Poetry on Dragoncave

[Lycanblood]

Hey guys.

 

I guess I'm rather new here, but I've been doing several dragon descriptions already.

 

I enjoy doing them, and write them in the form of poetry. Through such poems,I give my dragons life and a personality. Quite of them use poetry. I was wondering if anyone would like to share their poetry over here, anyone care to share?

 

Also, I noticed that people are making assumptions about poetry which shouldn't be made. For example, they attack my use of words without proper knowledge on it themselves. Someone rejected my poem on D'Nagra, saying it was "lip" and not "lips". o.0 Also, I have had people rejecting my poems simply because I did not put a question mark at the back of a statement. Even though the question began with "why", it was meant to be a thought of the dragon, and least of all a question.

 

Anyway, forgive my rant on people, and I did not mean to be nasty to people who helped by attempting to correct my mistakes. It is great that they helped. I was wondering if anyone here would care to begin a little topic for dragon poetry, if one isn't here already.

 

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Edited April 5, 2012 by NixAyum

[Kittenshy-Plush]

Hey guys.

 

I guess I'm rather new here, but I've been doing several dragon descriptions already.

 

I enjoy doing them, and write them in the form of poetry. Through such poems,I give my dragons life and a personality. Quite of them use poetry. I was wondering if anyone would like to share their poetry over here, anyone care to share?

 

Also, I noticed that people are making assumptions about poetry which shouldn't be made. For example, they attack my use of words without proper knowledge on it themselves. Someone rejected my poem on D'Nagra, saying it was "lip" and not "lips". o.0 Also, I have had people rejecting my poems simply because I did not put a question mark at the back of a statement. Even though the question began with "why", it was meant to be a thought of the dragon, and least of all a question.

 

Anyway, forgive my rant on people, and I did not mean to be nasty to people who helped by attempting to correct my mistakes. It is great that they helped. I was wondering if anyone here would care to begin a little topic for dragon poetry, if one isn't here already.

 

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In my opinion, there's no real correction for poetry. Everyone writes differently and you never know if a word or misspelling was intentional. But I digress...

 

I'd love to hear some of your poetry! If I can find some of my old ones I'll post one here as well.

[Lycanblood]

The water shows it's vibrant hues,

the tides are coming faster.

A head bobs up, nostrils spew

lightest spray and laughter

Her fins leap waves of merry,

her joy knows no limits.

Worry not for the purely happy,

but for those stupidly timid.

 

For my Two finned Bluna

[Kittenshy-Plush]

Well done! Nice job! I envy people who can make their poems rhyme. XP Okie here's one from me.

 

Porcelain Doll

 

The curls of her hair rested beautifully on her shoulders as the sun appeared through my window in the early morning.

Till I rested my head on my moonlit pillow.

She’s there.

Sitting her life away.

Her emerald dress becoming dull.

Her white ruffles slowly yellowing.

But what always struck me was her eyes…

Those ugly, dark, vacant marbles that never closed.

 

Sort of a different style of poetry.

[Lycanblood]

omg that was awesome, and creepy at the same time. You write most beautifully. When did u start doing poetry? I can see you've been practicing on it for quite a while!

[BlazingPhoenix]

Look, there's a Pygmy

Almost hawk-like it flys

Free as an eagle.

[Lycanblood]

Ahhhh....another one on dragons!

 

a great way to express the pygmy, never thought of dragons as being carefree before! Here's one of mine:

 

Broken slumber,

troubled tides.

Awakens anger,

Deep inside.

Eyes crack from weary sleep,

Amber pupils gaining life.

A thousand years have passed too quick,

this dragon is not satisfied.

 

On my defender dragon

[BlazingPhoenix]

That is good! I don't have any more of my own though... But yours is great! Good way to describe Guardians.

Edited April 6, 2012 by BlazingPhoenix

[XxdragicexX]

On the wings of an eagle,

My love for you flies.

Soaring higher and higher,

And touching the skies.

 

I reached up above,

And pulled a star from the sky.

To place it within,

Your precious minds eye.

 

To dwell there forever,

As my love for you.

On the wings of our love,

Enduring and true.

 

I honor you my darling,

With all that I am.

Please darling please,

Will you be my girl?

 

There are so many things,

My heart wants to say.

I love you sweetheart,

There is no other way.

 

A non dragon poem I wrote this 2 years ago.

[Lycanblood]

Oh gosh that's so sweet! I like that poem, what inspired you to write it?

 

I also like poems like "New feet within my Garden Go" by Emily Dickinson

 

New feet within my garden go,

new fingers stir the sod.

A troubadour upon the elm,

betrays the solitude.

 

New children play upon the green,

new weary sleep below.

and still the pensive spring returns,

and still the punctual snow!

 

memorized this for drama lol

[girlfairy76]

I suck at poetry. This is WAY better than mine.

[Lycanblood]

Not always. People will find a flair in poetry at some point or another. For all you know, looking at the poems here may spark up the poetry in you Then again, you might be better than us already!

[girlfairy76]

No I stink. The one I did in 2nd grade didn't make sense >~<

[Lycanblood]

haha post it and let me see!

[girlfairy76]

I don't remember... It's hidden in one of the boxes. I do know it was about the Bookfair

[Lycanblood]

lol! oh and your avatar is adorable btw! how did u animate it?

 

THis one is on my red dragon (a very evil character lol)

 

Think of me,

Think of lies,

Think of all that you despise.

Think of death,

Think of sorrow,

and how you'll feel if you're gone tomorrow.

Because that's what I'm meant to do.

Cause death to all the dreary fools.

[SunStar17]

Wings dance on the sand

And deep are the waves on the land

As she plays smooth and sweet

While the sun and sea meet

 

Night falls like a flower

And deep in the distance stands a tower

Where she makes her way that night

And flies far from my sight

Into the starry sky

Edited April 7, 2012 by SunStar17

[Lycanblood]

ahh...a dragon?

 

I don't quite understand the "soon the sand" part though. Very nice idea, putting yourself into the poem, rather than simply a spectator or third person view

[girlfairy76]

Umbre animated it

[Lycanblood]

that is so cool. I have never been good with the computer, he must be a genius! what program did he use?

[girlfairy76]

Umbre is a she. You can request an avatar from her. I don't know what program she used.

[Sundew]

I wrote one awhile ago, but it isn't about a specific dragon, but all Vampires in general:

 

Bite.

 

Sink your teeth into the

Flesh.

 

Feel the change.

 

Feel the kill.

 

Feel the venom pierce the

Shell.

 

Feel the morph.

 

Sense the shift.

 

Watch the brown of rot replace the

Life.

 

Bite.

 

Risk the pain of

Letting go the

Life that you have tried.

 

Feel the pulse.

Feel the pulse

Breaking free of

Its cage.

 

Bite.

 

Toss away the

Fragments of

Success.

 

Pick up the pieces. The damage is done.

 

Bite.

[Lycanblood]

oh cool, this really makes me think twice about getting my vampire to bite another egg! You all really have a flair for this.

 

Here's one on my vampire, D'Nagra :

 

The darkness of the night,

embraces this moving shadow whole,

the sky is dull, lacking life,

drained by his steady growth.

His great wings of velvet,

they shine ever more vibrant,

pale corpse of a man at his feet.

Woe betide, the prey is mine!

says the lips of brightest crimson.

[Lycanblood]

He's aging.

Slow, it's true,

But he's aging.

Orange scales once glimmering,

now a sheet of coppery rust.

The tall crest upon his head,

sadly drooping in sea breeze.

But his worst fear is not death,

it's that nobody will mourn him.

He's aging.

[XxdragicexX]

@Lycanblood My 5th grade love.