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Just a small note:

I do charge as I am a new writer, I have been published but my book isn't well known.[/color=green]

 

Welcome!

Seeing the small note above, you must wonder what I charge.

 

Seriously, no eggs. Just hatchlings. I accept any Hatchie from an albino to a thunder. Except from the following:

Yulebuck, Snow Angel, Ribbon Dancer, Winter Magis, Valentine 08 and Sweetling

 

So, how good am I?

I wrote:

Brooke's Trip Down The Slide (I got this published at 8yrs old, it's a baby book, sos)

In The City of Bobbie(Still being published)

Peter The Killer(Still being published)

And collections of short stories.

 

I also write poetry. For example:

The River

It twists and it turns

Every corner makes my stomach churn

The water glistens bright and blue

You look at me, I look at you

The river swirls down each end

A careful message it does sends

"Care for the world,"it says

For another generation may see this one day.

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I really like the poem and if I'm meant to criticize, I can't criticize literature b/c I don't know much myself. You spelled blue wrong by the way wink.gif

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I love the poem, for I write too. The words are beautiful that way. The words flow so well.

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I really like the poem and if I'm meant to criticize, I can't criticize literature b/c I don't know much myself. You spelled blue wrong by the way wink.gif

That's a typo. Sorry!

 

Raybrd , thank you.

 

Wrote another one:

 

Thunder

The crackle of the night

The sound that makes the young n old

Shake with fright

Thunder, thunder

Singing through the rain

Thy song tells nobody

The exact same

Thunder, thunder

The sparkle of the day

The sight that makes the unwanted

Hide for another day.

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Can I see a story waiting to be published?

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*Claps* That was such a good poem. I would like to write one!

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Can I see a story waiting to be published?

No because it's private ATM.

 

Edit: But you can hear a different story that I am not getting published yet.

 

Sienna woke up to see the sun slowly tiptoeing across the sky. She wished that it would go down so she could stay in bed forever. Another day at boarding school.

 

Dodging the tornado of older children, she ran towards the nurses office. She wasn't hurt, she just wanted to avoid the flash...and the breakfast.

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A short story.

 

As it slipped into the mud, the silver Tinsels normally shiny body became dull. It's mother, Queen Miracle, soared through the area and scooped up her child before dropping it into the creek. It sobbed and said, "Now I'm so dirty."

 

Lifting up her offsprings head, she whispered and said, "Sometimes we must have mud on us so we can clean our scales, we are not perfect and we shall not pretend we are."

 

The hatchling nodded and slid into the shadows to find a shadow Walker there.

"I thought you were only here at Halloween?" it asked.

"We are always here. When were you laid as an egg?" he replied.

"I was born on the 3rd of December," it said.

The shadow Walker nodded and vanished, into the darkness, leaving the tinsel alone.

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