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Hello, mickiloo - I'm gistofeverything, and I'm here to get your RP Approved today! *yay!*

 

VI.Accepted Characters

"VI" -> "IV" Going from 3 to 6 is a leeeeeetle bit large of a jump, right?

 

This roleplay is set in the early 21th century, although the people on this island refuse to house large and expensive technology.

"21th" -> "21st".

 

To the outside of the diamond, about two-hundred miles, is all ocean.

"two-hundred" -> "two hundred"

 

The northern most city is Dieh.

"northern most" -> "northernmost"

 

Other than that, that's alliI see in the 2nd post. I'll go over the 1st post when you make the edits.

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HELLO and thank you! smile.gif Three approvers, huh... Do you people keep records of this? Lol.

 

I edited everything. ^^

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When others from the towns have tried fighting Oracion, they were never to return.

I find the syntax to be strange. Try "anyone who has ever tried to fight Oracion has never returned."

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I didn't even edit the first post. O.o

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The entire paragraph wasn't colored, just the title over each section. I still see colors.

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YES! ^^ Would it be okay if it got wiped clean also?

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((Hurray!!! Thank you Walker!))

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((Bump. Was this really that bad an idea?))

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