Thanks so much for this Zovesta! *bows*
Description: 300 years in the future, cloning children at birth for organs is the norm. When a scientist realises that the system is wrong, he steals 'Beta' (clone) children from the nursery and puts them in 'Alpha' adoption homes. Fast forward twenty years in the future, and John Doe (yes, name will change) is kidnapped by a strange man. He wakes up, restrained on a hospital bed. A sympathetic doctor tells him that he is one of the lost Beta children, and his Alpha needs his heart. John is kept in an enclosed city of oblivious Betas until the Ethics in Medicine Committee decide his fate. He must convince the Beta, Ruby of the truth and escape before the committee decides that his Alpha must come first. (I suck at writing these things)
Rating: Adult fiction. I don't think there's anything in it to be worried about...yet
What you want me to look out for: Basically, ignore the spelling/grammar issues, its still a draft and I know they're there. Style, and just how enjoyable the story is really. Also, how confusing is everything? Just because it makes sense to me...
Length: exactly? 8,684
Link: I don't have a dA, can I send it as an email attachment instead?
Notes: Its still in draft stage, and only say, the first 5-6 chapters. So don't expect brilliance
Haha: this is the part where I freak out and want my precious back...nerves, they shall kill me one day