Posted February 20, 2010 (edited) In The land of the seven Ninja villages, Konohagakure, Kirigakure, Sunagakure, Otogakure, and others, evil arises, and it's up to Naruto Uzumaki to stop it! Create your own characters to accompany him on his Epic journey to save the nations! It will be a Breath-Taking battle between Elite Konoha Citizens, called Shinobi, and the Akatsuki. The Akatsuki are a gang of S-class criminals bent on WORLD DOMINATION!(Had to put that there .png) Some joined for unknown reasons...Mainly for killing. The war will be taking place in May of 2010. All the while, the Akatsuki leader, Pein(Or Pain, as in the Manga), is plotting Naruto's death! Help Naruto put together the puzzle that could change his future, and his life. It's Do or Die, Now or Never! Who's side will you choose, Naruto's or The Akatsuki's? It's all up to you, my friends. FORM: NAME: AGE:(15 or 16 ok) GENDER: STYLE:(wind, fire, water, earth, or lightning) OTHER INFO:(anything that might have effect on the story) FAVORITE WEAPON: APPEARANCE: RULES: No Powerplaying(acting super powerful) No Spamming(Stupid Pointless Annoying Messages) No flaming(being mean to others. In real life I mean.) No profanity(Make it PG-13, all right?) Emora Wants: ANY QUESTIONS YOU HAVE, PM ME ASAP!!!! PAY ATTENTION TO ANYTHING IN CAPS!!!! JOINED WITH FORM: Emoragirl17: NAME:Inate AGE:16 GENDER:Female STYLE:Water OTHER INFO:Is jinchuriki of the joobi(ten tails vampire wyvern),Tobi's former pupil,Naruto's girlfriend FAVORITE WEAPON:Stick which transforms into sword by command NAME:Rorora AGE:16 GENDER:Female STYLE:Fire OTHER INFO:She is Deidara's younger step-sister, is in the Akatsuki, and gets along well with friends of her brother. FAVORITE WEAPON:Explosives APPEARANCE:Short blonde hair, worn over her left eye, T-shirt with a skull, sweat pants, blonde tail and neko ears. NAME:Nezumi AGE:16 GENDER:Female STYLE:Water OTHER INFO:Sakura's cousin on her mother's side of the family. FAVORITE WEAPON:Kunai APPEARANCE:Long silver hair, tail, and neko ears, T-shirt with O_o on it, shorts NAME:Sora AGE:16 GENDER:Female STYLE:Earth OTHER INFO:She comes from the legendary Vampire Village FAVORITE WEAPON:Fangs APPEARANCE:Medium brown hair, worn over her right eye, skinny jeans, black leather jacket NAME:Siren AGE:15 GENDER:Female STYLE:Lightning OTHER INFO:She is Sora's birth sister FAVORITE WEAPON:Fangs APPEARANCE:Short blonde hair, yellow bow at the top of her head, white T-shirt with a drop of blood printed on it, mini skirt dragonflypie: Name:Lorreta Age:15 Gender:F Style:Water Other Info: deaf Job - assasin Favorite Weapon: huge sword type thing Appearence: light brown hair, green eyes, purple dress, midnight-blue scarf tied around mouth, black boots, fair complexion. DarkPanther: NAME: Jade AGE:(15 or 16 ok)15 GENDER: Female STYLE:(wind, fire, water, earth, or lightning) Lightning OTHER INFO:(anything that might have effect on the story) FAVORITE WEAPON: Sword/Kunai APPEARANCE: Dressed in all black, with mask over face, light blue eyes and black boots and has short brown hair. Edited September 22, 2011 by Emoragirl17 Share this post Link to post
Posted February 20, 2010 Again? I'm proud of you emora!! <3 Dun give up just yet! Now, in the past, we did tell you to start researching for your roleplays... And this evil isn't enough to describe evil. What kind of evil? Where is this? When is this? Who is Naruto? And does this revolve around one character? You need a plot and some more information. Or read the rules for roleplays... >.> <.< Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 THANX 4 DA SUPPORT I will tell you dat this is for ALL Narutards like ME So...they should know what I am talkin about... Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 *Facepalm* Words escape me. It's worse than Ryuu's. Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 I forgot what Ryuu's looked like lol. Anyways, emora: You can't just say that and expect those Narutards to remember everythinhg from what they have watched, nor how to start out, seeing that nothing is posted in the first post. What I'm saying is that we don't know who Naruto or Pein is, or the Akatsuki or what Konoha is, even. We don't know where this takes place, or what kind of evil is lurking, or how we are to help the characters to fulfill whatever. In fact, I lost almost all of my knowledge on the Naruto world. Before we actually start fixing up the errors, we need something to fix the errors from; and from what we see in the first post, it's basically nothing to fix because of all that information you hid from us. So, yeah Anyhow, you have to edit the first post with all the answers to the questions people will bombard you with x] Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 You can't just rely on Narutards either, what if your the only one? What if those that don't know Naruto wish to join? Will you just shun them because they aren't Narutards? And what if another Narutard wishes to know if this happens at the same time or in another time? Your not telling any of this. Also, if this happens at the same time as it is in the Anime right now, then add some characters that can be chosen, like Sakura, Naruto, Lee and the others. Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 I'm so tempted to spoil how the Naruto vs Pein fight ended. Muwahahahaha! *has read the manga* Anyway... I don't care whether Narutards join or not. I'm not going to approve this as it lacks any detail and proper grammar. I know what the world is like and all, but others might not. So... Describe the world of the shinobi please. Like... What countries are there? And describe the ninja villages? What's Akatsuki? Who are Naruto and his friends? What's a jutsu? Et cetera. Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 DarkLorienne:NOOOOOOO Ulthor:...... Konayuki of the Spirits(1st said):well it never really tells you WHEN Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 You're not getting this approved, then. So much for your dream. Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 well... I can't just say that the time period is in 1946 or something... Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 You know, if you don't listen to people who give you advice, or even a approver that says you need to improve stuff, then this RP will never happen. Share this post Link to post
Posted February 27, 2010 You added the time period, that's good. But it still lacks many things. We don't know WHERE it is. As in, where is this whole RP taking place in? We probably need a map, or something... Or a long list of those jutsus to use. Also, we dunno who the Aktsuki (as DL said) or who Pein is. And now that this is in 2010, are there any major changes? New technology, perhaps? An advance in weaponry? More invented jutsus (NUUUUU THERE ARE TOO MUCH ALREADYYYYYY)? @DL: TELLMETELLMETELLMETELLMETELLMETELLMEPLZ 8'D Share this post Link to post
Posted February 28, 2010 Yeah, you can't just make a plot and expect everyone to know it just because it's a well known series. Not many people want to roleplay something exactly like what they read anyway. At least while I roleplayed Naruto, I went off on my own adventures only lightly basing off the canon plot. Instead of a copypasta of Kishimoto's work, why not make your own? Piece it together from other stories. My roleplay was inspired a lot by D.Gray-Man but it's got nothing to do with the series in general. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 13, 2010 Ok, look at other plots. See the length that takes up like, who knows how many lines? You need a literate plot with grammar and spelling. And, remember, SPACES AFTER YOUR PERIODS. Damn that sounds wrong. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 13, 2010 I like it, i've always loved naruto but a story maybe,weapons,styles,jutsus and a bigger plot might make this much better. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 18, 2010 I REALLY need Narutard advice for my 2nd try at this Share this post Link to post
Posted March 18, 2010 You've been given information. Make something from it. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 18, 2010 Oh yeah and Pein is not the leader. Haha, manga and Anime media Share this post Link to post
Posted March 18, 2010 Stop. Saying. Naroutard. Like. You're. Proud of it. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 18, 2010 (edited) Oohhh! A Naruto roleplay?! But... It'll be boring if it's just a copyof Kishimoto's work. Be more... Original! And we ARE proud of being Narutards! Edited March 18, 2010 by UchihaAce Share this post Link to post
Posted March 19, 2010 In your last try, emora, me and slifer-oniisan told you to look up some stuff on wikipedia or google. From what I have seen on the first post, you didn't. Try the Internet. Share this post Link to post
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