Posted January 2, 2014 It for the most part looks good, little simple would prefer if it could be fleshed out a little more but, otherwise its good that I can see. Approved. There. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 2, 2014 With a strong recommendation of lurking around in other RP's as well tacked on. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 3, 2014 Yes. Your form has been approved, you can start role-playing. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 3, 2014 Forum Name:Waltzer Dragon Name:Soul Breed:Gold Gender:Male Image: Appearance:Soul looks exactly like any other gold dragon with the exception of his blue eyes,which he inherited from his mother and a sharper tale which he inherited from his father Personality:Soul is a friendly,kind-hearted dragon.He is loyal to his friends and would sacrifice his life to save his beloved ones ,can sometimes be arrogant about his 'Gold' lineage and is more importantly charismatic. Powers:Soul can change his body colors into black and white on his will which can help him sneak past enemies and get into enemy territory undetected. Age:Newly Hatched History:Soul,naturally as a Gold dragon,was raised in a rich family,he hated the quiet rich life and decided to go in an adventure to seek victory and glory,however during his adventure he was caught and was about to get his body cut to pieces,he managed to escape in the last second by shifting his colors and running away undetected. He is now on the run from that town being chased by people who want to kill him,and when he escapes he will meet you guys. Extra:N/A Share this post Link to post
Posted January 3, 2014 The only thing I can see here is..... whats the draw back to his power? Can he do it forever? Is he limited, what about shades of white and black? Share this post Link to post
Posted January 4, 2014 (edited) Can he turn Fifty shades of black? Edited January 4, 2014 by Melomancer Share this post Link to post
Posted January 4, 2014 (edited) Just a suggestion: maybe we should slow down with recruiting new players for now? All these rescues happening at once is getting kind of ridiculous and I would like to move on with the story. No hard feelings Natukiro. Edited January 4, 2014 by Booo Share this post Link to post
Posted January 4, 2014 He can use them for about an hour at max,all shades of black and white Share this post Link to post
Posted January 4, 2014 Don't worry, I'm not that emotional ( to be exact, people say I'm dense) I can understand too. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 5, 2014 True, story has a hard time moving with new characters showing up left right and center. And all shades of black and white..... for a hour... just out of wonder does he change like the pigment in his scales or a magic field form fits around him making him the shades of black and white or....? Share this post Link to post
Posted January 5, 2014 (edited) Can't we just say that Crusher found Quinn while everyone was on their way home? It will make things move a lot quicker and we can stick to our original plan. Edited January 6, 2014 by Booo Share this post Link to post
Posted January 5, 2014 True we could say the home very close by for story's sake. The home is a entrance to a tunnel network and they could be right by one of the entrances. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 5, 2014 Sorry for not replying. School's started and stuff. I'll try to post tomorrow. It's late right now. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 6, 2014 (edited) True we could say the home very close by for story's sake. The home is a entrance to a tunnel network and they could be right by one of the entrances. Alright, they probably can't travel very far due to a few injured party members. I'll let you decide where they're headed, I keep forgetting where they are at the moment. Edit: Forgot to mention I've also got school stuff happening. Edited January 6, 2014 by Booo Share this post Link to post
Posted January 6, 2014 It is from his scales not magic spell,he can use it for more than a hour but,it would make him tired and maybe even kill him Share this post Link to post
Posted January 9, 2014 Hey! Can I join? Username: Fiirewolvar Name: Fia Gender: Female Type/Breed: Sweetling Power: Very fast running and high jumping. Can run for about 5 seconds before getting exhausted, and can jump once or twice. Any more than that, and she may collapse. By 'very fast', I mean like a cheetah, and by 'high', I mean about 3 metres. Her normal running is as fast as a human running and she can keep this up for a while. (Many details ) Personality: She is a rather sweet hatchling, as the breed name suggests, caring about others a lot, though not beyond herself - if it was her or someone else, she'd choose herself. She's a little shy but great fun to be around, and is always very optimistic. She gets scared easily however, though will act brave and try to calm other dragons down. Appearance: Like a normal mature sweetling - though a bit smaller, and with more fur. Age/Stage: She's an older mature hatchling. History: Fia was brought up like most sweetlings, living a nice life, until one day a gigantic Geode dragon came storming into the cave, taking all the food and demanding that Fia's parents give her up to him. They refused and he attacked them, killing her father while her mother grabbed her and escaped. They lived in the wild for a while, until a hunter shot Fia's mum. Fia, desperate for the kind of things she'd suffered not to happen to any other dragons, immediately went to join this group of rebels, and it lead her to where she is today. Extra: She has a fear of Geode dragons and humans, and is most likely to flee upon seeing either of those things. I hope I explained the power enough I don't want it to be too overpowered... Where should I start? As in, should I be in a specific place or what? Share this post Link to post
Posted January 11, 2014 The speed of a human at normal? Then again she can have large spurts of speed. Um... yeah, approved As for how to start.... me brain dead atm lol, sorry Share this post Link to post
Posted January 12, 2014 Sharlykng, what colour is Artemis? I've drawn her before. Share this post Link to post
Posted January 17, 2014 Looks like I'll be busy till the end of the semester, sorry gang... Sarlykng: That's not at all how I pictured her. Neat! Share this post Link to post
Posted January 19, 2014 I'm pretty busy right now and need to focus on getting work done. And Naturiko, remember to use brackets if you're posting OOC in the RP. Share this post Link to post
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