Posted October 31, 2013 Do you guys think I should bring Aiden back? Add a dark presence on the boat? Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2013 Remind me who Aiden is again, please. My memory's either spotty or... Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2013 (edited) He was from our Modern gen. He was my high ranking character who was pretty much "I hate you, I hate your life, I hate me I hate my life, humans are a scourge *bash head on wall repeatedly mumbling 'angst' over and over again." In a nutshell. He was very pessimistic and angry all the time. Guess that happens when your family is killed right in front of you. I figure he would be a prisoner on board but eventually he's allowed to roam the decks (given there's not a whole lot of places where he could escape) and he would cause trouble of his own and get lots of people mad at him but given his own talents he would advance their purpose. Edited October 31, 2013 by Danniphantom Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2013 Oh. Right. Well, the "revived" characters are all chronologically accurate, it's just a different chain of events. I'm not sure if chronologically moving Aiden would work... Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2013 I dunno, as long as it's along similar lines, but not exactly him, I suppose it would work. I keep thinking about making another cabin girl or something. Robb can't be the only apprentice. He seems so lonely. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2013 I never really involved him much in Modern times, mainly because I left partway through the gen. And all I'd have to do is tweak his bio a bit (remove the guns and all) and he'd fit right in. Besides I really like him as a character but I never did much with him. At the very least I could form up a new character with the same personality give him the same general skills and voila! Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2013 Danni: I mean...sure, but you feel have to make him period. Rain: I really doubt there would be a whole lot of women on the ship. Woman captain, woman first mate, woman master gunner. They all have legit-ish stories, but I really doubt the validity of a whole lot of woman sailors... *shrug* Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 (edited) That could be Ceto's thing. She could be proving that women are equal to men in a time where very few, if any, were treated as such? Though, really, Cullen is the highest ranking male, but he's green, so doesn't hold a lot of authority or respect just yet. Also! We have a medium length plan. What's the short term? Who needs to be posting and what? Maybe Cero gathers her officers and they try to figure it out? Edited November 1, 2013 by Dusset Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 Yeah, sure! Rain should totally make a friend for Robb. And then... We could skip to the next day so the officers CAN talk about the riddle? Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 Guys! I'm pressed for time. I won't be online tonight AT ALL until after 9pm. I'll be on Saturdays fully, and Suday 'till 6pm, then again after 9pm. Posting during weekdays will be sparse and short (most likely) so forgive me in advance. That about sums up my news for now. Seeya tomorrow (or tonight). Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 Username:na82008 Name: Garithol Ovler Gender: Male Age: 43 Birthplace: america Side: Templar Position:Templar Captain Assassin Rank: (what do i put here?) Appearance: http://www.takuchat.com/wp-content/uploads...led_1_large.png Clothing: leather shirt dyed white with templar symbol, Black cotton trousers, and red belt Weapons: *** Sword and Navle Axe Personality: has a kind face, and will act kind except when someone displeases him. loves to fight, and fighting never gets displeased in a fight. He also considers himself very honorable. History:was born in america, but was taken from his parents early on because they were secretly sabotage the Templars (but were not assassins). he was raised a Templar and never found out about his parents until he rose to a captan, when he did find out, he disinherited them. Kin:as far as he cares, he dosn't have famaly Abilities: He is very good at moving from point a to point b (basically a master parkourer) and can even navigate ships that are falling apart without much difficulty. Weaknesses: He likes to take out important foes on his own he is not good at aiming with a gun, so he dosn't have one he burned his left arm when a building caught on fire, he cannot use it that well when he makes a decision or a judgment, it is very hard to convince him other wise Strengths: can sence if something is going to happen right befor it dose (but only big changes to the environment, so he can't predict of someone is about to swing there sword at him in the middle of a sword fight, but he can sense if some one is about to fire a gun on a quite street) is very agile Likes: a good fight, getting things done, strawberries, and crunchy things Dislikes: being bored, alcohol, people who don't work, grapes Other: 'OMG, ALTAIR IS SO SEXEH' Theme Song: (link to youtube) Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 Just to make sure... His hair is gray right? You leave the Assassin Rank empty since he is a Templar. And you have to capitalize after every punctuation mark. ^^ Will wait until my co-op Moose comes by to see if we will accept yah. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 I think you need a little bit more history and English language knowledge to be quite there. I don't understand why you would make him born in America (I am guessing you mean the United States) if it's 1600. The dates just don't match up. In addition, it's very heard to understand who you mean by a lot of things because you contradict yourself at times and sometimes I can't tell if you've misspelled something or if it's just a separate word. I'm not sure why that word in front of "sword" in the weapons category is censored out, but you really shouldn't be using a word that the forum censors as part of a weapon's name. You history is not very in-depth and neither is most of your form, so I would definitely recommend adding more detail into it if you wish to try again. This RP is a huge time commitment (seriously, this is not a joke, the amount of time and planning that goes into everything is insane, hence all the records being kept about this) and you have to understand that I'm not trying to be mean or rude or anything like that, but I really need you to know that this RP will take a lot of time, effort, and thought. As well as being a time commitment, we all expect each other to use grammar and spelling pretty well so everything is either very easily intelligible or very obviously a typo, so not being able to tell what you mean by certain things would be a pretty serious issue. I'm not sure if you read this part of the rules, but there is a post length requirement that we normally have to meet (unless, of course, we're extremely pressed for time or have an injury of some sort), so you should also be comfortable with that. Again, I do not mean this to be mean or anything, but this RP has a series of requirement and we really do prefer that any new applicants know what they're getting into before they abandon this midway. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 Neenja post: *** sword? Like *** son? Like Castiel has a *** son? Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 Huh? I had just read Moose's post and was clarifying a legitimate name (they were in the games) for a sword that would be censored on the forums, since she mentioned it. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2013 Yes, it's that word. *** sword, I think, means that it once belonged to/belongs to a "fatherless" person, or it was crafted in a way that no one wants it. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 2, 2013 I'd never heard of that. Anyway, I think that could potentially lead to a censor kips in a lot of posts and that's really discouraged... Share this post Link to post
Posted November 2, 2013 Hmmm. Maybe he can just mention it once? Or maybe just keep it on his form? Share this post Link to post
Posted November 2, 2013 He could call it a great sword, since in the games they were two handed? C'mon, Moose. They were in Brotherhood. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 2, 2013 Anyway, can we skip to when they're at port, so everyone could discuss the riddle? They should totally dock at Lipari. MAKE CETO HAS THE FEELS. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 2, 2013 (edited) But if they haven't solved the puzzle, how would they know to dock in France? But then again I don't know where Lipari is. Just have Ceto call the officers together, I don't think it matters where. Edited November 2, 2013 by Dusset Share this post Link to post
Posted November 2, 2013 Lipari is a small village on the shores of Sicily. ^^ Share this post Link to post
Posted November 2, 2013 Well that's fine, I'm just mentioning what I see. It's not about me being mean, it's about thinking way ahead. If you guys think it's fine, that's alright. Duss' idea sounds the most legit to me. Will they have looted another ship by their landing or no? Share this post Link to post
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