Posted September 19, 2011 (edited) The Colored Civilization This is the symbol of the Colored Civilization, only the blue triangle in the center is pointing up. Intro The small child sat in his grandfather's lap with wide eyes. "Papa, could you tell me the story again?" "What story, my child?" the old wrinkled man asked, looking down at you youth in his lap. He knew perfectly well what the child was asking him to tell. "The one about the Colored People, Papa." the young boy said as he smiled with excitement. "Ahhh yes, my child. I guess I could tell it one last time for you. But you must promise me one thing." "What is it, Papa?" "You must promise to tell it to your children when I am not here to tell it for you. Will you do that for me, little one?" The old man's face darkened but the faint smile that was perpetually on his lips never went away as he heard the boy's answer. "Of course, Papa." The old man smiled and looked at the eager eyes awaiting for him to start. They came at the beginning of time with only the purest of forms, their colors and their power was strong. In the beginning of time there were five of them. Only five colors. Red, Yellow, Blue, White and Brown. They were called the makers of Earth, the creators of the universe. They were known as gods to the humans. The reason that they choose our planet is unknown, but the reason why it looks like it does today is because of them. They formed and shaped every living thing down to the atom. Their powers were unbeatable and perfect in every way. No one really knows why they disappeared from earth so abruptly or how they came to be. Stories tell about how they saved the earth countless times from disaster, how they lived in a far island that they called home, coming and going as they pleased. They lived almost as one, peaceful but protective of their new found home. The reason that the humans called them The Colored People was because of their skin and powers. They did not look like normal humans; and you could always tell if they were or were not a Colored. But after they started to settle here on Earth, humans began to question the Colored People. They feared and respected them, but some wanted the Earth for their own to rule as they wished. The humans were filled with greed at this time. But if the humans ever wanted to over throw them they would have to find some way to hurt them. But so far the humans did not have any weapon against the Colored ones; they were superior in every single way. The Colored People could not be beaten... Or so the humans thought. ~~~ Her yellow skin slightly glowed under the moonlight, along with her matching eyes, with only the sound of her bare feet against the cold sand of the beach. She is young for her species and naive, the love of a human has clouded her thoughts with emotions that she should not have for some lower human that one like her should not even be associating with. But she did not care. He loved her and they planned on running away together. Well that is what she thought anyways. All of his empty promises of love and romance to lure her here on to the mainland, onto the beach where they could meet secretly. But she was wrong, so wrong. She should have been running back to her home island where she was safe. A cold hand clamped down on her mouth from behind and a husky voice whispered to her from behind. "A little yellow color like you should not be running around here at night." The girl's yellow eyes widening with fright as she felt a blade on her throat. She was too frightened and innocent to do anything about it. Her knees were trembling and her hands were shaking; you could tell that by her fright she was not a soldier, trained to fight or even defend herself. "Come, girl," the man said and turned her around only to see her human lover standing there looking at her like the coward he was, not doing anything to help her. There were ten other humans with them, all looking at her with disgust and mistrust. And before long, the yellow colored girl was tied by her wrists and ankles, knocked out by the butt of a sword and thrown in a bag... Only the human god could guess what they would do to her... They brutally tortured the yellow colored girl but she healed too quickly. The humans were looking for something to kill the Colored People with. They were scared of them, and like so often humans think that anything more powerful than them should be exterminated. The men tried everything in their knowledge to kill the yellow girl: gold, silver, stone, precious jewels, fire, drowning, suffocating, crushing, draining their colored blood, even a new yet unknown substance called black powder. Nothing seemed to work on the foreign being. Though sharp blades did seem to inflict pain upon her, she healed too fast for it to cause any real damage. But as they were just about to kill the poor thing, they tried a simple blade. Made out of pure iron. Iron was the Colored People's weakness. When they touched the blade to her skin it seemed like the blade sucked the life out of her arm almost instantly, making her new gray skin lifeless and dead. The color was stripped away from the yellow colored girl, the veins of color sucked into the iron blade causing her extreme agony. She was dead within an hour of holding the blade to her skin. She was now a lifeless corpse, all color drained from her body, and the humans now had a weapon against the Colored Civilization. Setting The Map of the CountryThe Map of the Country Map Key: Light green- grassy fields Dark green- dense forest. Brown boarders- cliff and stony beaches. Yellow/tan boarders- sandy beaches. Gray mountains- mountains Blue lines-rivers/lakes Orange spotted lines- well known trails to travel Red dots- bridges brown rectangles- major entrances/ exits to a city. Places: The Kingdom of the Colored- The Kingdom of the Colored is the main city of the Colored People. The almost modern looking castle is located in the center, with the court, and only the royal Blue colored leaders living there. Looks like this. Workers City- This is where the Dull colors and some times the Green colors usually are found. They both provide the Kingdom with food and build or work for the upper class colors. The buildings are also simpler than the homes in the Kingdom.The Village Colored Beach- The Colored Beach is where the Colored People take their loved ones who died either naturally or by the humans. When the Colored People die naturally-which is usually at 200 years, meaning they live twice as long as humans-they are buried in the sand and appear to dissolve into it, leaving a stain of their color. And now over the years that's why they call it the Colored Beach because of all the sand that makes it colored. The calm beach is also a common place to meditate and have some time to think. The beach Golden Gates- The Golden Gates look like the Golden Gate bridge in San Francisco. Only there are red guards making sure that no one can get in without permission. The top of the Golden Gates Neutral Island- Is used for trading between the humans and Colored People. Often fights break out here. The Iron City- The Iron City is full of humans that hate the Colored People. There is a dark black castle in the center and an iron gate in the middle. The houses of the Iron Soldiers surround it. The Castel Sonora Desert- The Sonora Desert is a huge expanse of desert plain that no one is ever said to have crossed because no one ever survives to tell the tale. The Desert The Barren Mountains - The mountains are very steep and high; not many people try to cross them since they only lead to the desert. Above. L'espelr- Meaning The Hope. Is a city that is dedicated to bring the colored and human races together. It is a very humble village that has a very friendly community. Clothing and Time period- I don't think I could exactly label the time period that this is in, but there are no guns just blades. Horses are the best mode of transportation and people still get attacked on some of the roads by bandits. The clothing is where a women rarely wears pants, but it is done by some women what fight. While men rarely wear metal armor, they do keep their weapons close. Iron Iron has now been discovered by the humans and weapons made of this metal are being made by the dozen, ranging from daggers and swords to sheilds and chains. The effects of iron are devastating to the Colored People. When a Colored person is touched with iron it only weakens them.But they are cut by iron, the color of their skin drains around the cut, draining it away like a water color painting that had water poured over it. Iron can also protect some one, a human for instance, from an attack of a colored person. Like if a Red Colored person we to use fire against a human that has an iron shield then the fire would have no effect because the Color's magic cannot get past it. Species Of Colored The Colored Civilization Primary Colors - Red, Blue, and Yellow. Red, Blue and Yellow are the highest and most elite colors that live in the societies and they are rarely born, they are considered a "pure color". A pure color is a colored that is fully one color and that makes them stronger than any "impurity." The pure colors are mostly desired in the society and are stronger in status and power. Secondary Colors Orange, Green, and Purple are the second highest in society and are more likely to be born. They are considered a "mix color" since they are the offspring of two pure colors. Pure Mixed A pure mixed colored is when any two colors, both different, mix together to make a color. For example: Teal, Plum, and Yellow-ish Green. (Something along those lines.) Dull colors Dull colors are made when two opposite colors mix. The only colors that make a dull color are: Purple/Yellow, Blue/Orange, and Red/Green. These combinations usually make a variation of brown. Absence Color There is only one color in this section, which is White. White is the absence of color among the Colored Civilization. To be a absent color you have to have a cretin gene, it is just by chance that a Colored would be White. But if a White is mixed with any other color and the white gene is not dominate, the offspring would just become slightly lighter than the other parent. Example: Blue+White= Light Blue Black There is no black known to the Colored Civilization. Since black is a mix of all of the colors, it just has not been made yet. There are very dark colors around but there are no actual black colors. Status The status of very colored person is very important in their society. The Colored People are almost being raciest, but that is just how it has always been to them. So please when you are in the role play make sure that you are acting like you are above or below a cretin class. Powers and Looks I am going to fill out all of these forms for each color so that you can understand what they are good at, their powers and what that cretin color can do. Color- The color Status- Their status in society. 1-10. 10 being the highest and 1 being the lowest. Physical Strength- 1-10. 10 being the most powerful and one being the least. Mental Strength- (Same as Physical) Specialties- What they are best known for in the colored community Physical Powers- The powers that that being usually has that has to do with the body or something tangible Mental Powers- The powers that the being usually has, and are not tangible. Looks- What they typically look like. Personality-Typical Personality of that color. Places- Where they are most often found. Color- Blue Status- They are the uppermost class. 10 Physical Strength- 8 Mental Strength- 10 Specialties- They are known to be the rulers of the Colored civilization, but only if they are pure can they be rulers. Most Blue's are still high class even if they are not the ruler. Physical Powers- They can control cretin amounts of water, and depending on how much they have trained and honed their powers determines how strong they are. Mental Powers- They can radiate whatever emotion that they want to into cretin people. This is why they are usually picked for rulers is because they can keep control of a situation if it gets out of hand. Looks- Their skin is usually a very dark pure blue. With eyes the same color as their skin. Their hair can vary from white to a dark blue almost black color. Depending on how much they are skilled with water it will show on their body. For example: scales like a fish, sea weed growing in their hair, gills, webbed fingers, etc. Personality- They are almost always very calm and tranquil, but if and when they are angry they lash out in one swift burst and then they are back to calm in only seconds. Places- Found anywhere near water. Color- Yellow Status- They are only lightly under Blues. 9 Physical Strength- 5 Mental Strengths- 10 Specialties- They are the spiritual center of the community because they are known as the producers of light. Physical Powers- They have very few physical powers, even if they do hone their powers they will only be able to produce sparking balls of light that can be used for a weapon but not usually, because of how little they usually have a need for any physical powers. Mental Powers- Their mental powers are very strong. They have the ability to look into someone's mind and find out anything the person knows, but they require physical contact to do so. Also through physical contact they can make people do what they want, if the person's mental power is weak. Looks- They have yellow toned skin color along with almost gold eyes. Their hair ranges from a dark gold to a light blonde. They don't usually have any physical differences. Personality- They are very happy creatures and tend to trust anyone they meet; they are the kindest of the Colored People. Places- Anywhere that is light. Color- Red Status- They are just below the Blues and Yellows. 8 Physical Strength- 10 Mental Strength- 4 Specialties- They are the warriors of the community. Physical Powers- Their physical powers are very strong which is why they are the warriors. Their physical powers include stronger muscles and swifter reflexes. They also have a limited ability to make flames and heat things up, they must train to perfect their flame powers. Mental Powers- About 90% of the Reds have no mental powers at all. But if they do train their powers, they can usually rise above the rest of the Reds as having a mental power allows them to talk to other Reds via telepathy, making them very useful in battle. Looks- The skin of the Reds are usually a dark crimson red, and with hair that is usually a fire red or as dark as black. Their eyes are mirror images of the flames from a fire. Their bodies can also be connected to flames for example: flame like skin, embers in their hair, smelling like smoke, etc. Personality- The Red's have a horrible temper and are known for it. They are very single minded when they are fighting or in battle. Places- Usually found training. Color- Green Status- 7 Physical Strength- 8 Mental Strength- 6 Specialties- The Green Colored People are known for being very well balanced and usually are the ones that grow plants and food for the Colored People, supplying them with their main food supply. Physical Powers- Their physical powers range from growing fruits and vegetables for the community, which is very important, to growing trees. Their powers can be used offensively or defensibly, by having poisonous vines for example. Mental Powers- Their mental powers only involve talking and understanding the plants, and communicating very well with other species. Looks- The greens are very earthy looking, with green eyes and green skin, and usually brown hair. They can also take on the colors and plants of their specialties, like leaves in their hair, bark as skin, vines, and etc. Personality- Their personality is usually calm and cheerful, but never usually getting along with Orange or Red Colored People. They are at peace with their plants. Places- Any where where there are plants involved, and they hate to be inside. Color- Orange Status- 7 Physical Strength-5 Mental Strength-10 Specialties- The Orange Colored People are the "nerds''. They are known to be the ones to figure out every and any problem for the Colored People. They love math, medical, and architectural problems. Physical Powers- They have very little physical powers but they can make things move with their minds, but not very extensively. And it comes in very handy when they are working on a lab or anything of importance. Mental Powers- Their mental powers are very great; no problem is too big for them. They are the ones responsible for making the plans for the Kingdom of the Colored, and they are solving all of the medical problems. But they are having great troubles to try and figure out why iron kills the Colored People. Looks- They have orange tinted skin and usually bright orange hair. They are not very connected to nature and are not usually effected by anything out of the ordinary. But they do ware glasses at times when they are older. Personality- They are very mathematical people and like to keep to themselves but are in general very kind people when they are not working on a problem. Places-Found working mostly, or thinking along the sands of the Colored Beach. Color- Purple Status- 8 Physical Strength- 8 Mental Strength-7 Specialties- The Purple colors are a bit rare because the colors Blue and Red don't usually get along. And they are the Royal assistants or be the assistants to the Red warriors. They are very versatile and can almost do anything associated with the Blue or Red colors because they are almost an equal mix of both. Physical Powers- Their physical powers lets them manipulate a cretin purple hue into any shape. Which makes them very unique. But those shapes that they make cannot last for long. Mental Powers- Mentally they have a wonderful imagination and that helps with their physical powers, and they are also the best artists. Looks- Their skin is usually a very rich purple along with their hair and eyes. They don't usually take any physical differences, maybe a purple flower here or there. Personality- Their personality is slightly bipolar. When they are calm they are very calm but when they are mad they are very mad. Places- Found working on art or in the mountains. Color- White Status- 8 Physical Strength- 7 Mental Strength-8 Specialties- They are very well rounded people and are treated with respect in the Colored community. They are known for being very flexible in what they do and can go from anywhere to working with the Dull colors to all the way up to association with the royal Blue colors. Physical Powers- Their physical powers are only slightly lower than the rest but their physical powers include being able to put a shield around their body almost as a second skin, but they cannot wear it for very long. Mental Powers- Their mental powers include being able to make others think that they are not there, putting the thought into their head and making them think that they do not see them. Ultimately they can become invisible to other colors and humans. But not other White colors. Looks- They have very white skin and even lighter hair, along with what looks like silver eyes. They are very light and almost translucent and may become tainted from being around a cretin color for over years. Personality- They are kind people and always trying to help with what ever they can. They can be slightly self righteous though, thinking that they are always slightly better than some colors. Places- Found mostly anywhere they like. Color- Dull (Including Brown.) Status- 6 Physical Strength- 8 Mental Strength-6 Specialties- They are the workers of the Colored People, they are the ones that do all of the heavy lifting and keep the society running smoothly. They live in the Workers City and are hired for jobs for the upper-class colors. Physical Powers- Their stamina is without question the highest, but brute force is not one of their specialties which makes them inefficient to fight like the Reds. They can work for hours with out stopping and are very much perfectionists. Mental Powers- Mentally they are quite low, they are the closest to humans. They can do some very fast logical thinking to help with their work though. Looks- Their skin color is the closest to humans out of the Colored People. Their skin can be tinted a cretin color but still be dark and brown. It also depends on their parents and which color was stronger than the other. But their hair and eyes color are usually brown and they don't have that many physical differences. Personality- Their personality is very neutral and get along very well with humans, but despise the upper class colors like Red, Blue, and Yellow. Places-Found working usually or around the cliffs. Humans The relationship with humans and the Colored People is very tense at this time. And they have now created two separate groups of people. 2/3 of the humans are with the Colored People and about 1/3 are against them. Iron Soldiers These are the men that found out the weakness of the Colored People, and are usually only men, but there is an occasional woman among the group because they find her useful or is a daughter of one of the men in the group. They are almost like an violent group of racists. Their one goal is to kill the Colored People no matter who or what they hurt. The group is not exactly frowned upon but they are not challenged, because usually the most powerful men of that town are in that group. Their weapon of choice would be anything that is iron to effect the Colored People. (Anything else you want to know please ask.) Colored Alliance These people are the ones that are with the Colored People and accept them for who they are. Helping them whenever needed and defending them against the people that would like to hurt them. Plot You can either be part of the colored civilization who is either fighting the humans and think that they are below you, or a colored that is just trying to get along with the humans and is protecting them. On the other hand you can be a human that is part of the Iron Soldiers that is trying to kill the colored race no matter who or what gets in the way. Or part of the Colored alliance who has made friends with the Colored People and are a liability in a fight. In general the colored and human race are in chaos and you have to find out whose side you are on. The Almighty Rules - Please post your character sheet. - I have every right to kick major ass if I don't like something. - All basic rules apply - Romance is accepted, but please keep it PG-13 - Violence and gore is welcomed, just don't be creepy about it. - Most of all, please have fun and make your own story. - I DON"T CONTROL EVERYTHING IN THE RP YOU CAN MAKE UP STUFF AND THINGS TO DO. But I do control major things that effects everyone. Character Sheet Colored Username: your Username Name: Something creative please since they are a whole other race. Gender: Only two pick one. Age: If they look around 20 in human years then they are 40 years old in Colored years. if they look around 50 then they are 100 etc. Color: The color and very detailed description of what your character looks like. You may include a picture if you like to help describe how they look. Status: What their rank in in the colored society. A number, 10 being the highest and 1 being the lowest. Specialty: What they do best. Can be mental or physical. Personality: How they normally act. Fore or against: Meaning for or against humans. Or put neutral if undecided. History: Optional. Other: Optional. Human Username: Obvious Name: You are a human so pick a human name. Gender: Only two pick one. Age: Obvious. Looks: Detailed on what they look like and a picture if you would like. Personality: How they act normally. For or against: Meaning for or against the Colored People, or nutural. History: Optional. Other: Optional. CHARACTER SHEETS ~~Mine~~ Username: WG Name: Violetta (Vi) Gender: Female Age: 40 Color: Purple. Violetta is a tall and slender women and graceful. She has dark, almost a royal, purple colored skin along with dark purple hair with highlights of lighter streaks as well. She has little scars all over her body from her childhood because she grew up in the dull colored society, along with various tattoos on her body which is mostly her own art. She is usually found warring white clothing to contrast her purple completion. What she looks like. Status: 8. Specialty: She is a good artist and is usually helping with the decorations of the Kingdom, and it one of the favorites of the royal family. Personality: Vi is usually very calm and very quiet. But when she does get angry her anger gets very violent and lets her physical powers out. Fore or against: Highly against humans. History: Violetta's parents were killed buy humans when she was very young, leaving her as an orphan and living with an old couple of Dull colored people. They raised her and kept her with the Dull colors even when her status was clearly above them. She was always teased buy the other children because she was not raised in a proper Colored home with her real parents. As she was growing up she was always doodling with paint and colors that she found here and there. She started to paint her pictures on the walls of the buildings and on the ground in her teenage years because she was slightly rebelling against the society. When she finally got caught for it she was brought to the royal family and in a strange twist they asked her to help paint the castle with her new contemporary paintings. And now she is living in the castle, the king and his children taking a liking to the young Purple color. Other: She has used her physical powers, or a purple hue, to paint and make a paint brush. Username: WG Name: Jane Fairborn Gender: Female Age: 19 Looks: Jane has long blonde hair that goes down to her waist and is usually braided behind her along with blue eyes. She is usually found warring what she is in the picture, because it is what normal Iron Warriors are warring. She always carries two fore arm length daggers with her at all times one strapped to her thigh and another at her hip. What she looks like. Personality: Jane is a very tepermental girl and is always on the move it seems, she can never keep still. She is the kind of person that wants answers and fast. She has very little of a soft side and seems to always be pretending that it dosent exist. For or against: Against. History: She was raised with a mother and father and 5 other siblings that were all against the Colored People. So being the youngest she was destined to hate the Colored People even though she has never actually met one. Other: None. ~~Neutual Demon~~ Username: Neutual Demon Name: Pálido Gender: Male Age: 30 Color: White. Pálido is a very pale, feminine looking man, looking more like a ghost than an actual person. The tattoo-like markings on his face “helps people see where his face is”, though the real meaning remains a mystery. He tends to wear red or black clothing to add some color to himself, though he remains pale and feminine as ever. Picture~ Status: 8 Specialty: He’s good at being that creeper person that always seems to be following behind you no matter where you go until you turn around to look, and then he’s just gone. Poof. Personality: He tends to be a rather quiet fellow, remaining silent until he feels his input is vitally important. Pálido helps others no matter what color they are in the same mute manner and leaves before they can thank him. He feels that ranking in society is obsolete, and those Colors that treat the lower ones like dirt is cruel, but he says little about the topic. Might ruffle too many feathers. Fore or against: Neutral- if they’re not chasing him down the road with fire and pitchforks, why bother them? History: It’s a secret. Though if he mentions something about black rabbits and pink turtles with little bows it’s probably totally untrue. Other: None~ Username: Neutual Demon Name: Orion Godspeed Gender: Male Age: 23 Looks: Orion looks like one of those people one finds in taverns all the time with a loosely buttoned shirt and a crooked smile all the time with his golden earring in his left ear. Yet his eyes hold a deadliness to them, and he's always carrying an assortment of weapons on him, so few bother him. He looks the same even when completely drunk. He's about average height for a man and rather lean, but he sure packs a punch. Picture~ Personality: He's a bit on the sly side, always with a small smile on his lips and never taking much of anything seriously. Yet he works for mostly money, and if someone appears that he feels is a threat to his income he gets rather nasty. Oh, and he's a rather heavy gambler and tends to drink a tad too much every once in awhile. Life is never serious to him. For or against: Depends on what job he has and how much he's getting paid. History: I'll tell you when I think up of something... Other: None ~~Crisis~~ Username: Crisis Name: Talla Gender: Male Age: 36 Color: Green (Picture) Status: 7 Specialty: Master florist and botanist. Also exceptional woodworker, archer, and plays a little music on the lute in his free time, though he is only ok. Personality: Talla is usually calm and collected. He is protective of his friends and family, and will agressively defend thm. For or against: Nuetral, and subject to change, although highly unlikely. History: Talla has spent his time learning about plants, and medicines, spending his free time practicing archery. When he grew of age, he opened his own shop where he first met Azul by chance. Other: Best friends with Azul. Username: Crisis Name: Azul Gender: Male (Picture) Age: 34 Color: Blue Satus: 10 Specialty: Azul is incredibly talented in emiting emotions, and a pathalogical trickster. He also has a silver tongue, and is incredibly persuasive. He has trained to use small knives that are easily concealed, which are kept on person at all times. Personality: Azul is sarcastic, caefree, naive, and only wants to have fun. For or against: Azul, being raised in the palace his entire life, is strongly Pro-Colored History: Azul is the price of the Colored Kingdom, however he often shirks his duties, and ditches responsibility to leave the castle and explore, where he first met Talla in his shop. Other: Best freinds with Talla. ~~Kokay~~ Username: Kokay Name: Ikuma Gender: Female Age: 42 Color: Ikuma's skin is slightly more vibrant than a crimson red. Her hair, however, is a crimson color. Her face is sharply angled and her eyes are like fire. They dance, even when she stares. Her body is very well muscled. She stands tall, at 5'9". Her hair is short cropped, to stay out of the way. Ikuma wears a dark black tunic when training. When she is not, however, she wears a long black dress, with britches and a shirt underneath should she need to change quickly. Status: 8 Specialty: Fighting with a shield. A razor edged shield and a halberd, to be exact. But she is also capable of talking mentally, poorly. Personality: Ikuma is the generic Red. She is hot headed, but her anger fades quickly too. Her rage is usually taken care of as soon as it crops up, so grudges are not her forté. She is passionate about her people and anything she does. She works hard at what she does, whether she loves it or not. She is incredibly loyal and would rather give up her life for someone else than allow them to be harmed. She takes things to heart, but only if they are said by someone she holds particularly dear. Ikuma is also a bit of a perfectionist, and will go out of her way to make sure that everything is in place for things to work properly. For or against: For History: Briefly, she was born of two Reds. They raised her to be the woman she is today. Ikuma has hardly mastered the art of communicating mentally. Most of the time, it's just random out bursts of her normal thoughts. Sometimes things she doesn't want known. She has always liked humans and sees them as a sort of child to her. She looks on the maternally, even though her people have been murdered by them. Ikuma sees herself as vastly superior to the humans, and thus does not feel the need to kill them unless they first start the battle. Other: None ~~Packgoater~~ Username: Packgoater Name: Chetyn Gender: Male Age: 50 Color: Brown. This, basically. Status: 6 Specialty: Chetyn is best at anything that requires him to lift it, move it, push it, or anything physical, really. He's fairly good at problem solving as well, though not exceptionally. Personality: Chetyn is a mildly clever, bitter sort of man. He's not the sort who typically likes humans, nor does he hate the others that are above him. At least, none of this is normally expressed on the outside. On the inside rage boils within him, and everyone knows what happens when heat is kept inside something with no ways to vent -it eventually explodes. However, he's dreadfully loyal. If he promises something, that promise is kept. If his fathers before him promised someone something, he'll see that their debt is filled. Because of this he takes a sort of high-and-mighty attitude when someone asks for his word. He's generally mild tempered, but so long as you're someone he cares about, be prepared to face his full wrath when you say something demeaning about his pride or honor. For or against: Neutral, leaning more towards For. History: Optional. Other: Optional. ~~Kitty137~~ Username: Kitty137 Name: Yana Yuko (these are first two names. She uses both, but they usually simply call her Yanni, or Yanni-sempai (that's how she's called from those who have lower status than she does)) Yukushima. Gender: female Age: 33 Color: Yellow. Her eye color is between gold and orange. Status: 7 Specialty: Great in Math and Science. Loves Astronomy. Doesn't work on producing light so much like on searching the sky and discovering new stars and planets, but she uses her power of making balls of light to make small solar systems or galaxies. Personality: Always smiles, but VERY serious if needed. Never looses her head in dangerous situations. History: Doesn't really says it all around the place. Her parents died because humans killed them. Because she's good at Science, they wanted her to discover a way for Colored people to have immunity on iron. She refused. For or against: Is against humans, though tries to stay neutral as much as possible. Other: None. ~~Qoso~~ Username: Qoso Name: Kornith Baulsson Gender: Male Age: 42 Looks: Kornith is a hard man with a stern face and stance. He has liquid brown eyes and messy, brown hair that he often pulls back and ties with a strip of leather. A constant stubble shadows his chin, though he claims to shave often. His hands are rough and his knuckles are larger than they ought to be, from hard labor as a child when he was apprenticed to a black smith. He has a strong build, something else he adapted from his time working metal. Though he is strong, his shoulders hunch inward slightly, making him appear older than he is. Click Here for a photo representation Personality: Kornith demands reaction from the men he oversees. Not necessarily respect, but he does expect that his orders be followed and done well. He has no use for men who do not do as they should. Being a man of honor, Kornith requires that any person - male or female - from whom he takes orders must be a sufficient leader. If Kornith deems they to be otherwise, he will work to have them brought down in rank. In his dealings with people outside of the Iron Warriors, Kornith is much more forgiving. He is often seem walking through the market streets of Iron City, bantering with and offering advice to shopkeepers, encouraging the children to grow up well, or giving the dogs a good rub on their backs. Interactions with the colored people, however, are on an entirely different level. Kornith becomes cold and ruthless, as if he does not see the colored people as sentient beings. Kornith does not acknowledge their pain, joy, love, or hate at all. When he kills a colored person, his expression of emotion is no more than if he were carving wood or working metal. For or against: Against. Kornith oversees the working of the iron and development of new weapons for the Iron Warriors. He personally tests new designs on the colored who are unfortunate enough to encounter him. History: Being the youngest of eight brothers, Kornith was rough-housed a lot as a youngster. One incident involving his brothers gave him a bad injury on his left knee that still effects him to this day. He found relief in working as an apprentice to a black smith, because there he could create and work without his brothers bearing down on him. This foundation in metal working lead him to later oversee the workings of weapons for the Iron Warriors later. The most significant part of his history, however, was that of his love. He grew up in the city of L'espelr, and it was there that he met Áriah, a green woman. Even through their differences, the two of them became very close. When Kornith turned 23, they announced their intentions to be wed. Needless to say, this did not make everyone happy. Throughout the next two years, twisted words and schemes from higher powers made it seem as if Áriah had betrayed Kornith. His mentor poisoned his mind against the colored people, and Kornith joined the Iron Warriors. Shortly after he joined their ranks, Kornith was told that Áriah was killed by her own people because she wanted to marry a human. Through all their troubles, he still loved her... and a part of him died with her. Now, Kornith still supports the Iron Warriors, keeping his history and his thoughts about the issues to himself. Other: He suffered a deep cut on the right side of his head above the ear, and the spot has always remained tender. That spot is covered up by his hair, though, so unless someone knows about it, the scar remains invisible. He also has a weak left knee from an injury as a child. Though he is strong and has a high endurance, Kornith can be clumsy due to that knee, even to the point of a slightly awkward running gait. Username: Qoso Name: Siusan Manneilli Gender: Female Age: 14 Looks: Though she is tall for her age, Siusan is still young and her face shows it. Her last bit of baby fat clings to her cheeks, giving her a rounder face than either of her parents and keeps her skin soft. She still keeps her wavy, black hair down, which is also a sign of youth. She claims that is because her hair is easier to tame when it dries loose, but honestly Siusan likes the look of the ringlets that form close to the tips of her hair, some of which stop right before the small of her back. Her dark purple eyes she inherited from her grandfather, and her pale skin has been passed down through her family (though each new generation becomes a little less pale). Click Here for a pictorial representation Personality: Siusan is naiive to a fault and she avoids confrontation at any cost. This has earned her at least one bruise from a peer and some praise from the older folks of L'espelr. Along side of these qualities, Siusan is also quick to help someone else who is hurt, shy, or otherwise needs someone to be a friend to them (with the exception of bullies. She stays away from bullies, even though they might need acknowledgement, too.) She also takes great joy in creative expression and will listen for hours as other people sing or play instruments or watch as other people paint or sculpt. While she enjoys watching and listening other people, Siusan consistently refuses to try painting or singing. She claims that she is not creative at all and does not want to embarrass herself. Though she does not participate in the creation of art, Siusan has a reputation for helping artists build and expand on their ideas. She refuses to see it herself, but her art is one of thoughts and ideas and her creativity is expressed through talking with other people. For or against: For both the humans and the colored people. History: Hers was one of the first families to come live in L'espelr. Though they were not the founders, the Manneillis lived with them. L'espelr is all that Siusan has known... so much to the point that she doesn't really believe that there is nor can be a war between humans and the colored people. Siusan's grandfather was a dark purple man, nearly bordering on blue. He is the one from whom Siusan inherited her purple eyes. Somewhere back in her history, Siusan knows that there was a white colored woman who married into the Manneilli family, which made many of her descendents have a paler skin tone. Her core family is made up of her human mother and father, an older brother whom she both admires and fears, and the baby that her mother still carries. Other: Siusan greatly enjoys it when Alanyja comes to visit. She soaks up the woman's creativity! She thinks of Alanyja as a good friend. Siusan also knows some about Kornith and Áriah, though she's sure much of it is false or exaggerated. She wasn't born yet when everything took place, but being as the topic is taboo many of the youngsters liked to speculate and make up stories about them. ~~Coralkiki~~ Username: Coralkiki Name: Alanyja Nattsol Teressi Lucana Soliss Gender: female Age: 33 Color: Purple. Her long purple hair is pulled back into a high ponytail, with a purple daisy-like flower sticking out of it. Her bangs go a little passed her eyebrows. It is clear that she is more Red than Blue, especially if you look at her hair, which has a lot of plain raid strands. She’s tall with a heart-shaped face and slim figure. She often has paint stains scattered here and there on her skin and clothes. Status: 8 Specialty: Her creativity. She is easily one of the best artists in the coloured kingdom, something she is very proud of. She is especially known for her jewellery and sculptures, but her paintings and drawings aren’t too bad either. Personality: Alanyja has a very sweet and helpful disposition. She is also very creative, and is often found in her ‘studio’ working on some form of art. She has an artist’s eye for detail, and notices nearly everything, though she ignores nearly all negativities. She is quite a jealous person, though she does her best to keep this a secret. Alanyja is the ‘official handy-girl’ of the kingdom, just because she doesn’t know the meaning of no. She tries her hardest to help everyone, and keeps trying until exhaustion and frustration catch up to her. She will lash out in anger, and she can be rather violent, to a lot of people’s surprise. For or against: for History: Not too special. Ask me if you want some details. Other: Almost everyone knows Alanyja, if not personally, by reputation. Feel free to pretend you’ve met her a million times Also, you should try to avoid mentioning ‘the purple hue’ she is not particularly good at creating it, and over the years it has become somewhat of a touchy subject. Username: Coralkiki Name: Nicoline Ferland Gender: Female Age: 22 Looks: Long and straight black hair, usually in a braid, ponytail or bun. She has dark green eyes, framed by long lashes. A square-ish face with a strong jaw. She’s tall and slim with defined muscles. She is usually seen wearing clothes in dark colours. She’s rarely seen in a dress or skirt, finding pants more practical, should a battle occur. Personality: A slightly sceptical and violent tom-boy. She desperately wants to be good at something and noticed, and gets very annoyed when people ignore her. Though a few of the Iron Soldiers who have watched Nicoline grow up find it hard to believe their little girl has become a competent young lady, she has proven multiple times that she is completely capable of killing coloureds. She is quite ‘every man for himself’ but there are some people she cares enough about to forget about that mentality. For or against: Against (She’s an Iron Soldier, what do you expect x3) History: Nick was mostly raised by the Iron Soldiers, as her father was one of the leaders. Her mother died when she was 6 (shortly after her sister was born) leaving her already busy father with even more work. Nicoline’s father loves both his children, but his work with the Iron soldiers has often led to them being pushed a little aside and left to find their own entertainment. For as long as she can remember, Nick’s ‘entertainment of choice’ has been training with the Iron Soldiers, or watching if they don’t let her participate. This has led her to becoming quite a good fighter. Other: Don’t dare call her Nikki. You won’t live to tell the tale (Unless you’re very special) Username: Coralkiki Name: Nathalija Ferland Gender: Female Age: 16 Looks: Wavy light brown hair that usually hangs loose, stopping just past her shoulders. She’s a fair bit shorter than her sister, and doesn’t have the muscles Nicoline has. She has dark blue eyes, which are what she loves the most about her looks. She does wear skirts and dresses, not being the same fighter as her sister. She is rarely seen without a book in her hands. Personality: Cool, calm and collected. Whereas her sister turned to combat, Thalija turned too art, especially literature. However, Nick has often forced Nathalija to join her practicing, so she has picked up some things. Still, the closest Nathalija wants to get to a battlefield is tending the wounded. She is an excellent cook and is frequently found in the kitchen preparing meals for the soldiers. For or against: Against/neutral-ish. With some persuasion she could be made to support the Colored. History: See Nicoline Ferland’s history. Other: Optional. ~~Tiffashy~~ Username: Tiffashy Name: Arystal Gender: Female Age: She looks like 17 in human years but in colored, she is 34 years. (i'm bad at my maths ) Color: Purple. She is a pretty dark purple so if you saw her in the dark, you might mistake her as a black. Status: 8 Specialty: Physical strengh. Even though everything thinks its Mental since she loves art and everything and draws made up animals all of the time when she is alone. Personality: She is mostly nice, nice to everyone even strangers. But you wouldn't want to get the wrong side of her. Fore or against: Fore History: She had been helping the royal family as long as she could remember. Making paintings, painting the wall a rich color, carveing statues. She couldn't even remember her old parents so she was looked after by a old, grumpy green person. (Sometimes when she is upset, she would call her a hag which is really offending towards the old, rude lady). The green lady is called Mrs. Yhina and she treats Arystal like dirt while she is friendly towards other people. Sometimes Arystal would run into the moutains and draw sketches of the animals there. Mrs.Yhina wouldn't tell anything about her past. Other: Optional. Username: Tiffashy Name: Mrs.Yhina. Her first name is Sinous Gender: Female Age: 50 in human looks but is actully 100. Color: Green Status: 7 Specialty: She loves planting plants and trying to create her own huge garden. She mainly uses her Physical Strength for planting flowers or small trees. Personality: Mean, grumpy, rude. Only towards Arystal. She is nice and friendly towards others. Fore or againest: Againest. History: She was planting some of her favourite flowers in the garden a long time ago, then she saw smoke in the distance. She dropped her plant and ran to the area from were the smoke was coming from and a large house was on fire. She bust in through the wooden door, her cuts healed quickly and she looked around to try and find anyone. Mrs.Yhina knew that what she was doing was stupid but she wanted to save anyone who was trapped in this burning down house. She could hear crying and she bolted towards one of the bedrooms and found a red and a blue lying on the ground with a iron sword cut on their backs with a crying purple baby crying in the mother's hands. Acting quickly, she grab the baby and ran outside of the house just in time before it collapsed. Ever since, she raised the baby and called it Arystal. Other: Nope! Edited January 14, 2012 by XxWaterGaridanxX Share this post Link to post
Posted September 19, 2011 Hmmm........ this sounds like a very interesting rp, obviously it isn't close to done yet so I wont do my usual hard-ass criting, instead I'll give you a couple pointers. It's always good to give plenty of information even if it seems a bit excessive at times it's always nice to know plenty about what it is you're trying to picture. In this I don't mean you should give away all your surprises and stuff to be reavealed later, in this I mean that you should give more info on what is already there. Other than that it seems to be up to snuff. Share this post Link to post
Posted September 25, 2011 Lol. Hey Water ^-^ I'm going to join this when I can. I'll join this when I get regular internet access again. Share this post Link to post
Posted September 28, 2011 (edited) Red, Green, and blue are the primary colors of light. Magenta, Yellow, and Cyan, are the primary colors of dyes and inks. Red Yellow and Blue are the primary colors of paints and art, and are commonly accepted as the "true" prime colors. Since Red Yellow and Blue are what most people learn in art class, it is the set that makes the most sense to use. Edited September 28, 2011 by sailing101 Share this post Link to post
Posted October 2, 2011 Amazingly I return. I have another chunk of suggestiveness to give you. Since this is a RP based on color I think it would be eye catching to color code the different sections headings with a pattern of sorts. For example (Warning this is only an example) red for descriptions, blue for story, orange for plot and yellow for setting. A questions I have is: if the colored civilization have every color covered, how can you tell them apart from humans of the same color? White humans- Absence Color= Differences? Another question, one about reality 8O, if they have the ability to smelt iron, why don't they have boats? Boats came much earlier than any smelted metal. Or for that matter why can't they get to the island? This is a question of why. It is kind of obvious that the Colored Civilization is scary but that wouldn't stop the humans from trying to eliminate the Colored Civilization all assasin like. Well that's all I got on what you have so far. Good work so far. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 27, 2011 Amazingly I return. I have another chunk of suggestiveness to give you. Since this is a RP based on color I think it would be eye catching to color code the different sections headings with a pattern of sorts. For example (Warning this is only an example) red for descriptions, blue for story, orange for plot and yellow for setting. A questions I have is: if the colored civilization have every color covered, how can you tell them apart from humans of the same color? White humans- Absence Color= Differences? Another question, one about reality 8O, if they have the ability to smelt iron, why don't they have boats? Boats came much earlier than any smelted metal. Or for that matter why can't they get to the island? This is a question of why. It is kind of obvious that the Colored Civilization is scary but that wouldn't stop the humans from trying to eliminate the Colored Civilization all assasin like. Well that's all I got on what you have so far. Good work so far. Not to rain on your parade, but the color coding could be hard to read sometimes... Like yellow.... Ow. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 27, 2011 Noticed that you changed the sub-title to "Would love feedback" are you wanting critique now? Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2011 Yeah, I see where you are going and it looks really interesting. You give a really strong history about it and it seems that you are really working on improving this bit by bit even if it takes you a long time. Share this post Link to post
Posted December 22, 2011 I'll join as soon as it's open. YAY! A good Role-Play! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 23, 2011 I just have two quick questions~ 1. What litteracy level are you planing for this? Just curious :] 2. What are you planning on putting as the max for characters? I have two well developed characters I'd like for this, and one semi-well developed (though she's one of the previous's sister, so she could be an NPC...) that should be done by the time this is approved Share this post Link to post
Posted December 24, 2011 Please remember not to post unless you have something constructive to add, like a critique. Share this post Link to post
Posted December 28, 2011 (edited) I'm kinda getting tired of fixing every little detail... Cause i know it will never be perfect... but its done... @coralkiki 1- like semi-lit/ lit somewhere inbetween 2- And 3. Glad you are going to join Edited December 28, 2011 by XxWaterGaridanxX Share this post Link to post
Posted December 29, 2011 YAY! Its finally approved and accepting character forums! Share this post Link to post
Posted December 30, 2011 I'll be joining this as soon as I get in the mood to create a character :3 Share this post Link to post
Posted December 31, 2011 (edited) Username: Neutual Demon Name: Pálido Gender: Male Age: 30 Color: White. Pálido is a very pale, feminine looking man, looking more like a ghost than an actual person. The tattoo-like markings on his face “helps people see where his face is”, though the real meaning remains a mystery. He tends to wear red or black clothing to add some color to himself, though he remains pale and feminine as ever. Picture~ Status: 8 Specialty: He’s good at being that creeper person that always seems to be following behind you no matter where you go until you turn around to look, and then he’s just gone. Poof. Personality: He tends to be a rather quiet fellow, remaining silent until he feels his input is vitally important. Pálido helps others no matter what color they are in the same mute manner and leaves before they can thank him. He feels that ranking in society is obsolete, and those Colors that treat the lower ones like dirt is cruel, but he says little about the topic. Might ruffle too many feathers. Fore or against: Neutral- if they’re not chasing him down the road with fire and pitchforks, why bother them? History: It’s a secret. Though if he mentions something about black rabbits and pink turtles with little bows it’s probably totally untrue. Other: None~ Username: Neutual Demon Name: Orion Godspeed Gender: Male Age: 23 Looks: Orion looks like one of those people one finds in taverns all the time with a loosely buttoned shirt and a crooked smile all the time with his golden earring in his left ear. Yet his eyes hold a deadliness to them, and he's always carrying an assortment of weapons on him, so few bother him. He looks the same even when completely drunk. He's about average height for a man and rather lean, but he sure packs a punch. Picture~ Personality: He's a bit on the sly side, always with a small smile on his lips and never taking much of anything seriously. Yet he works for mostly money, and if someone appears that he feels is a threat to his income he gets rather nasty. Oh, and he's a rather heavy gambler and tends to drink a tad too much every once in awhile. Life is never serious to him. For or against: Depends on what job he has and how much he's getting paid. History: I'll tell you when I think up of something... Other: None ^^; I hope these are okay. I was kind of rushing because I got distracted by pretty pictures... Edit: Oh, and Pálido means "pale" in Spanish. ^^; Edited December 31, 2011 by Neutual Demon Share this post Link to post
Posted December 31, 2011 (edited) Username: Crisis Name: Talla Gender: Male Age: 36 Color: Green (Picture) Status: 7 Specialty: Master florist and botanist. Also exceptional woodworker, archer, and plays a little music on the lute in his free time, though he is only ok. Personality: Talla is usually calm and collected. He is protective of his friends and family, and will agressively defend thm. For or against: Nuetral, and subject to change, although highly unlikely. History: Talla has spent his time learning about plants, and medicines, spending his free time practicing archery. When he grew of age, he opened his own shop where he first met Azul by chance. Other: Best friends with Azul. Username: Crisis Name: Azul Gender: Male (Picture) Age: 34 Color: Blue Satus: 10 Specialty: Azul is incredibly talented in emiting emotions, and a pathalogical trickster. He also has a silver tongue, and is incredibly persuasive. He has trained to use small knives that are easily concealed, which are kept on person at all times. Personality: Azul is sarcastic, caefree, naive, and only wants to have fun. For or against: Azul, being raised in the palace his entire life, is strongly Pro-Colored History: Azul is the price of the Colored Kingdom, however he often shirks his duties, and ditches responsibility to leave the castle and explore, where he first met Talla in his shop. Other: Best freinds with Talla. Edited December 31, 2011 by Crisis Share this post Link to post
Posted December 31, 2011 To give a fai warning, I may be slow because I may have to ype some stuff out on my PS3, and that really does take forever. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 1, 2012 Username: Kokay Name: Ikuma Gender: Female Age: 42 Color: Ikuma's skin is slightly more vibrant than a crimson red. Her hair, however, is a crimson color. Her face is sharply angled and her eyes are like fire. They dance, even when she stares. Her body is very well muscled. She stands tall, at 5'9". Her hair is short cropped, to stay out of the way. Ikuma wears a dark black tunic when training. When she is not, however, she wears a long black dress, with britches and a shirt underneath should she need to change quickly. Status: 8 Specialty: Fighting with a shield. A razor edged shield and a halberd, to be exact. But she is also capable of talking mentally, poorly. Personality: Ikuma is the generic Red. She is hot headed, but her anger fades quickly too. Her rage is usually taken care of as soon as it crops up, so grudges are not her forté. She is passionate about her people and anything she does. She works hard at what she does, whether she loves it or not. She is incredibly loyal and would rather give up her life for someone else than allow them to be harmed. She takes things to heart, but only if they are said by someone she holds particularly dear. Ikuma is also a bit of a perfectionist, and will go out of her way to make sure that everything is in place for things to work properly. For or against: For History: Briefly, she was born of two Reds. They raised her to be the woman she is today. Ikuma has hardly mastered the art of communicating mentally. Most of the time, it's just random out bursts of her normal thoughts. Sometimes things she doesn't want known. She has always liked humans and sees them as a sort of child to her. She looks on the maternally, even though her people have been murdered by them. Ikuma sees herself as vastly superior to the humans, and thus does not feel the need to kill them unless they first start the battle. Other: None Share this post Link to post
Posted January 1, 2012 Username: Packgoater Name: Chetyn Gender: Male Age: 50 Color: Brown. This, basically. Status: 6 Specialty: Chetyn is best at anything that requires him to lift it, move it, push it, or anything physical, really. He's fairly good at problem solving as well, though not exceptionally. Personality: Chetyn is a mildly clever, bitter sort of man. He's not the sort who typically likes humans, nor does he hate the others that are above him. At least, none of this is normally expressed on the outside. On the inside rage boils within him, and everyone knows what happens when heat is kept inside something with no ways to vent -it eventually explodes. However, he's dreadfully loyal. If he promises something, that promise is kept. If his fathers before him promised someone something, he'll see that their debt is filled. Because of this he takes a sort of high-and-mighty attitude when someone asks for his word. He's generally mild tempered, but so long as you're someone he cares about, be prepared to face his full wrath when you say something demeaning about his pride or honor. For or against: Neutral, leaning more towards For. History: Optional. Other: Optional. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 1, 2012 Accepted And by tomorrow afternoon we will be starting. Share this post Link to post
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