Posted September 29, 2012 (edited) OOC The Past Amber eyes glare at you through the trees. Amber eyes follow you through the forest. Amber eyes watch you running as fast as you can. Amber eyes examine you as dark forms emerge in front of you. Wolves surround you, snapping, snarling. Their humanoid features beg to differ. Werewolves, a pack of them. All watching expectantly. One jumps and the others follow, tearing at your skin, leaving you alone after only seconds have gone by. They turn on their heels and run back into the woods, leaving you alone, bleeding and scared. Why were you there? What happened? Your evening walk. It all starts there. You enter the woods near your home. You take your normal route, the orange leaves beneath your feet doing nothing but amplify your footsteps. Drawing your coat in closer, you walk further in. The trees tower above you, growing wilder and more untamed as you walk towards the centre. That was when the noises began. A lone howl echoes through the forest. Wolves? Surely there would be no wolves here... A shiver runs down your spine and you pick up your pace slightly, walking quickly between the trees, winding further and further inside. You look behind you, freezing up as you see two amber eyes watching you. You break into a run and soon lose where you are in the forest. Another howl calls through the trees. From right behind you. You whip around, eyes scanning frantically around you. A dark form moves through the trees, more flanking you until the only way out is forward. You take a deep breath and sprint. You hear snarling and the thunder of paws on the ground behind you. Your leg snags on something and you get pulled to the ground. Searing pain spikes down your body, the wolves behind you coming to a halt, forming a circle around you, their breath forming numerous clouds in the air. Cradling your leg, you look up at them. Their humanoid figures look off. The fur of the creatures is in a variety of colours, from black to white. They close in, the first of them leaping at you, its body pinning you down as it scrapes your skin. Its fur is coarse yet soft. The other creatures join in, but it only lasts for a few seconds. When they withdraw, your body is overloaded with pain, your clothes lying in shreds. The run back into the trees, leaving you breathing heavily. You're scared, your heart beats rapidly. What if they return? What if they kill you? Your questions are unanswered as you give in to the pain. You black out, welcoming the cool sensation rippling over your body. You wake. The welcoming sight of your bedroom ceiling greets you. You lift a hand, finding it bandaged and stained with red. What happened? Who found you? The Present Your spine arched, your transformation completing. After a week of the slow, noticeable changing to your body, lycanthropy is finishing its work. It's been a month since you were bitten. You're sure what bit you was a werewolf. What else could it have been? A snarl escapes your mouth and you scan the forest around you with a new interest. You had received a letter asking for you to meet someone here. At this time. On this day. From the trees emerges another werewolf, or wolf, as you've nicknamed them. You recognize its brown fur as the first wolf to have attacked. Your hackles raise as you assume a threatening pose, lips curled back into a growl. The wolf snorts, regarding you with annoyance. "Come now, it is not the time to resolve to the wolfish ways of our bloodline, is it?" he asked, green eyes watching you carefully. You find your voice, it sounds harsh. "What have you done? Who are you?" The wolf grins, showing white teeth. "Me? I'm Golten." Golten pauses. "What have I done? A more fitting question is... What will I do? And what will you do?" The Future You were invited to join Golten's pack. A pack of werewolves. Having nowhere else to go, you accepted. What will you do there? Will lycanthropy be explained to you? Your head is filled with questions, but Golten interrupts, and takes you to meet your new family. Lycanthropy Lycanthropy is the condition you have. A week before full moon, your body begins to change. This could mean many different symptoms. As the full moon rises, you transform into a wolf-like creature. You will only eat meat, as any sort of vegetation will result in sickness. For a week, this continues, before you change back into a human slowly, with each day passing you become more human. After another week, you're just about as human as you're going to get. This process repeats itself forever until death. As a werewolf, you cannot die from old age. Bloodlust will drive you to kill whenever blood is smelt, leaving many werewolves as murderers. Only the government and werewolves know about lycanthropy. Police are told to make arrests to werewolves and keep them in reinforced cells, away from the public eye. Werewolves are only free if they hide away. Werewolves will stay looking the same age as when they were bitten. If a werewolf was bitten when it was 15, for example, it would stay looking like a 15-year-old. Werewolves are just about at the top of the food chain. Sadly, underneath them is humans, as well as many animals. There is no cure for lycanthropy. The Pack The pack is a group of werewolves determined to keep hidden from humans. They have different ranks and will always recruit more when needed, not fearing to attack any travellers who enter their territory. For this reason, their forest is left untouched and has a continuous supply of food and water. Currently, The Pack is led by Golten. Why would you want to join this pack, even when they turned you into this monster? Because they welcome you, they give you a new home and family. They understand how you feel. After all, shouldn't creatures of the same race stick together? Police and Special Forces Quite often, police will allow werewolves who want to help find more of their kind join them. These werewolves work with the police and have tamed their wolf selves so they can help no matter what their condition is. Humans are involved, too. Every werewolf is paired with a human who they can trust. The pairs are always kept together, making sure nothing bad happens to the other. Werewolves without a partner are confined in a cell until they find one. Why join the police? Because it's a chance to return to humanity. To be accepted for what you are and taught to control yourself. Plot As normal, the werewolves in The Pack have recruited. This time, it has been noticed. The police are looking for this missing person. All pairs of werewolves and humans have been sent out, as the police suspect it might have something to do with The Pack. The werewolves of The Pack need to move, or fight. They need to find somewhere new or risk being discovered. Humans have come looking along with the police. They could be seen as an easy meal to any werewolf. But will the temptation be too much? Location England, near the west coast. Green: Plains/fields Dark red: Forest Grey: Village/town Blue: Sea Ochre: Sand Orange: Police Station Yellow: Pack base Rules No Godmodding, Powerplay or taking control of another's character. For example, deer can be hard to take down-they have antlers and hooves. One well-placed hit from a deer's hooves could result in a pretty bad injury. No marysues or garysues. Nobody is perfect. Swearing is allowed. But don't overuse it. First come, first serve. If someone gets the rank you want, move on and pick another. No begging. And yes, you can reserve, but that will only hold for 2 days. You can have as many characters as you feel you can handle. But nothing silly, like 20 characters. Be active will all that you can. Post forms here. But put double brackets or something around them. Post at least 4 sentences. With simple punctuation and spelling, if you can. We've all learnt this in school. Put "Werewolves Rule" in the other section to prove you've read the rules. Yes, there are NPCs. Anyone can control them and anyone can take over from them. Beside an NPC's rank will be *NPC*. We're RPing with werewolves that look like this: Werewolf They can be any colour with any markings. Use (( )) or -- -- or ** ** To show you're in OOC. Ranks and Partners The Pack Alpha Male: Golten-Shadowwolf6 Alpha Female: Cerasus "Cherry"-SoiledLove Beta Male: Tony-Sweet_Wyvern Beta Female: Lilith-Shiny Hazard Sign Lead hunter: Yindol-Shadowwolf6 Hunters 1: Aella-RockinSia 2: *NPC* 3: *NPC* 4: *NPC* Lead Healer: *NPC* Healers 1: Iva-SoiledLove 2: Arianna-nynaevesilverwind 3: *NPC* Lead Warrior: Anaya-Moonbeam22 Warriors 1: *NPC* 2: *NPC* 3: *NPC* 4: *NPC* 5: *NPC* Shaman: Kaoru-Awsomeamazingam Shaman's Apprentice: *NPC* Omega Male: *NPC* Omega Female: Merridew-CoughingCanary Rank Code Alpha - The highest rank in The Pack, these wolves lead, and are the most likely to mate as they are the wolves that spend most time with each together, and are more likely to get to know each other enough. A wolf with this rank attends meetings between the higher ranks of The Pack. Beta - The second-highest rank. A pair of wolves, male and female, are selected to advise and help the alphas. A wolf with this rank attends meetings between the higher ranks of The Pack. Omega - The two weakest wolves - one male, one female - are chosen to have this - the lowest - rank. They stay behind when the rest of The Pack is doing something and always eat last. Lead Hunter - A high-ranking wolf that normally leads hunts, whether searching for food or humans.A wolf with this rank attends meetings between the higher ranks of The Pack. Hunters - Four wolves trained to hunt and scout. Lead Healer - A high-ranking wolf that is most the skilled at healing. They treat the worse wounds of The Pack and help train new healers. A wolf with this rank attends meetings between the higher ranks of The Pack. Healers - Three wolves skilled in the art of healing, often sending hunters out for certain plants. Lead Warrior - A wolf with this rank leads raids and helps defends The Pack. A wolf with this rank attends meetings between the higher ranks of The Pack. Warriors - Five wolves who are to defend The Pack and fight other wolves. Police Raven-SoiledLove~Merana-Shadowwolf6 Rogues/Newly Bitten Kat-Squertle Unique ranks Werewolf Hunter~Anna-JadeHeartOfFire Pack Dictionary Wolf - A fellow werewolf Dog - A werewolf with the police Alchemy - The process of making a medicene The Hunt - The recruiting system Moon - Shortened form of Full Moon Edited November 24, 2012 by Shadowwolf6 Share this post Link to post
Posted September 29, 2012 (edited) This looks like a very fun roleplay, but a couple things caught my eye. First of all, the link in the rules section 404'd me. You might want to change it to something else. Also, you use 'lycan' and 'werewolf' interchangably. Lycans have most to all control of their transformation. Werewolves do not. Otherwise, there is no difference. Please pick one or the other. Also, you didn't give any description for the Alpha, Omega, and Betas. If I wasn't so obsessed with wolves already, (and a lot of people are not, so this is for them) I wouldn't know what each one of those ment. Finally, expect a form in the mail. Edited September 29, 2012 by thegreenrobby Share this post Link to post
Posted October 5, 2012 1. The double spacing in the forms are not nessassary, they just take space. 2. Didn't I send a form already? Share this post Link to post
Posted October 7, 2012 If I could point out, Mousia, several of those corrections you mentioned are not based on problems. Some of that is simply their writing style. This includes the first four, as well as the 'But' in 'But why join the police?' Share this post Link to post
Posted October 26, 2012 ((I'll join Forum Name:Squertle Character Name:Kat Age:13 Gender:female Race:Werewolf Role:Newly bitten Appearance:Kat has fair skin and shoulder length light brown hair.Her eyes are green mixed with grayish blue and always seem to have an adventurous sparkle in them. Appearance in wolf form:wolf form Personality:She always tries to be positive in any situation and she is very loyal to her friends.She loves to make jokes and tease everyone and she loves animals.Her curiosity can get the best of her and get her into difficult situations,but she can usually get out of them. History:Rp'ed Other:Werewolves rule!)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 27, 2012 ((^^ Accepted! You can start RPing at anytime you wish )) Golten watched his pack. A faint smile flickered over his features as he stood still on the top of the small hill. His scar was picked out from the rest of his face, the light showing the slight ridge. His hands were in fists, and the alpha male seemed tense. ----------------------------------------------------------- Yindol searched nearby, weaving between trees, her eyes scanning hungrily. Foraging. A simple, yet effective way of doing something productive and loosening up. She searched for edible plants and tracked future meals for the pack. Life was good. For now. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 27, 2012 (edited) (( Forum Name: Tiger101 Character Name: Aliana Age: 129 Gender: Female Race: (Human or Werewolf) Werewolf Role: (As in with the Police, Newly Bitten or the rank they have as a werewolf.) Lead Healer or normal healer. Appearance: She is a tall girl with long black hair. She looks like she's 18 but is much older. She has very pale skin. Her blue eyes are mysterious, almost changing shades. Appearance in wolf form: (For werewolves) She is jet black except for her face, tail and her right front leg. All of these are White. Her eyes are pure Amber. Her teeth are slightly longer than usual and her claws are always sharp. Personality: (Can be RP'ed) She is always eager to help and will not stop trying to heal a wolf until it is dead. She has mixed feelings about humans but doesn't say. She goes with the clans on most things. History: (Can be RP'ed) RP'd Other: werewolves rule. )) Edited November 11, 2012 by Tiger101 Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 (edited) (( Forum Name: Tiger101 Character Name: Aliana Age: 1'290 Gender: Female Race: (Human or Werewolf) Werewolf Role: (As in with the Police, Newly Bitten or the rank they have as a werewolf.) Lead Healer Appearance: She is a tall girl with long black hair. She looks like she's 18 but is much older. She has very pale skin. Her blue eyes are mysterious, almost changing shades. Appearance in wolf form: (For werewolves) She is jet black except for her face, tail and her right front leg. All of these are White. Her eyes are pure Amber. Her teeth are slightly longer than usual and her claws are always sharp. Personality: (Can be RP'ed) She is always eager to help and will not stop trying to heal a wolf until it is dead. She has mixed feelings about humans but doesn't say. She goes with the clans on most things. History: (Can be RP'ed) RP'd Other: not at the moment. )) ((Denied. Just re-read it to make sure. You're missing something, check through the first post again to find out what )) Edited October 28, 2012 by Shadowwolf6 Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 Forum Name:SL Character Name:Cerasus "Cherry" Age:124 Gender:F Race: Werewolf Role: Alpha female Appearance:Here Appearance in wolf form: Cherry is a small pale-blue wolf with an almost fox-like face. She has a white underbelly and white paws. Her eyes are amber but if you look closely, you'll find that the right eye is slightly darker than the left. Personality:RP'ed History: RP'ed Other:Cherry is pretty clever and fast. She uses her size to an advantage to weave around people, dodge attacks and tire her opponent out. Also good at planning and working out battle strategies quickly. Her biggest weakness is her unusually small size and strength. --- Forum Name:SL Character Name:Nicknamed 'Raven' Never uses his true name Age:1323 Gender:M Race: Werewolf Role: with police Appearance:Here Appearance in wolf form: A large, but very thin wolf with pitch black fur and unusually long teeth and ice blue eyes. Personality: RP'ed History: Has recently come out of hiding. Other: Called Raven because of his incredible speed and jumping ability. Doesn't yet have a partner, but is pretty good at controlling himself. ---- Forum Name:SL Character Name:Iva Age:7 Gender:F Race: Werewolf Role: Newly bitten Appearance:Here Appearance in wolf form: Here Personality: RP'd History: RP'd Other: Werewolves rule!!!)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 ((All three accepted, but just to make sure, you do know that Iva will stay looking 7, right?)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 ((Yes. That's why I made her seven years old in the first place)) Cherry walked up to Golten, her hair dancing in the wind. Noticing his tense stance, she asked, "What's wrong?" --- Iva coughed and sat up, looking around, confused. She was sitting in a clearing alone and soon, tears came to her eyes. "Mo-mommy?" she called through the trees. --- Raven sat on a bench outside the police office. He yawned and looked around for something to do. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 Golten continued watching his pack, sensing Cherry behind him. He didn't turn, he just sighed. "That's the problem. I don't know," he growled, his voice rough. "Full moon will start having an effect on us tomorrow." he told her, changing the subject suddenly. "We need to make sure we have gathered all of the others. We can't have the same thing happen as what happened last moon." Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 (edited) ((Epicness! Forum Name: Moonbeam22 Character Name: Anaya Age: 17 Gender: F Race: Werewolf Role: Lead Warrior Appearance: Tall, fair skin and black hair. Striking green eyes and very pretty. She wears casual, simple clothes. Appearance in wolf form: Jet black, same striking green eyes but has white ear tips, tail tip, and three white paws Personality: RP'ed mostly, but she is a VERY fierce warrior despite her sex and beauty. History: RP'ed Other: Werewolves rule! Tiger, maybe our characters can be siblings as they look a lot alike?)) Edited October 28, 2012 by Moonbeam22 Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 ((Epicness! Forum Name: Moonbeam22 Character Name: Anaya Age: 17 Gender: F Race: Werewolf Role: Lead Warrior Appearance: Tall, fair skin and black hair. Striking green eyes and very pretty. She wears casual, simple clothes. Appearance in wolf form: Jet black, same striking green eyes but has white ear tips, tail tip, and three white paws Personality: RP'ed mostly, but she is a VERY fierce warrior despite her sex and beauty. History: RP'ed Other: Werewolves rule! Tiger, maybe our characters can be siblings as they look a lot alike?)) ((Accepted!)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2012 Anaya sat beneath a large birch tree, braiding he long black hair. Even as a human, all of her senses were sharper than a normal human. Nonetheless, her skin itched and her cravings for meat bothered her. The full moon was just over a week away, and she wasn't exactly looking forward to it. She glanced over to her shining sword, it's thin blade gleaming in the sunlight next to her bow. Wolf or human, she was a warrior. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 29, 2012 Cherry nodded and sighed, walking forwards to stand beside the alpha male. "You know... Sometimes I wonder if we can just live in peace. There's always something here that poses a threat, no matter when," she said, looking up at Golten. She was slightly more than a head shorter than him and looked much more delicate than most werewolves. --- Iva stopped crying. If her family wasn't around then she had no reason to put on this pathetic act. She stood up and brushed herself off and walked forwards, regarding her surroundings with annoyance. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 29, 2012 Golten's eyes changed colour, gradually, but still changing. He was normally the first wolf to begin a transformation. "It has started." He growled, his nails already starting to look like half-formed claws. "A week of this, then..." Golten trailed off, still watching the pack. ------------------------------------- Yindol glanced around, watching her surroundings carefully. She had heard sobbing. Which had then stopped. She had heard a child's voice, calling for her mother. Yindol tilted her head, listening closely, determining where the sobbing had come from. She moved through the trees silently, like a shadow, until she found a small, 9-year-old girl. "And what would a small girl like you be doing in such a big forest, with no partents to look after her?" She asked, her voice playful. "Surely you wouldn't just be... left here?" Yindol smelt the air, sensing something that wasn't human. Yet she couldn't find the girl. "You're a wolf," she muttered to herself, still waiting for what the girl had to say. ((That's Isa, BTW )) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 29, 2012 "Who are you?" Iva asked curtly, scowling at the new arrival. --- "Yeah..." Cherry muttered. Her transformations didn't start that early and she watched Golten as he started transforming. --- Raven felt his body changing gradually as he sat on the bench. He stared at the sky and wondered when he would get a partner. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 29, 2012 Yindol grinned. "I'm Yindol. Who are you? And you still haven't answered my question, werewolf. You're tresspassing on my pack's territory." The grin had vanished, replaced with a steely gaze. "Golten will not be happy that you are here. If I were you, I would take this chance to run. Unless... unless you want to join. Otherwise, scoot. Get out of here. It's almost full moon and we're going to be after your blood if you do stay." Her eyes changed colour slightly. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 29, 2012 (edited) "Hmph. Werewolf? What are you talking about? I'm Iva and I won't be scared by fairytales like that! Mommy always tries to scare me with them!" Iva said, glaring at the person. Suddenly, a weird memory floated into her mind. Around a month ago, she had been attacked by a group of wolves. It had been terrifying, but she refused to believe in those weird fairytales about werewolves. Werewolves couldn't exist; they just couldn't. She was much more mature than those other annoying little kids in kindergarden. They were a bunch of crybabies and scaredy-cats. Edited October 29, 2012 by SoiledLove Share this post Link to post
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