Posted October 15, 2012 Ivan Danko (s1 chick) Ivan Danko is captain in the Russian Cave Department of Internal Chick Affairs, the MCWD, and Moscow Cave's toughest detective. During an attempt to arrest the infamous Black Market Dragon Viktor Rostavili, Viktor killed Danko's partner and escaped to the United Caves, where he was arrested for other crimes by Art Ridzik, Detective-Sergeant of the Chicago Cave Chick Police Department (CCCP). . Danko was ordered to escort Viktor back to Moscow Cave, but Viktor managed to escape custody. Despite all cultural differences (crime is organized, police is not), Danko and Ridzik share a common goal - to arrest Viktor and bring him to justice. And to release the tension and and stress - with vodka! Accept: Abstain: Very interesting, but I'm not sure if that reference to alcohol there at the end is allowed. Accept: Abstain: A Moscow chick . Not sure about vodka... Abstain: Russia doesn't exist in the DC World. Accept: Nice Chicken. Accept: --- April Eagle (s2 female black hatchling) April Eagle is the daughter of Commander Eagle, the highest ranking officer of the Cavalry Command. Along with Saber Rider, Fireball and Colt, April serves as a Star Sheriff. Star Sheriffs uphold the law in the "New Frontier", an area of remote caves. Lately, the New Frontier has been targeted by attacks of the Outriders, mischievous creatures under the leadership of Nemesis, dark entity and Overlord of the Phantom Zone. . April constructed an attack carriage which proves to be very helpful in the struggle to fend off the Outriders. April enhanced the fighting capability of a regular carriage by attaching an iron rod to the vessel, enabling the carriage to ram Outrider vehicles, destroying them in the process. The enhancement proved to be so successful that the carriage was nicknamed after it - it is called "Ramrod". Accept: Accept: Accept: COWBOY DRAGONS <3 Accept: Share this post Link to post
Posted October 16, 2012 (edited) I never expected Hey Listen the Mysfit Pygmy's description to get any accepts, I just entered it to give anyone who got the joke a chuckle. Or a moan of anguish. I guess some people were not amused. Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Hey listen! Accept: Shut up, Navi. Reject: Accept: Accept: Ahahahahahah. . . I can see how annoying he is. Reject: EPIC. FAIL. Meaness aside, this is-i'm not even going to bother to repsond... Reject: Edited October 16, 2012 by Flamingo Share this post Link to post
Posted October 16, 2012 Lurking this thread made me long ago go on a writing spreed. Now I've described a couple more dragons to get through a terrible writer's block I'm currently having. Shaimoon. A violent snow storm was hitting the large mountain range at DNH's Dragon Reserve but Shai didn't seem to mind it. Like a river, he rippled through the winds and snowflakes, cutting through them like an eel. As he was flying dangerously across the spiky stones and treacherous ice along the cannon, he saw something. A human and two dragons, lost and about to freeze to death. The girl was trying to move one of the bright breasted wyverns, but he seemed to have given up. Shai doubted for a moment, he was elusive and mysterious, since most of his specie had been hunted nearly to extinction in past ages, but he couldn't just let those three die. After making up his mind, the silver dragon descended and surrounded the trio with his body, conjuring a magic shield to keep them warm. The girl looked up, and her eyes shone with wonder. "I thought you were a legend" she whispered weakly. "We are." he responded gently into her mind, a silent plead to never reveal their existence to anyone. Accept: Accept: I'm really not too happy about that one, but the space was very limited for what I wanted to tell. Pisces Vela. "Pisces or Vela Vela or Pisces" Thought the young nebula dragon, unable to decide which constellation was the most adequate to show in her wings. She kept her eyes fixed on the sky, studying the patterns carefully and thoughtfully. Pisces was magnificent, elegant and tidy, an intense blue spiral with a flashy white and gold center. While Vela was chaotic, a wild net of fiery red and neon blue, aggressive and violent. Both were impressive in their own way. But which to show Pisces would make her look gentle and traditional, it would attract calm and serious mates. However, Vela would make her look ferocious and adventurous, and the males that would look at her would be valiant and careless. She needed to choose sensibly unless she wanted to attract the wrong type of attention, or no attention at all. "And why should I have to care about what type of males I attract" she wondered stubbornly. Piscis Vela chose to display both constellations on her wings. Accept: Accept: This one I like more. ^^ Share this post Link to post
Posted October 16, 2012 (edited) @Tj The Noble DESCRIPTION: TJ The Noble seems to think he deserves to be the king of the land. His logic is that he is somehow related to TJ09, the mysterious deity that formed the land of Dragcave, since his identification code is 'tj9JJ'. However, nobody really minds him, even though he often proclaims orders for everyone to follow. Secretly, down deep, TJ The Noble feels insecure, and he is worried that nobody will accept him. What he doesn't know, though, is that he is extremely annoying, and that the other dragons will gladly be his friend if he would stop telling everyone and everything that he is the lord and they are his servants. COMMENTS: Accept: Accept: Accept: Reject: It breaks character quite a bit. You probably shouldn't mention the codes or moderators and sitename. Accept: @ the reject: I understand your concern, but look around. Seriously. There are DOZENS upon DOZENS of descriptions approved that mention other users or mods by name. Besides, I refrained from calling TJ09 a person. I said he was a deity. That meant he was like a god. Seriously. "You probably shouldn't mention the codes or moderators and sitename" A ) What's wrong with mentioning codes? Lots of people mention and name their dragons after codes. It's part of the game, so why shouldn't I mention it? B ) I didn't even mention the moderators. TJ09's technically not a mod, he's the owner. However, I even stated he was a deity or a god, not a person. Shouldn't that be good enough for everyone? C ) Sitename? Dragcave doesn't necessarily have to be the site name. You're just assuming that it is. Dragcave can be the name of the land that the dragons live in. D ) Why didn't you use abstain? Do you really feel so strongly about this? ._. /rant Edited October 16, 2012 by beacker1160 Share this post Link to post
Posted October 16, 2012 (edited) Update on Custos's description: I've been getting a lot of positive feedback and accepts, which is good. Thank you to all the people that have kept an open-mind on regards to his homosexuality thus far, you're very kind. However, I received one confusing review ... "•Abstain: ...omg a gay dragon " I understand this person's surprise as it isn't common subject matter for descriptions, but what confuses me is the abstain. Was the abstain an accident or did they genuinely disapprove this aspect of his identity? However, it wasn't a crudely worded insult or anything, so I don't see it as a huge deal. I just hope it wasn't meant as an actual disapproval, as there is no blurb in the default dragon description claiming dragons are not capable of feeling affection or love towards the same gender I also submitted a description for the healer Custos loves, but deleted it. I think I like having him obscure compared to Custos. Maybe I'll re-submit it another time, but for now I want to focus on just one description. Edited October 16, 2012 by Flérida_Pagan Share this post Link to post
Posted October 16, 2012 Update on Custos's description: I've been getting a lot of positive feedback and accepts, which is good. Thank you to all the people that have kept an open-mind on regards to his homosexuality thus far, you're very kind. However, I received one confusing review ... "•Abstain: ...omg a gay dragon " I understand this person's surprise as it isn't common subject matter for descriptions, but what confuses me is the abstain. Was the abstain an accident or did they genuinely disapprove this aspect of his identity? However, it wasn't a crudely worded insult or anything, so I don't see it as a huge deal. I just hope it wasn't meant as an actual disapproval, as there is no blurb in the default dragon description claiming dragons are not capable of feeling affection or love towards the same gender I also submitted a description for the healer Custos loves, but deleted it. I think I like having him obscure compared to Custos. Maybe I'll re-submit it another time, but for now I want to focus on just one description. aww wish you hadn't deleted the whites description I like d them both a lot and wanted to see them both on your scroll Share this post Link to post
Posted October 16, 2012 (edited) aww wish you hadn't deleted the whites description I like d them both a lot and wanted to see them both on your scroll I might put Welcome's description up again later on, but right now I don't wish to have it in the review pool. I felt it lacked something, so I want to tweak it and wait a while before posting the final version. It makes me happy to know you enjoyed my descriptions though, thank you! Edited October 16, 2012 by Flérida_Pagan Share this post Link to post
Posted October 17, 2012 A ) What's wrong with mentioning codes? Lots of people mention and name their dragons after codes. It's part of the game, so why shouldn't I mention it? B ) I didn't even mention the moderators. TJ09's technically not a mod, he's the owner. However, I even stated he was a deity or a god, not a person. Shouldn't that be good enough for everyone? C ) Sitename? Dragcave doesn't necessarily have to be the site name. You're just assuming that it is. Dragcave can be the name of the land that the dragons live in. D ) Why didn't you use abstain? Do you really feel so strongly about this? A) Personally, I feel rather strongly about codes - strongly enough that I'd probably have given you a reject, too. Because the code is just like a number, not something that has anything to do with the character of your dragon. It's something like your credit card number to me. (Not that I would mind you telling me your credit card number, btw. ) Instead of mentioning the code, you could have used something else - like the dragon being born on the Holy Day of the Great TJ, Creator of Dragcave. Or say that TJ's star shone especially bright when your dragon was born. Or whatever else fits in with the role-playing aspect of describing your pixel dragon. B ) I don't think it's wrong to mention TJ as the God of Dragcave. In a way, it's true, and it's a nice idea from a role-playing perspective. C) Agreed. D) (Up until I read here, I didn't even know whether abstains are shown to the dragon owner, much less with comment. ) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 17, 2012 Since I have 34 descriptions pending right now I went through all my comments on them and they make me feel all warm and fuzzy I thought I'd share some <3 Accept: Ah, I remember when I snagged my first tinsel. A very lovely bronze. This is a very nice description, I like the story behind his name! Accept: well done! Accept: Heh, I like the last line. Its a very interesting quirk that he has, I like it! Accept: Nice and interesting description. I hope she doesn't get hurt! Accept: Interesting! Accept: Very nice, I like this. Accept: Don't you hate sexism? Most annoying thing ever. Way to go for this dragon. Accept: Well thought out and creative. Accept: I like this dragon, I think his defect is unique and interesting! I wouldn't tease him. Accept: Pretty! And my favorite! Accept: Good description! High five fellow Beatles Fan Is there any way to just thank these people for taking the time to read my stuff?? Share this post Link to post
Posted October 17, 2012 A ) What's wrong with mentioning codes? Lots of people mention and name their dragons after codes. It's part of the game, so why shouldn't I mention it? B ) I didn't even mention the moderators. TJ09's technically not a mod, he's the owner. However, I even stated he was a deity or a god, not a person. Shouldn't that be good enough for everyone? C ) Sitename? Dragcave doesn't necessarily have to be the site name. You're just assuming that it is. Dragcave can be the name of the land that the dragons live in. D ) Why didn't you use abstain? Do you really feel so strongly about this? A) Personally, I feel rather strongly about codes - strongly enough that I'd probably have given you a reject, too. Because the code is just like a number, not something that has anything to do with the character of your dragon. It's something like your credit card number to me. (Not that I would mind you telling me your credit card number, btw. ) Instead of mentioning the code, you could have used something else - like the dragon being born on the Holy Day of the Great TJ, Creator of Dragcave. Or say that TJ's star shone especially bright when your dragon was born. Or whatever else fits in with the role-playing aspect of describing your pixel dragon. B ) I don't think it's wrong to mention TJ as the God of Dragcave. In a way, it's true, and it's a nice idea from a role-playing perspective. C) Agreed. D) (Up until I read here, I didn't even know whether abstains are shown to the dragon owner, much less with comment. ) I've mentioned codes with my dragons and got them approved though. My trick was to give a reason for the code as a unique identifying signature that remained there until the dragon took another name. The unique signature is in dragon speak with gives individual sounds to numbers (touched on that but didn't go through sounds.) Check my vamps descriptson that mention midas dorkface and Shallyn'ar (sp?) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 25, 2012 Just saw this comment today. Over the centuries, the storms that sweep her world are becoming more and more violent. Many are beginning to fear that the end of their world is coming due to the fierce nature of these massive tempests. To stabilize the weather and prevent disaster, several Storm Dragons formed what is known as the Great Weather Manipulation Project (GWMP). Hala does not consider herself part of GWMP. She may be a powerful Controller, but she has better things to do than help out a bunch of do-gooding dragons. She would rather take care of herself and her own. That said, Hala is usually the first one in her Cave to volunteer to help another dragon and she almost always assists GWMP when they ask, even if she isn't a member. Accept: Accept: Large-scale environmental worldbuilding may not be the most suitable thing for a description, and personality-wise there's a bit of a contradiction in terms of altruism, but otherwise fair. Well done. Accept: Accept: *Looks at the 56 other members of GWMP on her scroll* Huh, didn't realize that wasn't suitable for a description. And I'm well aware that there is a contradiction in her personality. That was sort of the point. She talks like she doesn't care about others but actually does. Maybe that didn't come across to clearly? Share this post Link to post
Posted October 26, 2012 This nameless little hatchling is one of many sent by an unknown individual to keep an eye on various dragon communities and report back what they find. Her job is to watch Bonescale Weyr, where she's become the special pet of the two black marrow dragons who gave the weyr its name. They save her special tidbits, and in exchange, she helps keep watch when not making her observations. Bonescale Weyr still isn't the easiest place to live, but the inhabitants take care of their own, even the little crimson flare pygmy with a knack for being where she shouldn't. Accept: Very nice! Accept: I like that you actually take the time to describe your scroll dividers. This nameless little hatchling is one of many sent by an unknown individual to keep an eye on various dragon communities and report back what they find. His job is to watch New Sanctuary. The weyr is enshrouded with so many shield spells that he had to sweet-talk the shadow walker guard to be allowed in, and Wehr still eyes him suspiciously. Accept: I see a pattern here ... Accept: Once again, most excellent Mathcat. This nameless little hatchling is one of many sent by an unknown individual to keep an eye on various dragon communities and report back what they find. Her job is to watch Fireflood Weyr. She has an easy time fitting in, as the not-quite dormant volcano is a natural home for her type, and the only danger is being in the wrong place when the new trainees are practicing their fire magic. Accept: Accept: Another one. Auto-approve because Mathcat is awesome. This nameless little hatchling is one of many sent by an unknown individual to keep an eye on various dragon communities and report back what they find. Her job is to watch Stoneheart Weyr, one of the few dragon libraries. She likes to listen to the stories of Carnegie, a sort of living library, and in turn tells him stories of her own. Accept: Another one! Accept: Carnegie... good name for a library dragon! This nameless little hatchling is one of many sent by an unknown individual to keep an eye on various dragon communities and report back what they find. Her job is to watch Ironoak Weyr. As she's a fun-loving dragon, she sides with Equinox on weyr policy, and makes faces at the stuffy leader and second-in-command behind their backs. Accept: Accept: Great description as always, Mathcat. Accept: Accept: Share this post Link to post
Posted October 27, 2012 @TJ the Noble DESCRIPTION: TJ The Noble seems to think he deserves to be the king of the land. His logic is that he is somehow related to TJ09, the mysterious deity that formed the land of Dragcave, since his identification code is 'tj9JJ'. However, nobody really minds him, even though he often proclaims orders for everyone to follow. Secretly, down deep, TJ The Noble feels insecure, and he is worried that nobody will accept him. What he doesn't know, though, is that he is extremely annoying, and that the other dragons will gladly be his friend if he would stop telling everyone and everything that he is the lord and they are his servants. COMMENTS: Accept: This is good and I see no problem with it, but you are sometimes hostile towards criticism on the forum. If you want to be a serious writer you need to be open to criticism, even if you don't like it. First of all, I'd like to apologize to whoever I was particularly harsh to, please don't take it personally. I've been kind of down lately because nobody seems to care about my descriptions and I keep getting all these comment-less accepts that make me think if it's even really worthwhile to keep writing them. Even worse I've gotten comment-less rejects randomly and all over the place and this has really hurt me and damaged my reputation as a good description writer. Therefore I think you can understand why right now I'm sort of hostile to criticism, because I'm already being pounded on all sides by these factors and then unknowning users come in and criticize me for (sometimes, IMO) petty or their-opinion things that aren't against the rules and that nobody has said I could not use. Second of all, thanks for this comment, I've been trying not to take it out on others and I will try harder now, I will attempt to be more open. It isn't you guys' fault, just that I'm more harsh because so many things are hitting me from all over the place. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 27, 2012 Accept: Another one! Accept: Carnegie... good name for a library dragon! That second one was me. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 Accept: Once again, most excellent Mathcat. Accept: Another one. Auto-approve because Mathcat is awesome. Accept: Great description as always, Mathcat. Those were all me Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 Kylobyte has a famously accurate and extensive memory. Given a single thorough look over an area she will be able to describe and answer any questions regarding its contents, as though she were there revisiting it at the moment of inquiry. Her patterns are curiously also extremely detailed, inspiring some painters to try to match in their own work the minutest star or wisp of nebulous gas pictured on her sides. User Comments Accept: Accept: Accept: Accept: This reminded me of the Australian guy who discovers more new stars then computers have Accept: Accept: Accept: Ooh! I do not know of that person. Now my curiosity has been piqued, must find info... Neither terribly fierce nor very friendly, Crystaline falls in the middle among the other vampires for her temperament. The few dragons with which she socializes are either other vampires or Black Marrows, though she's been spotted conversing with a Turpentine on one occasion, and a Shadow Walker on many others, though none of the latter have made indication whom. The rest simply tolerate her presence so long as she's not a bother, usually giving her at most an acknowledging nod. User Comments Accept: Accept: Well, she's the nicest vamp I've seen today. Accept: Accept: Finally, a good one. Accept: Accept: Heh, I've already described the meaner ones of mine Also, a good vamp, or a good description? Or both? Nepeta is known and named for the catmint which he uses in brewing a sort of enchanted healing potion. This he bottles and insists, strongly yet humbly, that any dragon making a dangerous journey take at least one for their safety.User Comments Accept: Accept: Accept: Accept: Ooh catmint! Bet he's popular with the felines. Reject: Short Accept: Accept: Accept: ...What's wrong with short? If the dragon can be described adequately or effectively in few words, where's the problem? I've dragons with much shorter ones, and seen some great, elegant yet short descriptions produced by others as well. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 ...What's wrong with short? If the dragon can be described adequately or effectively in few words, where's the problem? I've dragons with much shorter ones, and seen some great, elegant yet short descriptions produced by others as well. Short and good beats long and bad any day! Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 Zap-a-Dee-Doo-Dah spends his time among dark storm clouds, hidden within. Many assume him to be a blackguard hiding from justice's eyes, or purely a sociopath, because of this behavior. The accusations are far from an accurate composition of the thunder dragon's moral status. The thunder dragon's reason for his surroundings is stage fright. He enjoys the glorious art of singing, but not when inquisitive eyes are upon him. The obscuring clouds provide excellent seclusion while a storm's rumble hinders anyone searching for the origins of his song. The downside, though, is he doesn't know if he is in tune. Accept: Accept: Reject: 'Composition' is used incorrectly, as is 'Sociopath'. Otherwise, good! Accept: I love it!! Especally the reference to "blackguard", I didn't think many people knew that word! - Emb Thank you for the compliments. Are those words fully out of context? I don't use them much, but I know 'composition' has variable meanings. I didn't know the word 'blackguard' until this description. Found it when I was searching the thesaurus for different synonyms. I used the thesaurus a lot on this one. <3 Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 Earthdefender Eamon is the captain and founder of the 1st Earthdefending Airborne Division. His duty is to coordinate all their attacks on those dreaded invading aliens - the Space Chickens. One normal sunny day became considerably less normal when his brother Earl came racing towards their cave at full speed, crashing badly at the entrance before cowering deep inside, hiding behind a rock as much as possible. His back injured and bleeding and his body badly shaking, he was in a dreadful state. When pressed for the cause of this, all Earl could mutter was "Space Chicken invasion" before losing consciousness. Eamon immediately took it on him to begin a counter-offensive avenging his brother, gathering dragons to join his newly founded Airborne Division and seeking contact with the Ninja Chickens, their newly found brothers-at-arms in this war between planets. User Comments Accept: Accept: Reject: This site takes place in the Mid-evil and Dark Ages. They probably didn't have wars in space. That "Mid-evil" made me laugh so bad The point he/she was making is fair enough (I'll see what the mods do), but seriously, "You can only have mid-evil descriptions here, not purely evil descriptions."... Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 Whoever rejected yours for medieval excuse also did so for mine ... among other things. Imprisoned Heart has a terrible secret, he loves his best friend Secret Desires, a shy male Red. Imprisoned would love to be able to tell Secret his well secret, but it's against his breed's code to be in love with a dragon of the same gender. As such, Imprisoned forced himself to court female dragons. Each time he does, a small bit of his spirit breaks. The only thing that keeps him sane is being around SD. Oh how Imprisoned wished that he wasn't a Royal Blue. Or better yet, that Secret felt the same way. If he did, then it wouldn't matter to Imprisoned what his fellow Royals felt. Imprisoned would know the dragon he so desperately loves loves him back. If only ... User Comments Accept: This sounds very similar to my dragons Natura Custos and Welcome Beacon ... two gay dragons, but Custos doesn't know Welcome loves him back. Their story isn't painful like Heart's though, poor guy. Accept: Reject: Accept: I liked this descr. But that could be because I'm a yaoi fangirl X'D. Also the only thing resembling an error was, ' Secret his well secret'<--that part seems a little awkward, to remedy try ... or , Reject: That is not apropiate, and please remember that this is in mideval times, so noone back then thought that way. Please be more considerate of younger players. I don't mind the rejects, as whenever I do a gay themed description they always ends up with rejects. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 Whoever rejected yours for medieval excuse also did so for mine ... among other things. User Comments Accept: This sounds very similar to my dragons Natura Custos and Welcome Beacon ... two gay dragons, but Custos doesn't know Welcome loves him back. Their story isn't painful like Heart's though, poor guy. Accept: Reject: Accept: I liked this descr. But that could be because I'm a yaoi fangirl X'D. Also the only thing resembling an error was, ' Secret his well secret'<--that part seems a little awkward, to remedy try ... or , Reject: That is not apropiate, and please remember that this is in mideval times, so noone back then thought that way. Please be more considerate of younger players. I don't mind the rejects, as whenever I do a gay themed description they always ends up with rejects. I find that last reject comment funny. "No one thought that way." There's documentation that they did have closeted gay relationships in medieval and even back to the Roman Empire. I don't think the reject is warranted. I have 4 descriptions pending. All of them have "Accepts," but only one actually has a comment to go with the accept. I'm used to it, though. I rarely write descriptions, and they hardly ever warrant any comments. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 (edited) Reject: That is not apropiate, and please remember that this is in mideval times, so noone back then thought that way. Please be more considerate of younger players. This comment is just so incorrect it's laughable. We have to think of the children, Lugia! We can't let them know two males or two females can be in love just like a male and female can. It's just ... outlandish. Sarcasm aside, I hope the person behind this comment will better educate themself before making such harsh judgements about homosexuality in the future. "No one back then thought that way" ... yikes. Update on Custos: I've received several commentless accepts and 2 written accepts. •Accept: LOL What a tweest! •Accept: AWESOME. Even though it took me about 30 seconds to read it, I still loved it. +1! Thank you very much! First one made me laugh. I'm glad I've been receiving positive feedback thus far, thanks to everyone who accepted my description, I appreciate it! Hopefully people continue having an open mind. Edited November 1, 2012 by Flérida_Pagan Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 (edited) I got a helpful, though incorrect, description comment: DarkBlackSurviver is a Black Dragon hatchling who has been through a lot in his (relatively) short life. He hatched in the middle of a hurricane, literally out in the middle. His egg was hidden near two trees that were ripped from the ground by the strong winds. Luckily the egg hatched before its shells were thrown up into the air. DarkBlackSurviver hunkered down to the ground, and just then his owner found the terrified hatchling. She was carrying a lantern and almost otherwise hidden in a large oiled cloak, right behind her was his mother. The two females, human and dragon, bundled up DarkBlackSurviver and raced back to safety. He is very lucky to have survived, but the rest of his life should seem very good by comparison. Accept: If he was found literally in the middle of a hurricane, then he'd be in the eye of it, which is the calmest part. However, it is surrounded by the most violent part. Unless that's what you meant. But the eye of the storm isn't always in the exact center, see: Hurricane Andrew I meant "in the middle" more as in "halfway through" in this case anyway, not "exact center". Edited November 1, 2012 by WatersMoon110 Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 (edited) @WatersMoon110: Oops! That was my comment. You're correct, the eye of a hurricane can be in different places. I forgot about how the shapes of hurricanes vary. Sorry about that! Edited November 1, 2012 by Flérida_Pagan Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 Named after an epic wave in human history, Kanagawa Wave embodies the force of his namesake. He is fiercely protective of his mate and children. His protectiveness has reached the point of being all-controlling and dominating. Whether this protectiveness is an inherent trait natural to Kanagawa or was impressed onto him by elder Tsunami Wyverns, one can't say. However, his forcefulness and control has led him to choose the friends he and his mate surround themselves with. Kanagawa has even interfered ruthlessly in his son's love life. Disapproving of the love between a Shadow Walker and Fantaji no Nami, Kanagawa one day conjured a great storm with the help of several Gray dragons to forever separate Nami from his lover. For Kanagawa, no one knows best like he does. User Comments Accept: Accept: Wow! That's one determined dad. I can't help but confess I'd be pretty mad if my dad did that. But if it's best, then so be it!! I love the description, your writing is great! Accept: Thank you. <3 His dreams and desires are mere fantasies. He rarely ever attains his goals. When he does, the taste of sweet triumph would be washed away by the waves. This has happened with a Shadow Walker who likes to wander the coast and collect shells. When Fantaji did picked up the courage to mate with her after years of courting, the ambivalent winds of the coast whipped up into a brooding maelstrom. Maelstrom transformed into typhoons, and a raging tropical hurricane brushed the object of his admiration out of reality. Now, like his Shadow Walker lover, those gentle kisses and embraces seem faded and no longer a part of his world. They're like memories of a sweet dream from long ago. Fantaji occasionally yearns for his first love. However, he has moved on with a mate-a mate who won't abandon him. User Comments Accept: I love how this is written, it sounds very pretty and poetic. Very sad, but very good. Accept: Thanks. ^.^ Share this post Link to post
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