Posted November 25, 2013 (edited) Just a small note: I do charge as I am a new writer, I have been published but my book isn't well known.[/color=green] Welcome! Seeing the small note above, you must wonder what I charge. Seriously, no eggs. Just hatchlings. I accept any Hatchie from an albino to a thunder. Except from the following: Yulebuck, Snow Angel, Ribbon Dancer, Winter Magis, Valentine 08 and Sweetling So, how good am I? I wrote: Brooke's Trip Down The Slide (I got this published at 8yrs old, it's a baby book, sos) In The City of Bobbie(Still being published) Peter The Killer(Still being published) And collections of short stories. I also write poetry. For example: The River It twists and it turns Every corner makes my stomach churn The water glistens bright and blue You look at me, I look at you The river swirls down each end A careful message it does sends "Care for the world,"it says For another generation may see this one day. Edited November 30, 2013 by memememememememe1 Share this post Link to post
Posted November 30, 2013 I really like the poem and if I'm meant to criticize, I can't criticize literature b/c I don't know much myself. You spelled blue wrong by the way Share this post Link to post
Posted November 30, 2013 I love the poem, for I write too. The words are beautiful that way. The words flow so well. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 30, 2013 (edited) I really like the poem and if I'm meant to criticize, I can't criticize literature b/c I don't know much myself. You spelled blue wrong by the way That's a typo. Sorry! Raybrd , thank you. Wrote another one: Thunder The crackle of the night The sound that makes the young n old Shake with fright Thunder, thunder Singing through the rain Thy song tells nobody The exact same Thunder, thunder The sparkle of the day The sight that makes the unwanted Hide for another day. Edited November 30, 2013 by memememememememe1 Share this post Link to post
Posted December 1, 2013 *Claps* That was such a good poem. I would like to write one! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 1, 2013 (edited) Can I see a story waiting to be published? No because it's private ATM. Edit: But you can hear a different story that I am not getting published yet. Sienna woke up to see the sun slowly tiptoeing across the sky. She wished that it would go down so she could stay in bed forever. Another day at boarding school. Dodging the tornado of older children, she ran towards the nurses office. She wasn't hurt, she just wanted to avoid the flash...and the breakfast. Edited December 1, 2013 by memememememememe1 Share this post Link to post
Posted December 7, 2013 A short story. As it slipped into the mud, the silver Tinsels normally shiny body became dull. It's mother, Queen Miracle, soared through the area and scooped up her child before dropping it into the creek. It sobbed and said, "Now I'm so dirty." Lifting up her offsprings head, she whispered and said, "Sometimes we must have mud on us so we can clean our scales, we are not perfect and we shall not pretend we are." The hatchling nodded and slid into the shadows to find a shadow Walker there. "I thought you were only here at Halloween?" it asked. "We are always here. When were you laid as an egg?" he replied. "I was born on the 3rd of December," it said. The shadow Walker nodded and vanished, into the darkness, leaving the tinsel alone. Share this post Link to post
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