Lazlo Leafage is the leader of the Leafage clan, who reside deep within the tropical rainforests of Kaan. Whilst Lazlo is young to be a leader, what he lacks in experience, he makes up for in intelligence and determination. The clan are friendly towards humans, and often converse with the local tribesmen in exchange for gifts of fruit and berries. Blending into the canopy, you can always be sure in the rainforest of Kaan that you aren't far away from one of the Leafage clan.
Abstain: I'd say that the clan is a singular word, but apart from that, nice description!
I feel this comment is positive enough ^^ although I'm struggling to see where they feel clan is misused. If anyone could clarify, I'll happily change it :]