Posted March 22, 2012 *is dragged by ear* I see no plot... You must have written it in your History, and then didn't separate them. Make your plot clear, please. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 22, 2012 (edited) Okay... [EDIT] Done! I just added a plot section and moved the causes there. Do you think I need more, Gist? Anybody? *is sad and lonely* Edited March 23, 2012 by TSparkle123 Share this post Link to post
Posted March 29, 2012 Gist? We are dragging you by the ear at this point. *Drags approver by the ear* Share this post Link to post
Posted March 29, 2012 *is dragged by her sore ear* Next, before I start fine-combing this, are there any rules that you want for this RP, such as no Tinsels/don't floodpost, etc? You're missing a Rules section, and I need to know why... Share this post Link to post
Posted March 29, 2012 *is dragged by her sore ear* Next, before I start fine-combing this, are there any rules that you want for this RP, such as no Tinsels/don't floodpost, etc? You're missing a Rules section, and I need to know why... Oh derp. How did I not see what wasn't there? (Wow, that doesn't make much sence...) Share this post Link to post
Posted March 29, 2012 *facepalms* I must have forgotten to put those back in when I did my big edit. Well, they're back! You may begin fine-combing it, Gist! Share this post Link to post
Posted March 30, 2012 (we have the technology to make ancient beings come back to life) Capitalize "we" Period after "life" ((Coming back to edit this post hopefully some time today.)) Share this post Link to post
Posted April 4, 2012 *poke* *poke* *poke* TSparkle? are you alive? *Whispers* She's not moving. Maybe we should just casually walk away and pretend we saw nothing... *Looks over* ...and I think the same can be said for Gist. Share this post Link to post
Posted April 4, 2012 BRAINS!!! I'm kinda hungry, so imma gonna eat your brains, I mean, if that's okay with you guys. Share this post Link to post
Posted April 4, 2012 (edited) Hey TSparkle, my characters name is Gary Sue :3 will I be accepted?*sarcastic* (it's a No I know.) Edited April 4, 2012 by girlfairy76 Share this post Link to post
Posted April 4, 2012 You all can still PM me if you want in, I don't think I'm gonna accept more than 20-25 people. (I really don't want tons of characters, I mean, I'm the one who's gonna have to keep track of who's who.) Share this post Link to post
Posted April 4, 2012 You all can still PM me if you want in, I don't think I'm gonna accept more than 20-25 people. (I really don't want tons of characters, I mean, I'm the one who's gonna have to keep track of who's who.) (As well as everyone else playing, mind you.) Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 (edited) Well, you're right... I wouldn't want to join an RP where there were too many characters. I also have to keep track before it gets approved, though. Edited April 5, 2012 by TSparkle123 Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 Yeah... I mean, I dunno how this all works, but I get what you're saying... Anything else we can change before making Gist's ear hurt a lot more and possibly bleed? Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 I don't know... Robby, maybe you could point out some of the stuff you said you noticed when you first commented? Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 Actually, over the process of making the thing better with more writing, I think you got them on your own. 7. Use correct spelling and grammer, it hurts my brain when you use text-speak. Grammar. Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 (edited) I can also see you practically copied my rules. My suggestion would be to take the part where it says "Password" and how to get it? Don't tell them how to get it in there. Put that as a rule. Edited April 5, 2012 by thegreenrobby Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 Okay! I just didn't know how else for people to prove they actually read my rules. I don't want people to say they did without actually reading them. Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 You could do... If you were born January-June, what is your favorite Rare Egg? If you are July-December, What's your favorite Halloween dragon? Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 Hmm... but I don't really know many of those, I really haven't been playing Dragon Cave that long... I'll think about it. Thanks for the advice, girlfairy! Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 Sure! I think that would be awesome! Maybe you could just PM me a list? Share this post Link to post
Posted April 5, 2012 i really like this and id like to join, ill make a profile when i get home, its hard to do on my crummy phone Share this post Link to post
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