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Crisie was gasping for breath, scars covered her body from the invading undead and the Neglected who tried to attack her earlier. She took another deep breath and fell to the ground, coughing silently, a long, weezing sound to it. She took yet another breath and regained her strength, getting onto her feet. She could smell smoke stretching through the air, very warm smoke. Her nose tingled at the welcoming smell and she breathed it in, suddenly noticing her mistake she coughed, attempting to get it from her lungs. She coughed again as it overtook her, but soon passed due to the small ammount.

 

Crisie's eyes widened as she saw sparks of red and orange in the night sky, while more on the ground. Suddenly they grew into large flames of which started to gulp up the forest. "We've got to save it!" She yelled, running into the shadows of the forest.

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Flaming's eyes shot open. She was unconiscce (or however you spell it) for a long time, she can smell smoke and sneezed. Smoke is choking her. So she closed her nosiltle and tried to get back up. She gasped in horror when seeing the flame eating the forset. And things got even worse, Crisie was running off trying to save the forset. "No, wait!" Flaming Tornado cried out chasing after the guardain of nature. She flapped her wings, but dizzyly flew after her. She flew above her and swooped down, landing in front of the water opening her jaws to collect it. Flaming scooped up some of the water and took off fast. She glided over the forset and opened her mouth, allowing the water in her mouth drip out like a waterfall some of the fire. It manage to save one tree but then she noticed that the fire is spreading wildly.

"I need more help!" she yelled to the others. She flew down to collect more water, she was getting exhusted quickly but knew how importent this forset was. She flapped her heavy wings again to fly above the flaming trees. She poured more water again, the water washed away most of the fire from that one tree but it wasn't going to save the forset...

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Tears filled Crisie's delicate little eyes as she raced to save the forest, she stopped midway, trapped in gasps of air. Smoke quickly rose from furthur off and started filling her mouth, she coughed it out and took a deep breath of the last gulp of fresh air, she trapped it inside her mouth as she restricted herself from breathing in the smoke. She scurried forward until the heat of the flames got to her, rising up in front of her eyes. She turned back and scurried around, afraid she might get engulfed in flames. She was trapped yet again in flames as she took the wrong path, suddenly fire surrounded her fully.

 

Crisie watched in disbelief as fire surrounded her, no sign of escape from her death. She closed her eyes, the clan was a bad idea! The others would probably die to. The thought brang heavier tears drooping down her cheeks, forcing her to closer her eyes. Heat came over her scales until it was too hot, fire burnt onto her scales. She roared in agony, wishing the torture was over.

 

(( Don't worry, she won't die. ))

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(Hope im not too late)

 

Username: TotallyDrow

Charrie name: Vrael

Gender: Male

Type of Dragon: Ice Dragon

Personality:

 

Vrael, is a very wary hatchling. When he had hatched from his egg, he was in the posession of a human trading merchant. Scared for his life, Vrael managed to escape the merchant, and hide amongst the sewers of the village. He would wait till it was night to make his grand escape from the village, when there were less human's roaming the alleys, and when the temperature was much cooler.

 

After escaping, Vrael headed south, into the northern part of Ensia forest. Whilst taking refuge in the forest, Vrael had proven to be a very efficient hunter, managing to catch a few rodents here and there. Unable to fly, and unable to swim. Vrael is now trapped in the northern part of Ensia forest. He takes refuge within an abandoned badger hole, which is distinguishable by the constant cool breeze that escapes the entrance, and the distinct hatchling cries that echo throughout the night, before Vrael goes to sleep.

 

Not being around other dragons, for the first few days after hatching, has made Vrael very wary to others. He find's it hard to gain the trust of other dragons and would often remain suspicious. He does not have the same bonds a hatchling would have with its parents, as Vrael has never known his. He may act rude on occasion, and may be selfish, as he has never experienced living with other dragons. Being born in the center of a village market, and having to escape through a crowded village center, has given Vrael a small phobia towards the human's.

 

Powers (Read the rules):

 

Ice Enhancement's: When in dire times, Vrael can call upon his inner power source, to utilise the cold air around him into forming around his claws and tail. Enhancing the sharpness of his claws and tail and increases his attack range by 30%. Persistant use on this power however can prove fatal for Vrael, as it slowly start's to drain the inate coldness within all Ice Dragon's. It would leave him with a high temperature, which for an ice dragon is very dangerous. Vrael can only use this power to full effect when fully matured into an Adult.

 

Also as an ice dragon, rather then breathing fire, he has ice cold breath, which freezes rather then burns.

 

Stage (1st stage hatchie, mature, adult, ect): 1st Stage Hatchie

Clan or Loner? Loner. (As an egg was stolen from the nest by Humans. Managed to escape before being traded away by a merchant)

 

Other:

 

Can be distinguished by a scar, over his left eye, which he obtained during his escape from the human village.

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(( Actually, we have an OOC ^^. No one can probably see it because it is in the Unapproved section, but I'd appreciate it if you posted it there. Thanks! ))

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Ah, my bad. Sorry :/

If you want, i can delete the form here, so it doesnt interfere with the story,

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Flaming heard Crisie roaring, straight away she turned around ((while in air)) and roared back, telling her that she was going to help her. Flaming flapped her wings rapidly, rushing to get to Crisie in time. She swooped down while her claws stretched wide, ready to grab her. The flame burn roared at Flamining but it didn't seems to harm her flame-proof scales. Flaming Tornado grabbed Crisie by the shoulders and tried to pick her up. Flaming tried and tried but couldn't seems to fly them both to safety since she jsut learnt how to fly. She roared loudly, still flapping her wings as hard as she can but she doesn't seems to be lifting her up. Flaming was so exhusted, she could just drop out of the sky and lie on the ground intill she felt like moving. But no, she couldn't give up so easily. With all of her might and one huge flap, she shooted up like a rocket with Crisie in her claws. Carrying her. She tried to fly above the trees but some of them burnt Crisie since Flaming wasn't flying high enough. As soon as Flaming noticed this, she flapped harder to get into air.

As soon as they were above water, she dropped Crisie into the water. There was a loud splash! And some of the trees near the water bank gotten wet and their fires got wiped out. Then Flaming had too much, she glided to shore weakly btu carefully and crashed landed. Peddles, stone and dirt flew everywhere when she crashed into the wet bank. She looked befind her, seeing the forset still burning. Only some trees were safe but most of the forset was going to die...

Then she remembered Crisie. "Crisie? Crisie?!" she yelled at the water hoping that all of the sudden that the guardian of nature will bust to surface. But something was wrong...

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Crisie was overtaken by the sudden gliding, then she was dropped into the water. She landed on the rocky ground and held her breath, her wounds ached from the burns, the water made it sting more but the heat was gone. She closed her eyes and tried to swim to the surface with her wings and arms, but couldn't. Afraid, she started trying to get to the surface without freaking out.

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She dragged herself to the water, she never felt so exueseted and weak. She dived into the water to try and re-rescure Crisie. Everything was so muddly and dirty, even with her good eyesight she couldn't even see the hatchling drowning in the water. She busted to surface, breathing again then drive under water, kept on searching for her. Now she was really worried, not knowing how long a hatchling can survine under water.

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Jigsaw froze in fear, not knowing what to do. Crisie was drowning. The forest was burning. Seeing a long, sturdy stick, she picked it up and thrust it into the water, hoping Crisie would find it. Because she lacked arms, she held the stick firmly in her jaws. Her biggest concern was being pulled into the water because she couldn't swim. (Again, no arms.) "Freaking out isn't going to save anything," she thought to herself. Focusing on the water, Jigsaw bent over and shoved the stick futher into the water. She leaned against a rock so if Crisie did get the stick, her weight wouldn't pull her into the river. She watched Flaming dive into the water, again and again. "Flaming, get Crisie to grab the stick if you can find her. We'll pull her out!" she mumbled around her branch. Jigsaw hoped that Flaming understood what she said with her mouthful of wood.

Edited by UmbreWulf

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Vrael while hunting during the night, had noticed an orange glow coming from across Echo river. At first he thought it was the sun rising from the east, however on closer inspection, he realized that it was not the sun rising, but that the forest had caught fire.

 

The heat radiating of the flames, had already started to take its toll on the newborn ice dragon, who quickly noticed that his inner coldness had started to warm up. As an ice dragon, Vrael has a dislike for intense heat.

 

Vrael quickly retreated to the confines of the abandoned badger hole he called home. Quickly radiating a cool breeze within the hole in an attempt to maintain his body temperature.

Edited by TotallyDrow

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Shawnee groaned when her bones creaked and her muscles contracted in protest as she tried to crawl over to the river. She slid into the water to wash all the cuts and gashes that lined her body. Crisie and Flaming were in the water, she realized. I have to get them out.

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Crisie managed to bump her head a rock while in the water, bringing incredible pain into her head. She was trying to get up, and as she did a stick was sticking from the top of the water. Her claws grabbed it and she started to loose breath.

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Flaming nodded to Jigsaw. She grabbed the stick in her jaws and keep on searching for Crisie. Then at last! Flaming saw Crisie bumped her head into a rock while in water. She held her stick in front of her and Crisie grabbed it. With all of her strengh, she pulled the guardian of nature to surface. The air was hot and sticky, everywhere was smoke and flames. She was still panting loud as she helped Crisie back to shore. Everything felt so.....heavy. The river's speed was picking up making it really hard to swim. They were so close to shore now, but then the river got rougher and rougher, the speed was picking up heaps and it was almost chaos.

Knowing that both of them are not going to reach shore when the river is getting stronger and stronger. Flaming used her large feet to kick Crisie really hard in water to get her close enough to shore. But then a huge wave went over Flaming. It crashed down shollowing her and Flaming disapeared from sight...

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Crisie was knocked out as the wave overcame them, in a split second she regained consciousness. She managed to bob her head out of the water once, then she grabbed Flaming by the shoulders, hanging her arms over her. "For the clan..." She murmured silently then started swimming through the reddy coloured water.

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Flaming coughed loudly, she kicked with all of her might to try and get them both to shore. It was so exusting, there was nothing else on her apart from trying to get Crisie out of the water alive. She keep on kicking wilding, there was a lot of splashes from Flaming's legs and tail. Still the river was still getting stronger and stronger, in view there was a tree that got washed away was coming towards them like a spear. The water carried the tree down, it was coming at them in unimagebale speed and Flaming is starting to notice that every second is getting worse and worse...

 

((excures my poor spelling >_>))

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((this is the first time I've role played X.x))

 

Within his hole, Vrael could hear the crashing of burnt tree's falling into the ground from across the river, on a few occasions he thought he heard the sound of splashing, but shrugged it off, thinking it was tree's falling into the water.

 

After the trauma of having to escape the village center minutes after birth, Vrael was trying his best to drown out the sound of the raging flames. The fire had grown strong enough, that Vrael, from across Echo river could still feel the heat. Eyes closed, and paws over ears, the stress this forest fire was putting on Vrael had caused him to start hyperventilating.

 

Unknown to Vrael, his ice power was slowly encasing him in a protective ice sphere as a defensive precaution. Slowly the ice encapsulated the young hatchling forming a perfect sphere around him. The intense coldness that radiated of this sphere had slowly started to freeze the ground and hole walls around the young hatchling, as a way to maintain the temperature within the hole. This slow process of freezing the nearby surroundings had stopped at the entrance, forming icicles.

Edited by TotallyDrow

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(( You're excellent ))

 

Crisie managed to pull Flaming to the shore and was gasping for breath. "Quick... start a fire... in front of the... other fire... they'll... burn each other... out" She panted, rolling over to look at Flaming Tornado. The fires would compete, then burn each other out as she said.

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Flaming was still panting loudly, she tried to her and tried to talk "f-fire....cannot *pants* burn....*pants*....each....other"

The forset was spreading quickly, it almost looked impossable to save the last trees.

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"Ye...s it can... Mumma... done it... once" Crisie said, getting up onto her feet. She breathed in her last gulp of fresh air and kept it in her mouth. "Just do it" She murmured.

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((Actually, starting another fire would just make the fire worse. Yes, making a firebreak by burning a row of trees would stop the fire, but they don't have time to make a firebreak. If they just start another fire they either won't be able to control it or the fire wouldn't spread fast enough to create a firebreak.))

 

Edited by Backup77

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Within this Ice sphere, time had stopped for Vrael. He was no longer hungry, and did not require water. Vrael had entered a trance like state.

 

However, for an ice dragon using such power at such a young age was unheard off, since Ice Dragon hatchlings are normally surrounded by their parents for protection. The parents would normally teach the hatchlings, how to utilize their ice enhancement ability once they had matured and grown wings, due to their tendency to explore at that age. Since Vrael had activated this mysterious inner power at such a young age, he had no control over this ability and therefore would not know how to free himself from the sphere after the danger was gone.

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((Ok LOL))

Ananda was terrified. Fire raged around her, while smoke choked her. Coughed, she looked around through the smoke, her eyes steaming. There! Three other hatchlings, standing by the river. Weakly, she stumbled over to the other hatchlings. She held her head low to the ground, allowing her just a bit more fresh air. Air... she needed more air... and she needed to help the other hatchlings... When she reached the other hatchlings, she stood in the middle of them and, as fast as her weak wings could, flapped her wings in an attempt to circulate some fresh air. After that, she closed her eyes, and, still flapping, formed a dome of shadows around her and the other hatchlings. It took about three seconds to do, due to her weakness, so if the other hatchlings were exceedingly stupid they could get out. Ananda almost passed out when the dome was finished, but she fought to stay conscious. If she didn't, either the dome would disappear or it would remain and suffocate them all. Ananda didn't know, only that maybe she could buy them some time by doing this, enough for some of the smoke to float away...

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