draw. Again, be realistic! -Not that many kittypets or rogues will be accepted. Remember, these cats live in a valley in the mountains. -Put “Cute Kitteh!” in the Others section of the form. Form Username: Name: Gender: Clan: Age: Rank: Appearance: Personality: History: Other: Clans DarkClan Leader Mistystar: Tabby she cat with blue eyes. Refrence: http://tigerstar7.webs.com/photos/Hawkfrost.png . She likes to gaze up at them moon, as though it were a sign from StarClan. Mistystar usually likes to be with the group, she is not laid back. Mistystar joined DarkClan after she learned how to swim in BrookClan. She felt lurking in the shadows would fit her style more than having sunshine warm her fur. (played by m) Medicine Cat Wolfsong: Long furred gray she cat with blue eyes. Reference: http://www.acc.umu.se/~zqad/cats/119894262...98925404518.jpg . Sweet, lovely Wolfsong is golden hearted and fierce. She could see illness or pain in a cat just by looking into their eyes. Wolfsong has a huge ego and temper though, and she has the bravery of a LionClan warrior. Many cats adore her though, but she will unsheathe her claws without a second thought. However, when she lets her tongue run wild, she usually regrets what she says later on. When Wolfsong was yet a medicine cat apprentice, she left for the Moonriver… in the dead of leaf-bare. Snow lashed at her face and clogged her senses… she now had realized why her mentor had stayed home. But she wanted to know what was the problem with the epidemic of greencough. Her mentor and her had tried and tried, but cats kept on getting ill. Wolfsong then learned that the illness would soon fade away… but not without killing her lovely mentor first. (Played by TMD) Medicine Cat Apprentice Honeyheart: A golden cat with light brown tabby markings. Her eyes are a dazzling night-blue navy color, and sometimes, if you look into her eyes long enough, you feel as if there's stars in them. Her fur is smooth and shines in sunlight, as if she were a StarClan cat. At night, her golden pelt makes it seem as if every star in Silverpelt were in it. A calm, gentle cat who is always taking care of her clanmates. She only snaps when in a bad mood, like after she fell into water or some of the kits got into her herb store. Born in DarkClan, she was always helping the medicine cat while she was a kit. Darkstar saw this and when she was read to be made an apprentice, she was made Medicine Cat apprentice. She always worked her hardest and best. Once she was made Honeyheart, she was so proud that she wanted to just stride up to Brookstar and blurt it out to her. But she knew she would probably get in trouble, so she didn't, but when the Gathering came, she told all of her friends in DarkClan. She had a great nose for herbs, and they hardly ever ran out of herbs. She even discovered a huge patch of herbs including catmint, coltsfoot, yarrow, borage, watermint, juniper berries, and feverfew. She took care of it all the time, making sure they always got sunlight and water. She always worries when a Clanmate gets hurt, even if it's the tiniest scratch. She always has and always will be loyal to DarkClan. (Played by Hawkie) Warriors Bluemask: Bluemask is a strange cat. She is a dark gray and white tabby with one amber eye and one blue eye. Her face is marked with dark tabby markings and so is her pelt. Her fur is medium length- not sticking to her lithe frame but not brushing the floor either. Bluemask has a tongue as sharp as her claws. She prefers to fight rather than make peace, which is a bad thing in itself. The beautiful blue tabby usually is found with a new nick in her ear or tangled with a BrookClan cat at the border. She prefers to have fish and squirrels over anything else. What Bluemask was born believing was that mighty Lionstar was her father, but passed away before she was born. Her “mother”, Emberpelt, died in front of her during a battle between BrookClan and DarkClan, in which DarkClan won. Bluemask became quite the loud and obnoxious she cat in her Clan, filled with energy, but a greatly valued and responsible warrior. (played by TMD) Apprentices Queens Kits Nightkit: Gray she cat dappled with black. Refrence: http://www.google.com/imgres?q=Egyptian+Ma...=1t:429,r:4,s:0 . Her eyes are a brighter green then that. Nightkit has long legs, made for running. She has a light build. She is a short-haired cat, but has a rather thick coat. Nightkit is very energetic, leaping to and fro to see what's going on. She often pesters the older cats, particularly Wolfsong. She really likes the medicine cat for some reason, and is constantly in her face. Despite her high energy levels, Nightkit soaks up information like a sponge. This would be really good for the rank she wants, Medicine Cat, but she has a very short attention span. Nightkit was born to Thinclaw and Sharpwhisker, both easily irritated cats that were always itching for a fight. They didn't pay much attention to their two kits, Nightkit, named for her spots that looked as black as night, or Stormkit, a silvery-grey kit. They payed much more attention to DarkClan's rivalry with BrookClan then their kits, who were sometimes half-starved so that Thinclaw could get a bit more battle training done. Nightkit was still very energetic, pestering Wolfsong when her parents told her to go away. Unfortunately or fortunately, both Thinclaw and Sharpwhisker were killed in a skirmish with BrookClan. When they died, their kits were freed from their rudeness and bad parenting. Both Stormkit and Nightkit have been living in DarkClan ever since. (played by Backup) Elders BrookClan Leader Redstar: Tortiseshell she cat with amber eyes. Reference: http://smbhwarriors.webs.com/2216546206_dd94f3e8f0.jpg . Redstar is a usually peaceful she cat. She is mellow and calm like the rivers and streams running through BrookClan territory. It is said that her voice is like honey, or as soft as a mother soothing her kit. She hardly raises her voice, but she does have a temper. She really doesn’t hold grudges, but becomes wary of the one who betrayed her instead. Redstar is said to be the legendary Bluestar’s relative. Redstar had a normal life as a warrior until she met a tom from DarkClan. His name was Spruceheart. The two fell in love at a Gathering, and had been together until Spruceheart died from a wolf attack. Redstar, known as Redclaw back then, suffered very much. It was then, two nights later, she found out that she was pregnant with Spruceheart’s kits. Filled with fear and love, Redclaw left the first kit, Bluekit, on DarkClan territory after bathing the she kit with their scent. The other kit she had is still in her Clan today. (Played by TMD) Deputy Pikeclaw: A brown tabby tom who is of standard stature. He has large green eyes. His paws are white. Pikekit has a shorter tail than most cats, but it doesn't seem to hinder him. Reference: http://warriorsobsessed.webs.com/spottedtail(better).jpg . Pikeclaw is outgoing, upbeat, and rash. He has trouble seeing bad things in his life. He's loyal to death to everyone he deems worthy. He's a loving kit and doesn't mind being friends with everyone. Pikeclaw is incredibly curious, talkative, and full of boundless energy. (Played by Kokay) Medicine Cat Willowbranch: Sandy she cat with amber eyes. Refrence: http://clanscatswarriors.webs.com/cat-2.jpg Willowbranch is a kind and loving young cat. She is swift to help others, and it takes a lot to get her angry. She is very smart, and a good teacher when it comes time to train her apprentice. She was born and raised in the clan like any other cat (pretending of course) (played by Moonbeam) Medicine Cat Apprentice Warriors Hawkflight: Dark tabby tom with amber eyes. Reference: http://www.dkimages.com/discover/previews/866/954808.JPG . Hawkflight, unlike his sister, whom he doesn’t know, is energetic and spunky. He loves every aspect of life and will do anything to protect his Clan. However, he rather question the cat that crossed the border than immediately fight them. He usually is seen swimming or running through camp, play fighting with the senior warriors. He loves the elders’ stories and someday wants kits of his own. Hawkflight was told that Redstar was his mother, but his father had died off. In a way that was true, but he believes that his father used to be Lizardstar, who Redstar was deputy to. Redstar, in order to keep her secret safe, said that this was true. Hawkflight believes that he is the only son to Redstar, and has to doubts to it. (Played by TMD) Loneear: She is a dainty blue she-cat with deep blue eyes. She is missing an ear, due to a fox attack when she had first arrived. Loneear is a strange cat. She will stay up late watching the stars by Darkclan's borders while waiting for intruders. At times her clan mates may think she is better off in Darkclan, but she can swim very fast. She hardly ever speaks, and needs a strong tom to help her with this. She left with the two clans like Pikeclaw did. As she traveled she proved needed as she helped the cats through. When they arrived at their new home, Loneear was exploring when a fox attacked, she lost her ear, but the fox went away with several scars. (Played by TMD) Queens Kits Elders Edited November 11, 2011 by TwilightMoonDragon Share this post Link to post
Posted November 8, 2011 (edited) Territories DarkClan Territories Camp http://www.rlrouse.com/pic-of-the-day/forest-clearing.jpg Mossrock http://mw2.google.com/mw-panoramio/photos/...um/44315732.jpg Outside Camp http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_EH5gtQsQrO0/TSEA...orest-57541.jpg Training Hollow http://image.shutterstock.com/display_pic_...ic-50527063.jpg Medicine Den http://www.1st-art-gallery.com/thumbnail/2...ontainbleau.jpg Small Stream http://image.shutterstock.com/display_pic_...am-14752585.jpg BrookClan Territories Camp http://www.naturewalls.org/wp-content/uplo...m_wallpaper.jpg Brooktree http://www.brumderphoto-online.com/tree_gr...ond_sjpg440.jpg Outside Camp http://forestry.ky.gov/Kentuckysstatefores...StateForest.jpg Training Hollow http://www.artilim.com/painting/d/diaz-de-...ntainebleau.jpg Medicine Den http://www.stockphotopro.com/photo-thumbs-2/AHN7GM.jpg Longstream http://www.thelensflare.com/large/streammountains_31214.jpg Moonriver http://www.featurepics.com/FI/Thumb300/200...-hike162107.jpg Characters (I am putting mine up now because I am usually on my phone and cannot fill out forms.) Username: TMD Name: Redstar (Redclaw) Clan: BrookClan Gender: She Cat Age: 29 moons Rank: Leader Appearance: http://www.warrenphotographic.co.uk/photog.../cats/04121.jpg (with amber eyes) Personality: Redstar is a usually peaceful she cat. She is mellow and calm like the rivers and streams running through BrookClan territory. It is said that her voice is like honey, or as soft as a mother soothing her kit. She hardly raises her voice, but she does have a temper. She really doesn’t hold grudges, but becomes wary of the one who betrayed her instead. Redstar is said to be the legendary Bluestar’s relative. History: Redstar had a normal life as a warrior until she met a tom from DarkClan. His name was Spruceheart. The two fell in love at a Gathering, and had been together until Spruceheart died from a wolf attack. Redstar, known as Redclaw back then, suffered very much. It was then, two nights later, she found out that she was pregnant with Spruceheart’s kits. Filled with fear and love, Redclaw left the first kit, Bluekit, on DarkClan territory after bathing the she kit with their scent. The other kit she had is still in her Clan today. Username: TMD Name: Wolfsong Clan: DarkClan Gender: She Cat Age: 20 moons Rank: Medicine Cat Appearance: http://iceclanagain.webs.com/Gray_Longhair..._by_NilgunT.jpg Personality: Sweet, lovely Wolfsong is golden hearted and fierce. She could see illness or pain in a cat just by looking into their eyes. Wolfsong has a huge ego and temper though, and she has the bravery of a LionClan warrior. Many cats adore her though, but she will unsheathe her claws without a second thought. However, when she lets her tongue run wild, she usually regrets what she says later on. History: When Wolfsong was yet a medicine cat apprentice, she left for the Moonriver… in the dead of leaf-bare. Snow lashed at her face and clogged her senses… she now had realized why her mentor had stayed home. But she wanted to know what was the problem with the epidemic of greencough. Her mentor and her had tried and tried, but cats kept on getting ill. Wolfsong then learned that the illness would soon fade away… but not without killing her lovely mentor first. Username: TMD Name: Bluemask Clan: DarkClan Gender: She Cat Age: 17 moons Rank: Warrior Appearance: Bluemask is a strange cat. She is a dark gray and white tabby with one amber eye and one blue eye. Her face is marked with dark tabby markings and so is her pelt. Her fur is medium length- not sticking to her lithe frame but not brushing the floor either. Personality: Bluemask has a tongue as sharp as her claws. She prefers to fight rather than make peace, which is a bad thing in itself. The beautiful blue tabby usually is found with a new nick in her ear or tangled with a BrookClan cat at the border. She prefers to have fish and squirrels over anything else. History: What Bluemask was born believing was that mighty Lionstar was her father, but passed away before she was born. Her “mother”, Emberpelt, died in front of her during a battle between BrookClan and DarkClan, in which DarkClan won. Bluemask became quite the loud and obnoxious she cat in her Clan, filled with energy, but a greatly valued and responsible warrior. Username: TMD Name: Hawkflight Clan: BrookClan Gender: Tom Age: 17 moons Rank: Warrior Appearance: http://warriorcatsmountainclan.weebly.com/...8208041.jpg?400 Personality: Hawkflight, unlike his sister, whom he doesn’t know, is energetic and spunky. He loves every aspect of life and will do anything to protect his Clan. However, he rather question the cat that crossed the border than immediately fight them. He usually is seen swimming or running through camp, play fighting with the senior warriors. He loves the elders’ stories and someday wants kits of his own. History: Hawkflight was told that Redstar was his mother, but his father had died off. In a way that was true, but he believes that his father used to be Lizardstar, who Redstar was deputy to. Redstar, in order to keep her secret safe, said that this was true. Hawkflight believes that he is the only son to Redstar, and has to doubts to it. Username: Kokay Name: Pikeclaw Clan: BrookClan Gender: Tom Age: 32 moons Position: Deputy Appearance: A brown tabby tom who is of standard stature. He has large green eyes. His paws are white. Pikekit has a shorter tail than most cats, but it doesn't seem to hinder him. Personality: Pikeclaw is outgoing, upbeat, and rash. He has trouble seeing bad things in his life. He's loyal to death to everyone he deems worthy. He's a loving kit and doesn't mind being friends with everyone. Pikeclaw is incredibly curious, talkative, and full of boundless energy. History: N/A Other: Username: dangershy; you can call me Hawkie, Hawkheart, or just danger. Name: Honeyheart Gender: She-cat Age: 25 moons Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice Appearance: A golden cat with light brown tabby markings. Her eyes are a dazzling night-blue navy color, and sometimes, if you look into her eyes long enough, you feel as if there's stars in them. Her fur is smooth and shines in sunlight, as if she were a StarClan cat. At night, her golden pelt makes it seem as if every star in Silverpelt were in it. Personality: A calm, gentle cat who is always taking care of her clanmates. She only snaps when in a bad mood, like after she fell into water or some of the kits got into her herb store. History: Born in DarkClan, she was always helping the medicine cat while she was a kit. Darkstar saw this and when she was read to be made an apprentice, she was made Medicine Cat apprentice. She always worked her hardest and best. Once she was made Honeyheart, she was so proud that she wanted to just stride up to Brookstar and blurt it out to her. But she knew she would probably get in trouble, so she didn't, but when the Gathering came, she told all of her friends in DarkClan. She had a great nose for herbs, and they hardly ever ran out of herbs. She even discovered a huge patch of herbs including catmint, coltsfoot, yarrow, borage, watermint, juniper berries, and feverfew. She took care of it all the time, making sure they always got sunlight and water. She always worries when a Clanmate gets hurt, even if it's the tiniest scratch. She always has and always will be loyal to DarkClan. Other: Username: Backup77 Name: Nightkit Gender: She-cat Age: Will turn 6 moons in two days. Rank: Kit, but really really really wants to be a medicine cat. Appearance: She is part Egyptian Mau. Her eyes are a brighter green then that. Nightkit has long legs, made for running. She has a light build. She is a short-haired cat, but has a rather thick coat. Personality: Nightkit is very energetic, leaping to and fro to see what's going on. She often pesters the older cats, particularly Wolfsong. She really likes the medicine cat for some reason, and is constantly in her face. Despite her high energy levels, Nightkit soaks up information like a sponge. This would be really good for the rank she wants, Medicine Cat, but she has a very short attention span. History: Nightkit was born to Thinclaw and Sharpwhisker, both easily irritated cats that were always itching for a fight. They didn't pay much attention to their two kits, Nightkit, named for her spots that looked as black as night, or Stormkit, a silvery-grey kit. They payed much more attention to DarkClan's rivalry with BrookClan then their kits, who were sometimes half-starved so that Thinclaw could get a bit more battle training done. Nightkit was still very energetic, pestering Wolfsong when her parents told her to go away. Unfortunately or fortunately, both Thinclaw and Sharpwhisker were killed in a skirmish with BrookClan. When they died, their kits were freed from their rudeness and bad parenting. Both Stormkit and Nightkit have been living in DarkClan ever since. Other: Username: mrmcafee Name: Mistystar (Mistybreeze) Gender: female Age: 20 moons Rank: leader Appearance: Reference: http://tigerstar7.webs.com/photos/Hawkfrost.png Personality: She likes to gaze up at them moon, as though it were a sign from StarClan. Mistystar usually likes to be with the group, she is not laid back. History: Mistystar joined DarkClan after she learned how to swim in BrookClan. She felt lurking in the shadows would fit her style more than having sunshine warm her fur. Other: Username:D.D. Name: Loneear Gender:She-cat Age:16 moons Rank: Warrior/queen Appearance: She is a dainty blue she-cat with deep blue eyes. She is missing an ear, due to a fox attack when she had first arrived. Personality: Loneear is a strange cat. She will stay up late watching the stars by Darkclan's borders while waiting for intruders. At times her clan mates may think she is better off in Darkclan, but she can swim very fast. She hardly ever speaks, and needs a strong tom to help her with this. History: She left with the two clans like Pikeclaw did. As she traveled she proved needed as she helped the cats through. When they arrived at their new home, Loneear was exploring when a fox attacked, she lost her ear, but the fox went away with several scars. Other: Username: Moonbeam22 Name: Willowbranch Gender: Female Age: 17 moons Rank: Medicine Cat Appearance: Willowbranch Personality: Willowbranch is a kind and loving young cat. She is swift to help others, and it takes a lot to get her angry. She is very smart, and a good teacher when it comes time to train her apprentice. History: She was born and raised in the clan like any other cat (pretending of course) Other: Edited November 10, 2011 by TwilightMoonDragon Share this post Link to post
Posted November 8, 2011 Hi! I'm soupnazi and I'll be doing some critique on your roleplay since you don't yet have any. However, there was this one cat, not a leader, not a medicine cat, but simply a warrior. Having "this" in there makes the sentence sound more informal, and makes me think of some college-aged kid. I recommend deleting it to keep with the tone. She opened her eyes to find herself be in a forest of pines. "to be", not just "be". Many other medicine cats, with their pelts fading and eyes dull, spoke up and explained that they had the same dream too, with Darkstar leading the patrol. It might sound silly, but it should be "had had", not just "had". A leader had spoken up, saying he saw a Brookstar swimming in crystal clear rivers that were tinged with frost. This may be because of my inexperience with Warriors, but what is "a Brookstar"? They cannot mate or fall in love. Same with their apprentice; even though the cat is young, they cannot fall in love. It's hard to tell if you mean they physically can't fall in love, or if they are not allowed. Could you please specify? The prey that hide from these warriors are birds, mice, voles, rabbits, sometimes hawks, eagles, and peasants. I think you mean "pheasants", not "peasants". At the end of the intro, you say that everyone's going to fight; but other than that, there doesn't seem to be an actual plot. I recommend being more clear on what the plot is. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 8, 2011 (edited) Okay, I will make myself clear on these points. <3 Edited. Edited November 8, 2011 by TwilightMoonDragon Share this post Link to post
Posted November 9, 2011 Okay, then! The roleplay looks ready for approval, so... approved! Have fun roleplaying. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 9, 2011 Wow! Only a day! : o Anyone want to join, and thank you! Share this post Link to post
Posted November 9, 2011 Pikeclaw was older now. He had left RiverClan. Yewstar was too much for him. He didn't like the tom, but leaving his family had still been tough. Even as a tom, he still acted kit-like. He knew his energy was sickeningly limitless. It left even the most adventurous of apprentices tired. Worse so, was his rashness at times. One time in particular, he remembered a particularly rough leafbare. He had seen a fish in the partially frozen river. Still young, and hungry with only the best intentions for his Clan, he had jumped into the freezing water. Though he suffered a bad bout of greencough, he survived. It was a time he looked back on with mild happiness, a simpler time. Now, he was Deputy of a new Clan. BrookClan reminded him of his old Clan in many respects. It was like home, without his family. He was sitting on the rocks, watching the river crash down in front of him. He needed time to think about things. A cat, his former mentor, had become a legend. Not many cats remembered him, he doubted that any other cat than himself recalled the deeds of the great Yellowstar. Yewstar had killed his mentor that night, but Yellowstar had left Pikeclaw as his legacy. Trained to fight like a wildcat, and with little regard to the Warrior Code in such instances, Pikeclaw was well known and very respected. Or, perhaps, the word was feared. Whether other cats feared him or respected him, it didn't matter. All that mattered was that he was near to his goal and soon he would fulfill a life akin to his master's legacy. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 9, 2011 The lovely tortiseshell looked down at the pool in front of camp, studying the stars in front of it. She pressed a paw to the surface, disturbing the serene night sky and half filled moon. Redstar turned her amber eyes upward to the trees, which were green with life, and then to the sky. StarClan should give them peace for this moon, she figured. Spotting her deputy, she padded up to him and blinked. "Ah, there you are," she greeted, dipping her head. "I was wondering where you got to... anyway, I wish for you to go on border patrol with Hawkflight." she cast her amber gaze across the clearing. The dark tabby who was her son was eating a fish at the freshkill pile. "Are you available now?" Share this post Link to post
Posted November 9, 2011 (edited) Sorry that War of the Roses is dead. *reads Kokay's post* Is this a sequel? Username: Backup77 Name: Nightkit Gender: She-cat Age: Will turn 6 moons in two days. Rank: Kit, but really really really wants to be a medicine cat. Appearance: She is part Egyptian Mau. Her eyes are a brighter green then that. Nightkit has long legs, made for running. She has a light build. She is a short-haired cat, but has a rather thick coat. Personality: Nightkit is very energetic, leaping to and fro to see what's going on. She often pesters the older cats, particularly Wolfsong. She really likes the medicine cat for some reason, and is constantly in her face. Despite her high energy levels, Nightkit soaks up information like a sponge. This would be really good for the rank she wants, Medicine Cat, but she has a very short attention span. History: Nightkit was born to Thinclaw and Sharpwhisker, both easily irritated cats that were always itching for a fight. They didn't pay much attention to their two kits, Nightkit, named for her spots that looked as black as night, or Stormkit, a silvery-grey kit. They payed much more attention to DarkClan's rivalry with BrookClan then their kits, who were sometimes half-starved so that Thinclaw could get a bit more battle training done. Nightkit was still very energetic, pestering Wolfsong when her parents told her to go away. Unfortunately or fortunately, both Thinclaw and Sharpwhisker were killed in a skirmish with BrookClan. When they died, their kits were freed from their rudeness and bad parenting. Both Stormkit and Nightkit have been living in DarkClan ever since. Other: She's a really cute kitteh, and likes to run and jump and play! And Stormkit is up for grabs. Edited November 9, 2011 by Backup77 Share this post Link to post
Posted November 9, 2011 ((Accepted! And it's okay that War of the Roses is dead... ^w^ Nightkit can pester Wolfsong, if you'd like..?)) Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 Username: mrmcafee Name: Mistystar (Mistybreeze) Gender: female Age: 20 moons Rank: leader Appearance: Reference: http://tigerstar7.webs.com/photos/Hawkfrost.png Personality: She likes to gaze up at them moon, as though it were a sign from StarClan. Mistystar usually likes to be with the group, she is not laid back. History: Mistystar joined DarkClan after she learned how to swim in BrookClan. She felt lurking in the shadows would fit her style more than having sunshine warm her fur. Other: Mistystar is a cute kitteh in DarkClan. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 ((Yay!)) Mistystar scanned the camp. Patrols were out, the Clan was fed, so there wasn't much to do! Mistystar bounded up to Bluemask, her tail twitching a bit. "Hi!" Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 ((<3 Can I ask you a favor, m? Can you post a bit more? <3)) Bluemask was busy chasing a small bug out of the warrior's den, her tail lashing as her blue and amber eyes focused on the intruder. She leapt again, yowling, as she squashed it. Smirking, she rubbed her paw on the soft floor of the den. "Serves you right, bug..." she looked up to see Mistystar, her leader. Sitting up, she tried to make her previously fluffed up fur flat once more. "Good morning Mistystar." Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 (edited) Nightkit woke up and yawned. A shaft of sunlight streamed into the nursery, getting into her tiny green eyes, causing her to blink. Realizing it was morning and that Wolfsong would probably be awake and have lots of new things to teach her, Nightkit leaped up from the ground. "Can I go out can I can I can I?" she asked one of the queens frantically. "Yeah, sure," the queen said absentmindedly. "Just don't bug the warriors!" the queen added, but Nightkit was already shooting out of the nursery. When she got out of the nursery, she headed straight for the medicine cat den in a flash of gray. "Wolfsong!? Are you here are you here are you here!?" she said as she reached the medicine cat den. ((Oh, and Stormkit is up for grabs )) Edited November 10, 2011 by Backup77 Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 Wolfsong had been seperating the yarrow from the rest of the herbs. There was a deathberry bush growing just out of the camp, and she wanted the yarrow handy just in case. The long furred gray and white she cat lifted her blue eyes from her herbs as Nightkit came to the medicine den. Purring in amusement, she tipped her head and nodded. "Yes, Nightkit." she mewed, getting up and walking up to the she kit. She licked her on the head. "What is it that you want, young one?" Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 Username:D.D. Name: Loneear Gender:She-cat Age:16 moons Rank: Warrior/queen Appearance: She is a dainty blue she-cat with deep blue eyes. She is missing an ear, due to a fox attack when she had first arrived. Personality: Loneear is a strange cat. She will stay up late watching the stars by Darkclan's borders while waiting for intruders. At times her clan mates may think she is better off in Darkclan, but she can swim very fast. She hardly ever speaks, and needs a strong tom to help her with this. History: She left with the two clans like Pikeclaw did. As she traveled she proved needed as she helped the cats through. When they arrived at their new home, Loneear was exploring when a fox attacked, she lost her ear, but the fox went away with several scars. Other: She is a cute kitteh and would like a mate in BRookclan Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 (edited) Username: Moonbeam22 Name: Willowbranch Gender: Female Age: 17 moons Rank: Medicine Cat Appearance: Willowbranch Personality: Willowbranch is a kind and loving young cat. She is swift to help others, and it takes a lot to get her angry. She is very smart, and a good teacher when it comes time to train her apprentice. History: She was born and raised in the clan like any other cat (pretending of course) Other: She is in BrookClan and she is a cute kitteh! Edited November 10, 2011 by Moonbeam22 Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 ((D.D, accepted, but Moonbeam, you forgot to add a password into your form. D.D, what Clan is Loneear in?)) Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 Pikeclaw's ear twitched as he heard his leader speak to him. A patrol then. He scowled slightly and stood up. "Of course, Redstar." He replied. As a kit, his voice had been squeaky at best. As an adult, it was still fairly high pitched, but it had gained a wiser tone. He stood now, looking to where Redstar was headed. Towards her son. He withheld an indignant scoff at her choice, and padded along after her. "Redstar, running prey is beginning to get scarce and there are yet some cats who struggle with fishing. Perhaps we should make a move to gain more territory from DarkClan. I am willing to lead the patrol." Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 "Nice catch, Bluemask," Mistystar smirked. "Good morning. So, uh, ever wanted to be a deputy?" Mistystar shook her head at her own foolishness. What a stupid question! "Er, I mean, just wondering. I'll have to name a deputy soon and, you are the best warrior in the clan!" Mistystar found herself chuckling at the thought. DarkClan needed more warriors! "Not that it would be you, yet, I need to know." Share this post Link to post
Posted November 10, 2011 (edited) ((Oooh oooh! Warriors RP! *obsession* Mustjoiiiiinnnnnnn.... Username: dangershy; you can call me Hawkie, Hawkheart, or just danger. Name: Honeyheart Gender: She-cat Age: 25 moons Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice Appearance: A golden cat with light brown tabby markings. Her eyes are a dazzling night-blue navy color, and sometimes, if you look into her eyes long enough, you feel as if there's stars in them. Her fur is smooth and shines in sunlight, as if she were a StarClan cat. At night, her golden pelt makes it seem as if every star in Silverpelt were in it. Personality: A calm, gentle cat who is always taking care of her clanmates. She only snaps when in a bad mood, like after she fell into water or some of the kits got into her herb store. History: Born in DarkClan, she was always helping the medicine cat while she was a kit. Darkstar saw this and when she was read to be made an apprentice, she was made Medicine Cat apprentice. She always worked her hardest and best. Once she was made Honeyheart, she was so proud that she wanted to just stride up to Brookstar and blurt it out to her. But she knew she would probably get in trouble, so she didn't, but when the Gathering came, she told all of her friends in DarkClan. She had a great nose for herbs, and they hardly ever ran out of herbs. She even discovered a huge patch of herbs including catmint, coltsfoot, yarrow, borage, watermint, juniper berries, and feverfew. She took care of it all the time, making sure they always got sunlight and water. She always worries when a Clanmate gets hurt, even if it's the tiniest scratch. She always has and always will be loyal to DarkClan. Other: Cute Kitteh! Edited November 10, 2011 by dangershy Share this post Link to post
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