This is not even close to done. It's a little peak.
I need some feedback on plot, ideas, characters, etc.
I've been told its also a fun little read! Thanks everyone!
A reply with constructive criticism would be great!
Here it is
Alone to Die
Mitch awoke to a loud bang in the morning. He sat up startled, and dashed through his house without even taking the chance to look at his clock. As he got to the front door, he heard talking and looked out to see his younger son Mike holding a phone to his ear with his hunting rifle hung over his shoulder. He