writing yay <3

[Lila]

thees are mah blawgs

 

The Saltwater Room <---WIP story

ReaganReagan <--- Blog for my life and random writings

 

I was looking for concrit and just comments in general about it.

[Lila]

bump.

[incondicency]

I would say that your writing is, overall, impressive. There's not much variation in sentence structure, though. However, your pieces are rather descriptive and describes absolutely beautifully. If you have a DeviantArt, I think you should post some works there. Joining would give you more publicity, but literature isn't as popular as the other arts on DeviantArt. Good luck; your work is quite absorbing.

[Lila]

I notice that about my work, too. It bothers me a lot, and I'm trying to improve that. Anyway, thank you very much, I always appreciate opinions :3

[Lila]

boomp, quite possibly?

[Laurarockstar]

*Goes to read~*

 

EDIT: Beautifull, i love your stories. You are very talented~

Edited February 12, 2012 by Laurarockstar