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Yoooooo guys!! Recently my friend (LyricaBelachium on deviantart) and I decided to join forces and create a comic related to something that we are both gaga over: Dragons. We've finally finished the prologue and are currently working on the first chapter!

 

Flame Born is about dragons trying to survive conflicts between the humans (who have discovered the beauty and practicality of steam-powered machines), angry mythical creatures and even among themselves! The humans have their own inner conflicts too but WHO CARES ABOUT THAT? This comic will focus mainly on dragons only! Flame Born will contain a rich culture for all creatures involved, a large cast of characters, steampunk doo-dads, friendship, adventure, and relentless problems inflicted on the main characters by us!

 

Ahem. Anyway, here's a little something to show how it looks like!

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DISCLAIMER: IT'S TARGETED AT AGES 13 AND UP. That means it contains mild violence and a smattering of vile language. You have been warned!

 

Interested? You can start reading the series on...

SMACKJEEVES

COMIC FURY

LYRICA'S DEVIANTART

MY DEVIANTART

 

And wanna know the best thing? The comic is totally, absolutely FREE! However, donations will be much appreciated if you wanna show your support! Artists are docile creatures that need to exchange money for food to eat; we can't keep chewing our tablet pens forever. Haha. Ha.

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Oh my gosh, it looks absolutely amazing! The storyline is refreshing and unique, and you two are absolutely stunning artists!

 

I want to know what happens so badly--can't wait for more! ♥

i wish i could donate but too young to have a paypal i'm sorry

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Oh my god. Those dragon designs. The facial expressions. *swoons*

 

Yeah, obviously I am in love with this. I don't have a dA but I will watch this thread and am definitely excited for more.

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I really like the designs too (especially Whisp what a sweetie)! The dragons kinda look weird to me overall but I guess I'm used to more realism. Super nice lines.

 

Also: (almost) passing the Bechdel test in the first ten pages and actual honest-to-goodness poc characters?? Honestly I feel like human/mythical creature drama is a bit overdone but hot damn. Will definitely stalk this thread.

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These are really nice, I look forward to reading them! biggrin.gif I like how Bane's daughter's patterns actually match both of her parent's (leopard from Bane, blue from Bliss). Keep up the great work!

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We feel so stoked by these positive replies and we're working as fast as we can on Chapter 1! Keep those feedback coming~

 

@ Lady_Lunevis: Thank you so much! Don't worry about it, your appreciation already made our days a little better! <3

 

@ Dimar: MUAHAHA WE HAVE SUCCESSFULLY INDUCTED ANOTHER SUBJECT THAnk

 

@ Fractional Pi Day: D'aww thank you! When I first designed Whisp I never anticipated the overwhelming reaction to her. <3 btw we decided to draw this comic in a semi-realistic style in favour of EXPRESSIVE CARTOONISH FACE SHENANIGANS. Technically the Bechdel test doesn't apply there because Bliss is a male. ;P ...or maybe it does, since the terms of 'male' and 'female' are extremely fluid for them(except during mating season). I suppose that as long as two dragons, notwithstanding their gender, are talking about a male, the Bechdel Test might still be applied.

My friend and I are more interested in poc main characters actually. and because I'm an asian i will not miss this chance to cram people of asian ethnicity in the comic as much as possible/COUNTRYPRIDEBOOYEAH And I have to admit that it's pretty fun to play around with ideas like Japanese Conquistadors!

And indeed, that trope is more overdone than the steak I made last week. However, we hope we can execute stories in this boring setting in a way that attracts everybody!

 

20mia08: Ohhhh thank you! <33

 

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I've just read it, and it's really great! very well drawn and interesting. O: You definitely got yourself a new reader!

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I adore whisp's design and the lava dragon's and the story so far, i'm gonna read more of it too.

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Oh, and PM me whenever you put up a new page, since I'm pretty busy. biggrin.gif

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