Posted January 30, 2012 Hello, mickiloo - I'm gistofeverything, and I'm here to get your RP Approved today! *yay!* VI.Accepted Characters "VI" -> "IV" Going from 3 to 6 is a leeeeeetle bit large of a jump, right? This roleplay is set in the early 21th century, although the people on this island refuse to house large and expensive technology. "21th" -> "21st". To the outside of the diamond, about two-hundred miles, is all ocean. "two-hundred" -> "two hundred" The northern most city is Dieh. "northern most" -> "northernmost" Other than that, that's alliI see in the 2nd post. I'll go over the 1st post when you make the edits. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 30, 2012 HELLO and thank you! Three approvers, huh... Do you people keep records of this? Lol. I edited everything. ^^ Share this post Link to post
Posted January 30, 2012 When others from the towns have tried fighting Oracion, they were never to return. I find the syntax to be strange. Try "anyone who has ever tried to fight Oracion has never returned." Share this post Link to post
Posted January 30, 2012 The entire paragraph wasn't colored, just the title over each section. I still see colors. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 30, 2012 YES! ^^ Would it be okay if it got wiped clean also? Share this post Link to post
Posted January 30, 2012 When it is approved. I PMed Walker, but don't expect a response until tonight. It looks good. Share this post Link to post
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