Posted October 30, 2012 I might add a new charrie... Anyways! Looks fine to me. Crisie the GoN? Doesn't she get something cool? D: Crisie the GoN... the problem causererer! The one who learnt the opposite. I mean, she did learn to bend water and stuff instead of lava and fire. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 30, 2012 History has it the once forested area, lush with plants animals and the little bit of added human settlement now a wrecked land used to be home to all sorts of hatchling. All kinds of breeds on adventures rescues and for some killing. Clan Ishtesh has roots extending back years. Its founders had no idea when they first met up that they would establish the lands saving grace. 3 dragons, still young and learning met up. The names of Scuta, Stoneza and Crisie. Scuta the spitefire. Able to attack with the greatest of speeds. Stoneza the stone, where a attack would hardly faze him and Crisie the GoN. These three where the starting roots of the clan. Together they met up and rescued each other from humans. However in there first rescue attempt they unleashed the evil that still plagues the land. Crusher. A cruel, bone platted vampire kind of dragon. Born and raised by blood thirsty humans a mere tool for them. Unless his mental leash was burned by Scuta's brother. More then one foe came and went but Crusher was always there, he did not seek power or control. Just chao's. He adapted to his foes attacks and defense, He had started off with the power to cloak and grew from there. However the story took a interesting turn when he ran into the hatchling Oracle. Perhaps the savor of the clan. Through compassion and love she cleaned his heart which allowed him to see his errors and change accordingly. Soon after he became a guardian of the land. As his part went on Scuta and his brother Jynx where always at each other's throats if they came across each other. Crusher before he turned even worked with a gold turned vamp and Scuta to chase Jynx away. No one knows though if Scuta vanished due to his brother finally satisfying his lust for retribution of a crime Scuta had commited. Or if he just left with the other spit fire or not. Crisie on the other hand was what you would call the clans trouble magnet. Where ever she went trouble followed. The scrolls are not long enough to record it all. Undead, power hungry, killers everything. There was rumer she and Scuta would get together but no ones knows if that happened either. Stoneza the flying stone dragon. A odd character he was reserved yet kind, quiet yet talkative. Careful yet hardly fazed by most attacks. And.... the weirdest of them all, the ability to fly. He did not carry much weight of the roots of the clan but he was there to aid if needed. One of those that posed a threat to the clan was a liche who went by the name Thrymzen. He had teamed up with our foe for a little bit but then went on to try to make his own army which, according to a GoN and the beginnings of the clan, was killed. The liches home still stands as a pile of ruins now. He had tried to get Evil Crusher to join him but failed, in all doing so caused his own plans to fail of gaining Crisie's premature power. After losing his needed item he seemed to go silent and then later a full grown GoN Grezeshal. Our enemy, is indeed Crusher. The same dragon that kept the roots from drying out, the one that stayed to maintain the group that eventually turned into the clan. The first one when shown the error of his ways was also granted his original breeds body back. He was turned magi. Everyone referred to him as his name Crusher. His other self just got Evil tacked on to his name. He is both our enemy and allie. Evil Crusher still lives today, with the abilitys of a GoN at his paws, the power he ripped from Grezeshal, the bone plating, the ability to see all around him all at once through magic fields. If it where not to Good crusher and the clans elders forming the barrier to stop his powers from up turning this part of the land. But he is out there still, picking us off who wonder out alone, not afraid to attack. As of right now we have no record of where Good Crusher, Scuta or Crisie or Stoneza are. But we owe them our life's. Now, with the humans settling back into the land after it was over turned by Evil Crusher they seem to be keen on returning. Bringing supply's and new weapons and armor that does not break when swatted away the first few times. One settle met has gained a foot hold and now is a meeting point for the others to head to, and where they take those of us they capture. We sometimes see one or two escape, some being treated as slaves, and others being worn like common clothing in there stronghold. While this has provided our foe, Evil Crusher with many targets to go to other then us he's having to be careful as well. The last encounter we saw of him and the humans when they met was a few dozen.... magic users keeping the ground steady to prevent him from using it on them. He did defeat them but this shows, the humans have learned some of our arts. We plan on trying to drive the humans away, they grow in number too fast, and are far to hostile. There are few that are not, but the strong hold needs to be destroyed, then we'll need to hold them away. Plot You are either with the clan of dragons trying to survive and hold off the humans or a human that think the dragons are nothing but beasts with beautiful scales and horns. Or at least that's what there all taught. Both are also trying not to die to Evil Crusher. Can you survive or will you fall? Character sheets Username: Human or dragon (DC dragons only: Appearance: Personality: Job: Powers: Other: ((All characters from Hatchlings RP will have to be adults unless frozen. Only enter your Hatchlings character into this one if you won't have any magor change happen, including: Removal of the freezing effect Body change (has happened) Becoming undead after signing up Permanent injury (IE: Missing tail) Anything else that will affect them for life in the Hatchlings RP must transfer over to there character in this RP.)) Ok, how's this look over all, do you guys think its ready to be sent over to the unapproved section or more idea's or changes you like to recommend ect? I've edited the whole thing, my opinions and some clarifications needed are in blue. Introduction History has it the once forested area, a thriving woodland filled with flora and fauna, and the occasional human settlement, used to be home to all sorts of hatchlings. All kinds of breeds on with different goals: adventures, rescues, and for some, killing. Clan Ishtesh has roots extending back years. Its founders had no idea when they first met up that they would establish the lands saving grace. 3 dragons, still young and learning met up. The names of Scuta, Stoneza and Crisie. Scuta the spitefire, able to attack with the greatest of speeds. Stoneza the stone, where a attack would hardly faze him, and Crisie the GoN. These three were the starting roots of the clan. Together they met up and rescued each other from humans. However, during their first rescue attempt, they had unleashed an evil that still plagues the land: Crusher. A cruel, bone plated vampire dragon. Born and raised by bloodthirsty humans, he had been a mere tool for them. Until his mental leash was burned by Scuta's brother, Jynx. More then one foe came and went but Crusher was always there; he did not seek power or control, just chaos. He adapted his foe's attacks and defenses. He had started off with the power to cloak and grew stronger with time. However the story took a interesting turn when he ran into the hatchling Oracle. In a way, she was the savior of the clan. Through compassion and love she cleansed his heart which allowed him to see his errors and change accordingly. Soon after he became a guardian of the land. As his part went on, Scuta and his brother Jynx where always at each other's throats if they came across each other. Crusher even worked with a gold turned vamp and Scuta to chase Jynx away, before he was turned. No one knows if Scuta had vanished due to his brother having finally satisfied his lust for retribution of a crime Scuta had committed. Or if he had just left with the other spitfire. Crisie, on the other hand, was what you would call the clan's trouble magnet. Wherever she went trouble followed. The scrolls in the archives are not long enough to record it all: undead mobs, power hungry monsters, killers, everything. There was a rumor that she and Scuta would get together but no ones knew if that happened either. Stoneza was an anomaly. An odd character the stone dragon was: reserved yet kind, quiet yet talkative, careful yet hardly fazed by most attacks. And perhaps the weirdest of them all, the ability to fly. He did not carry much weight in the roots of the clan but he was there to aid when needed. One of those that posed a threat to the clan was a liche who went by the name Thrymzen. He had teamed up with our foe for a little bit but then went on to try to make his own army which, according to a GoN and the beginnings of the clan, was killed. The liche's fortress stands as a pile of rubble and stone now. He had tried to get Evil Crusher to join him and failed, resulting in his own plan, gaining Crisie's premature power, to fail. After losing his needed item he seemed to go silent and then later a full grown GoN Grezeshal. [? I don't understand this sentence.] Our enemy is, indeed, Crusher. The same dragon that kept the clan from dying out, the one that stayed to maintain the group, had eventually turned against the clan. The first one when shown the error of his ways was also granted his first form: a magi, before he became a vampire. Everyone referred to him as his name, Crusher. His other self just got Evil tacked on to his name, Evil Crusher. He is both our enemy and ally. Evil Crusher still lives today, with the abilities of a GoN at his paws, the power he ripped from Grezeshal, the bone plating, the ability to see all around him simultaneously through magic fields. Fortunately, Crusher and the clan elders had erected a protective barrier against Evil Crusher's powers over their land. But he is still out there, taking out those who wander out alone, unafraid to attack. As of right now we have no record of where Good Crusher, Scuta, Crisie, and Stoneza are. But we owe them our lives. The humans are settling back into the land after it was overturned by Evil Crusher, more seem to be returning in droves, bringing supplies and new warfare; they do not break when we swatted them away the first few times. One settlement has gained a foothold and now is a capital among others, and where they take captured dragons. Sometimes we see one or two escape, where some were being treated as slaves, and others being worn like common clothing in their stronghold. While this has provided Evil Crusher with many targets, he has to be careful as well. The last encounter we saw of him and the humans when they met was a few dozen... magic users keeping the ground steady to prevent him from using it on them. He did defeat them but that has shown a horrifying fact: the humans have learned some of our arts. We have planned on trying to drive the humans away; they grow in numbers too fast, and are far too hostile. There are few that are not, but this stronghold needs to be destroyed, then we'll need to hold them away. Plot You are either with the clan of dragons trying to survive and hold off the humans or a human that think the dragons are nothing but beasts with beautiful scales and horns. Or at least that's what they were all taught. Both sides are also trying not to die to Evil Crusher. Will you survive or will you fall? Character sheets Username: Human or dragon (DC dragons only): Appearance: Personality: Job (humans only): Powers: You might want to restrict this for humans. Since magic is a new art, most humans would fumble and are not experienced in it. For dragons, I'm thinking that the powers will also be toned down, due to the pollution of the land. Dragons are creatures of nature, and their magic is drawn from their environment. Other: ((All characters from Hatchlings RP will have to be adults unless frozen. Only enter your Hatchlings character into this one if you won't have any major change happening, including: Removal of the freezing effect Body change (has happened) Becoming undead after signing up Permanent injury (IE: Missing tail) Anything else that will affect them for life in the Hatchlings RP must transfer over to their character in this RP.)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 30, 2012 History has it the once forested area, lush with plants animals and the little bit of added human settlement now a wrecked land used to be home to all sorts of hatchling. All kinds of breeds on adventures rescues and for some killing. Clan Ishtesh has roots extending back years. Its founders had no idea when they first met up that they would establish the lands saving grace. 3 dragons, still young and learning met up. The names of Scuta, Stoneza and Crisie. Scuta the spitefire. Able to attack with the greatest of speeds. Stoneza the stone, where a attack would hardly faze him and Crisie the GoN, who used the opposites to her advantage. These three where the starting roots of the clan. Together they met up and rescued each other from humans. However in there first rescue attempt they unleashed the evil that still plagues the land. Crusher. A cruel, bone platted vampire kind of dragon. Born and raised by blood thirsty humans a mere tool for them. Unless his mental leash was burned by Scuta's brother. More then one foe came and went but Crusher was always there, he did not seek power or control. Just chao's. He adapted to his foes attacks and defense, He had started off with the power to cloak and grew from there. However the story took a interesting turn when he ran into the hatchling Oracle. Perhaps the savor of the clan. Through compassion and love she cleaned his heart which allowed him to see his errors and change accordingly. Soon after he became a guardian of the land. As his part went on Scuta and his brother Jynx where always at each other's throats if they came across each other. Crusher before he turned even worked with a gold turned vamp and Scuta to chase Jynx away. No one knows though if Scuta vanished due to his brother finally satisfying his lust for retribution of a crime Scuta had commited. Or if he just left with the other spit fire or not. Crisie on the other hand was what you would call the clans trouble magnet. Where ever she went trouble followed. The scrolls are not long enough to record it all. Undead, power hungry, killers everything. There was rumer she and Scuta would get together but no ones knows if that happened either. Stoneza the flying stone dragon. A odd character he was reserved yet kind, quiet yet talkative. Careful yet hardly fazed by most attacks. And.... the weirdest of them all, the ability to fly. He did not carry much weight of the roots of the clan but he was there to aid if needed. One of those that posed a threat to the clan was a liche who went by the name Thrymzen. He had teamed up with our foe for a little bit but then went on to try to make his own army which, according to a GoN and the beginnings of the clan, was killed. The liches home still stands as a pile of ruins now. He had tried to get Evil Crusher to join him but failed, in all doing so caused his own plans to fail of gaining Crisie's premature power. After losing his needed item he seemed to go silent and then later a full grown GoN Grezeshal. Our enemy, is indeed Crusher. The same dragon that kept the roots from drying out, the one that stayed to maintain the group that eventually turned into the clan. The first one when shown the error of his ways was also granted his original breeds body back. He was turned magi. Everyone referred to him as his name Crusher. His other self just got Evil tacked on to his name. He is both our enemy and allie. Evil Crusher still lives today, with the abilitys of a GoN at his paws, the power he ripped from Grezeshal, the bone plating, the ability to see all around him all at once through magic fields. If it where not to Good crusher and the clans elders forming the barrier to stop his powers from up turning this part of the land. But he is out there still, picking us off who wonder out alone, not afraid to attack. As of right now we have no record of where Good Crusher, Scuta or Crisie or Stoneza are. But we owe them our life's. Now, with the humans settling back into the land after it was over turned by Evil Crusher they seem to be keen on returning. Bringing supply's and new weapons and armor that does not break when swatted away the first few times. One settle met has gained a foot hold and now is a meeting point for the others to head to, and where they take those of us they capture. We sometimes see one or two escape, some being treated as slaves, and others being worn like common clothing in there stronghold. While this has provided our foe, Evil Crusher with many targets to go to other then us he's having to be careful as well. The last encounter we saw of him and the humans when they met was a few dozen.... magic users keeping the ground steady to prevent him from using it on them. He did defeat them but this shows, the humans have learned some of our arts. We plan on trying to drive the humans away, they grow in number too fast, and are far to hostile. There are few that are not, but the strong hold needs to be destroyed, then we'll need to hold them away. Crisie doesn't get her own cool description? :c Share this post Link to post
Posted October 30, 2012 Believe it or not, the whole DC-verse doesn't revolve around Ms. Crisie. What you added doesn't make sense to me anyway " Share this post Link to post
Posted October 30, 2012 I've edited the whole thing, my opinions and some clarifications needed are in blue. Introduction History has it the once forested area, a thriving woodland filled with flora and fauna, and the occasional human settlement, used to be home to all sorts of hatchlings. All kinds of breeds on with different goals: adventures, rescues, and for some, killing. Clan Ishtesh has roots extending back years. Its founders had no idea when they first met up that they would establish the lands saving grace. 3 dragons, still young and learning met up. The names of Scuta, Stoneza and Crisie. Scuta the spitefire, able to attack with the greatest of speeds. Stoneza the stone, where a attack would hardly faze him, and Crisie the GoN. These three were the starting roots of the clan. Together they met up and rescued each other from humans. However, during their first rescue attempt, they had unleashed an evil that still plagues the land: Crusher. A cruel, bone plated vampire dragon. Born and raised by bloodthirsty humans, he had been a mere tool for them. Until his mental leash was burned by Scuta's brother, Jynx. More then one foe came and went but Crusher was always there; he did not seek power or control, just chaos. He adapted his foe's attacks and defenses. He had started off with the power to cloak and grew stronger with time. However the story took a interesting turn when he ran into the hatchling Oracle. In a way, she was the savior of the clan. Through compassion and love she cleansed his heart which allowed him to see his errors and change accordingly. Soon after he became a guardian of the land. As his part went on, Scuta and his brother Jynx where always at each other's throats if they came across each other. Crusher even worked with a gold turned vamp and Scuta to chase Jynx away, before he was turned. No one knows if Scuta had vanished due to his brother having finally satisfied his lust for retribution of a crime Scuta had committed. Or if he had just left with the other spitfire. Crisie, on the other hand, was what you would call the clan's trouble magnet. Wherever she went trouble followed. The scrolls in the archives are not long enough to record it all: undead mobs, power hungry monsters, killers, everything. There was a rumor that she and Scuta would get together but no ones knew if that happened either. Stoneza was an anomaly. An odd character the stone dragon was: reserved yet kind, quiet yet talkative, careful yet hardly fazed by most attacks. And perhaps the weirdest of them all, the ability to fly. He did not carry much weight in the roots of the clan but he was there to aid when needed. One of those that posed a threat to the clan was a liche who went by the name Thrymzen. He had teamed up with our foe for a little bit but then went on to try to make his own army which, according to a GoN and the beginnings of the clan, was killed. The liche's fortress stands as a pile of rubble and stone now. He had tried to get Evil Crusher to join him and failed, resulting in his own plan, gaining Crisie's premature power, to fail. After losing his needed item he seemed to go silent and then later a full grown GoN Grezeshal when Evil Crusher got to her. [? I don't understand this sentence.] Our enemy is, indeed, Crusher. The same dragon that kept the clan from dying out, the one that stayed to maintain the group, had eventually turned against the clan. The first one when shown the error of his ways was also granted his first form: a magi, before he became a vampire. Everyone referred to him as his name, Crusher. His other self just got Evil tacked on to his name, Evil Crusher. He is both our enemy and ally. Evil Crusher still lives today, with the abilities of a GoN at his paws, the power he ripped from Grezeshal, the bone plating, the ability to see all around him simultaneously through magic fields. Fortunately, Crusher and the clan elders had erected a protective barrier against Evil Crusher's powers over their land. But he is still out there, taking out those who wander out alone, unafraid to attack. As of right now we have no record of where Good Crusher, Scuta, Crisie, and Stoneza are. But we owe them our lives. The humans are settling back into the land after it was overturned by Evil Crusher, more seem to be returning in droves, bringing supplies and new warfare; they do not break when we swatted them away the first few times. One settlement has gained a foothold and now is a capital among others, and where they take captured dragons. Sometimes we see one or two escape, where some were being treated as slaves, and others being worn like common clothing in their stronghold. While this has provided Evil Crusher with many targets, he has to be careful as well. The last encounter we saw of him and the humans when they met was a few dozen... magic users keeping the ground steady to prevent him from using it on them. He did defeat them but that has shown a horrifying fact: the humans have learned some of our arts. We have planned on trying to drive the humans away; they grow in numbers too fast, and are far too hostile. There are few that are not, but this stronghold needs to be destroyed, then we'll need to hold them away. Plot You are either with the clan of dragons trying to survive and hold off the humans or a human that think the dragons are nothing but beasts with beautiful scales and horns. Or at least that's what they were all taught. Both sides are also trying not to die to Evil Crusher. Will you survive or will you fall? Character sheets Username: Human or dragon (DC dragons only): Appearance: Personality: Job (humans only): Powers (for humans these are very weak if they are done. It takes a large group to focus what they do know to affect a dragon. And that is only if everyone in said group are all experts in what there doing which takes years to do.) (Dragon powers consist of element powers, powers drawn from the experiment. however with the current events and lack of those that know there are no more that know extremely powerful spells or ability's. Keep the powers toned down or have a massive set back with each use to balance it out.) : You might want to restrict this for humans. Since magic is a new art, most humans would fumble and are not experienced in it. For dragons, I'm thinking that the powers will also be toned down, due to the pollution of the land. Dragons are creatures of nature, and their magic is drawn from their environment. Other: ((All characters from Hatchlings RP will have to be adults unless frozen. Only enter your Hatchlings character into this one if you won't have any major change happening, including: Removal of the freezing effect Body change (has happened) Becoming undead after signing up Permanent injury (IE: Missing tail) Anything else that will affect them for life in the Hatchlings RP must transfer over to their character in this RP.)) Ok changes are the red lines. Crisie doesn't get her own cool description? :c Nope, she hardly used these abilitys to help others and most of the time was out attracting trouble or trying to drag the others into trouble. Plus I hardly saw these supposed ability's used so.... no there not included. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 30, 2012 Kay if i can remember correctly i had 2 alt neb hatchlings; Xavier and.. SHELA ._. took forever looking through the actual forum to find out her name. So now they are Alt neb adults aaaaaand how do i enter the story without making everything confusing and blargggg? Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 *Pokes out of the ground.* Is it safe? I was partially convinced to return by Dragongirl and her mention of a sequel? What's going on with that? Ooo... Scuta's famous. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 I know it doesn't, but the others get cool phrases D: Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 (edited) Introduction History has it the once forested area, a thriving woodland filled with flora and fauna, and the occasional human settlement, used to be home to all sorts of hatchlings. All kinds of breeds on with different goals: adventures, rescues, and for some, killing. Clan Ishtesh has roots extending back years. Its founders had no idea when they first met up that they would establish the lands saving grace. 3 dragons, still young and learning met up. The names of Scuta, Stoneza and Crisie. Scuta the spitefire, able to attack with the greatest of speeds. Stoneza the stone, where a attack would hardly faze him, and Crisie the GoN. These three were the starting roots of the clan. Together they met up and rescued each other from humans. However, during their first rescue attempt, they had unleashed an evil that still plagues the land: Crusher. A cruel, bone plated vampire dragon. Born and raised by bloodthirsty humans, he had been a mere tool for them. Until his mental leash was burned by Scuta's brother, Jynx. More then one foe came and went but Crusher was always there; he did not seek power or control, just chaos. He adapted his foe's attacks and defenses. He had started off with the power to cloak and grew stronger with time. However the story took a interesting turn when he ran into the hatchling Oracle. In a way, she was the savior of the clan. Through compassion and love she cleansed his heart which allowed him to see his errors and change accordingly. Soon after he became a guardian of the land. As his part went on, Scuta and his brother Jynx where always at each other's throats if they came across each other. Crusher even worked with a gold turned vamp and Scuta to chase Jynx away, before he was turned. No one knows if Scuta had vanished due to his brother having finally satisfied his lust for retribution of a crime Scuta had committed. Or if he had just left with the other spitfire. Crisie, on the other hand, was what you would call the clan's trouble magnet. Wherever she went trouble followed. The scrolls in the archives are not long enough to record it all: undead mobs, power hungry monsters, killers, everything. There was a rumor that she and Scuta would get together but no ones knew if that happened either. Stoneza was an anomaly. An odd character the stone dragon was: reserved yet kind, quiet yet talkative, careful yet hardly fazed by most attacks. And perhaps the weirdest of them all, the ability to fly. He did not carry much weight in the roots of the clan but he was there to aid when needed. One of those that posed a threat to the clan was a liche who went by the name Thrymzen. He had teamed up with our foe for a little bit but then went on to try to make his own army which, according to a GoN and the beginnings of the clan, was killed. The liche's fortress stands as a pile of rubble and stone now. He had tried to get Evil Crusher to join him and failed, resulting in his own plan, gaining Crisie's premature power, to fail. After losing his needed item he seemed to go silent and then later a full grown GoN Grezeshal when Evil Crusher got to her. Our enemy is, indeed, Crusher. The same dragon that kept the clan from dying out, the one that stayed to maintain the group, had eventually turned against the clan. The first one when shown the error of his ways was also granted his first form: a magi, before he became a vampire. Everyone referred to him as his name, Crusher. His other self just got Evil tacked on to his name, Evil Crusher. He is both our enemy and ally. Evil Crusher still lives today, with the abilities of a GoN at his paws, the power he ripped from Grezeshal, the bone plating, the ability to see all around him simultaneously through magic fields. Fortunately, Crusher and the clan elders had erected a protective barrier against Evil Crusher's powers over their land. But he is still out there, taking out those who wander out alone, unafraid to attack. As of right now we have no record of where Good Crusher, Scuta, Crisie, and Stoneza are. But we owe them our lives. The humans are settling back into the land after it was overturned by Evil Crusher, more seem to be returning in droves, bringing supplies and new warfare; they do not break when we swatted them away the first few times. One settlement has gained a foothold and now is a capital among others, and where they take captured dragons. Sometimes we see one or two escape, where some were being treated as slaves, and others being worn like common clothing in their stronghold. While this has provided Evil Crusher with many targets, he has to be careful as well. The last encounter we saw of him and the humans when they met was a few dozen... magic users keeping the ground steady to prevent him from using it on them. He did defeat them but that has shown a horrifying fact: the humans have learned some of our arts. We have planned on trying to drive the humans away; they grow in numbers too fast, and are far too hostile. There are few that are not, but this stronghold needs to be destroyed, then we'll need to hold them away. Plot You are either with the clan of dragons trying to survive and hold off the humans or a human that think the dragons are nothing but beasts with beautiful scales and horns. Or at least that's what they were all taught. Both sides are also trying not to die to Evil Crusher. Will you survive or will you fall? Character sheets Username: Human or dragon (DC dragons only): Appearance: Personality: Job (humans only): Powers (for humans these are very weak if they are done. It takes a large group to focus what they do know to affect a dragon. And that is only if everyone in said group are all experts in what there doing which takes years to do.) (Dragon powers consist of element powers, powers drawn from the experiment. however with the current events and lack of those that know there are no more that know extremely powerful spells or ability's. Keep the powers toned down or have a massive set back with each use to balance it out.) : Other: ((All characters from Hatchlings RP will have to be adults unless frozen. Only enter your Hatchlings character into this one if you won't have any major change happening, including: Removal of the freezing effect Body change (has happened) Becoming undead after signing up Permanent injury (IE: Missing tail) Anything else that will affect them for life in the Hatchlings RP must transfer over to their character in this RP.)) *Pokes out of the ground.* Is it safe? I was partially convinced to return by Dragongirl and her mention of a sequel? What's going on with that? Ooo... Scuta's famous. Hey Dusset, I think it is, its hard to run this with out ya though. Where badly lacking dedicated RP'ers. Seems no matter how small it is there's always that one RP'er that thinks posting 1 every week is ok. Anyway as for the new version I thought maybe a newer version is in order. Something for others to join with out feeling the need to read over a few hundred pages lol. New story line, but with the option for characters here to be brought into there provided they don't do any magor modification. Its almost done we just need a title then I'm posting it in the unapproved section. Dunnu how it will fly but going to give it a shot. I know it doesn't, but the others get cool phrases D: Dragongirl, she's in there despite hardly doing much for the other characters and or making the others have to rescue her more then reasonable amount of times. Anyway now to come up with a title and off to the unapproved section it goes. Edited October 31, 2012 by little lost dragon Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 Actually, she saved them from the arena, the Oracle, the evil hell place I forgot about and healed a few hatchlings. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 I thought those were chucked as some bad dream, because the plot wasn't finished? I spotted a few more errors my fingers are itching to change; I have my Microbio lab session to prepare for How about Adults? Joking! Maybe the clan name in the intro, Clan Ishtesh. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 Actually, she saved them from the arena, the Oracle, the evil hell place I forgot about and healed a few hatchlings. I know for a fact all 3 of those where not completed. I could add how she vanished on 3 of her key sub plots for reasons she's got what she's got DG. Be happy she's in there. I thought those were chucked as some bad dream, because the plot wasn't finished? I spotted a few more errors my fingers are itching to change; I have my Microbio lab session to prepare for dry.gif How about Adults? .png Joking! Maybe the clan name in the intro, Clan Ishtesh. Lol while that would fit the theme for the RP names... I dunnu about about attracting RP'ers lol. "Struggles of the Ishtesh clan" ? Ishtesh is a name I made up on the go lol. I think I made it up (if I did not I hope it does not mean anything bad lol) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 So should i hold off on trying to join the RP until we can get everything together? Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 Right now the RP is largely dead due to too many being gone for too long at a time. As soon as my chars are clear of one other character who's owner is here like once or twice a week maybe if you want you could run into them I dunnu. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 Ok, sounds great! Scuta's be pissed if she wasn't there. The arena was finished but it only served as a catalyst for Scuta and Crisie's relationship, she vanished shortly after. I was thinking that I could Rp their kid. Say they had one in between. I think it'd be nice if it turned out they had a happy ending. Cool, well PM me the link of the new thread when it's up. I'll let you guys sort this all out. I like it so far. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 31, 2012 Aww, that'd be cute c: Is Scuta going to be in the new roleplay? Crisie is. So little Scrisie... Cruta... erm... will have a mummy to look after them. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 Not sure. I was thinking maybe a mild depression led to... Things. But I haven't chosen for sure. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 ... I thought you quit. Anyway, not sure about the new one just cause it doesn't sound all that interesting, no offends. Ill stick around. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 I should be able to post more frequently now. A lot of rp's that I'm in have really died down. If you decide to make this new one I'd like to be in it as well. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 ... I thought you quit. Anyway, not sure about the new one just cause it doesn't sound all that interesting, no offends. Ill stick around. The RP is primarily based on the players' decision for plotlines. Most RPs already state what plot it is, be it war, trying to co-exist, escape, adventure, and so on. This new sequel will follow Hatchlings in terms of the location, and the basics. You'd notice that the intro only summarizes what happened in this RP, and then provides slightly new challenges which are up to us to interpret. So 20 years later, we might have... Human war? A dragon hunting festival? Peace with humans? Slavery of dragons? The possibilities are endless, both Hatchlings and the sequel just provide you the base to build your story, provided everyone's happy with it. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 I know that, it's just that it seems so unoriginal. Humans hunting dragons. It's kinda been done a million times before. It's also just not the kind of thing I'm into. But like I said, I'll wait it out because I could be wrong. Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 This might seem somewhat "low" seeing as I have not posted in, who know how long but I think this sequel idea is a good idea, gonna spend some time figuring out what would have happened to my chars Share this post Link to post
Posted November 1, 2012 It might seem cliche, but it's original for this roleplay. All the characters here have no idea humans could evolve their weapons this badly, so thus, they'll be discovering new things. And guys, I don't want to argue about when I was a newb. Share this post Link to post
Recommended Posts