Posted August 18, 2010 (edited) RPD/OOC Thread: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?act=S...=0#entry5479022 For any who are so out of the loop and have never seen or heard of Star Wars or played any of its games then please go here: http://www.starwars.wikia.com if you’re still confused on things then watch the movies and play the games. Star Wars: The Unknown Legends Long ago, after the Empire were destroyed, there were several kids born with the spark of the force. They were found and trained. They became great Jedi and they had children, soon there were lots of Jedi. But one kid didn't have the spark. Although he was born of 2 Jedi who were very powerful, this kid didn't have it. He had a medichlorian count and it was that of a regular human who didn't have the jedi abilities. He tried and tried but just didn't have it. So as he grew up he became angry at people. He soon took up his father's lightsaber and struck down his parents, and his two younger sisters. He took his baby brother who had the spark and as he grew would train him to become a true Dark Jedi. This boy’s name was Shantaar (Shan-tar) he was now 25 and his younger brother was 8, he was a good apprentice very powerful with the force. But he was corrupted beyond all hope. His mind was filled with anger at the jedi, for his brother Shantaar told him they were the ones who killed his parents. So he trained hard to get revenge on them. He and Shantaar took many young children who had the spark but have not yet been found by the jedi and trained them in the ways of the Dark Jedi. Soon they had many of these kids and they started building sith academies. Many of these sith children were now adults and they had children of their own. This continued like the Jedi and soon there were the same amount of Jedi in the galaxy as there were Sith. The academies were filled and many Dark Jedi roamed the Universe. And they were soon including normal people into the forces to create an army. They did this in five years. With the help of some synthetic force abilities and technology Shantaar was able to live through all of this. He was now the Sith lord and ruled over many planet systems in the galaxy. For a long time the Jedi thought there would be no end to his reign of terror. But then the Unknown Legends stepped in. The Unknown Legends are the Jedi who trained under secret. No one in the Galaxy except for the Jedi Council and the masters of these Jedi knew about them, so they would be undetected by any sith. These people could be the ones to save the day. ____________________________________________________ This is Star Wars: The Unknown Legends. Hopefully with that intro you know what is going on. You can take position as a Sith trooper, a Dark Jedi, a Jedi of the Unknown Legends, a Bounty Hunter, or someone helping either cause. You can be any of the classes of the Jedi; apprentice, padawan, Jedi, Master etc. but any high ranks must go through me. So, whose side are you on? FINISHED AND AWAITING APPROVAL!!! ____________________________________________________ Rules: *Basics: No powerplaying, autohitting etc. *All high ranks such as Master, Mentor etc. must get my OK, if I do not give an OK your bio will NOT be accepted. *14 sentences per character to keep things interesting *Follow the rules or don't post. Simple as that. *Please use the OOC thread appropriately and keep as much OOC there as possible. Edited September 30, 2012 by Danniphantom Share this post Link to post
Posted August 18, 2010 (edited) Bio Format: Name- Age- Gender- Race- Class- (Jedi of the Unknown, Dark Jedi, Bounty Hunter, Sith trooper, Regular civilian)* Cause- (Good Evil, if regular citizen) Rank- (Padawan, Apprentice, Jedi, Mentor, Master) Personality: Appearance: Clothing: Armour: Weapons: (If Boutny hunter, sith trooper, or regular civilian) Lightsaber Color: Forece abilities: (If Jedi of Unknown or Dark Jedi, limited to 5 then I will tell you when you learn a new one.) Short History: (Tell me at least some major key points of your characters past, just sum it up.) Other: (Delete everything in parenthasis) *NOTE: There are more classes on a later post, scroll down to the bottom to see. Edited November 15, 2010 by Danniphantom Share this post Link to post
Posted August 18, 2010 (edited) Races: The following races are available to be used by anyone: Arkanian: Arkanians are exactly like humans; they eat and drink the same type of things. The only difference is that they have the energy of a dog, they have intense speed and agility, and their appetite is bigger. They have no fur no tails, there are some exceptions when they do, but like elves and dogs they have pointed ears. Their hearing is miraculous as well. They are able to hear a pin drop even if 10 horses were stomping their hooves. Their ears are not sensitive though that they are hurt when there is a lot of noise. They normally have nice fine clothes and are very intelligent. They understand humans because they live with humans as slaves. They study them when they can. They have learned English and can read write speak and translate it fluently. They normally live in tribes considered packs and set up individual families of 4 in a pack of 20. They are great at hunting and normally eat meat. The average time they live for is about 90-150 years depending on the health. They don’t have any fur to have patterns like dogs and Kiets but they do have markings and patterns in there hair like different colored in some spots etc. They don’t normally wear jewelry but wear fine clothed clothing made of materials found in nature. They use tools they make out of metal, stone, wood and other materials they work with. The men usually wear patterned pants with no shirt and the women wear shirts with no sleeves and a dress that splits up one side usually the right and for royalty the left side with a different color. Rakatan: Image: Era(s): 50,000 to 25,200 BBY (24,800 Years) Defining Characteristics: Horizontally protruding eyes. Elongated Ovular head. Historic Dates: 49,000 BBY- The Rakata Race develops a special form of Hyperdrive, sparking the beginning of the Infinite Empire 35,000 BBY- The Rakata Empire, AKA the Infinite Empire is officially established. 30,000 BBY- The Infinite Empire reaches its peak stretching from the planet of Belkadan to the Kathol Rift. The Star Forge is created. 27,700 BBY- The Rakata arrive on Korriban and is met by a Sith Army led by Adas, Rakata lose battle though Adas is killed in the process, Korriban secedes from the Infinite Empire. The Rakata annex Kwa Holdings and defeat the Gree Empire. 25,200 BBY- A Major plague sweeps through the galaxy that kills only Rakata. As a result of this, twinned with subject species rebellions, the Infinite Empire collapses. The Rakata become an endangered race in the galaxy and form into the small tribes unknown to modern historians. 3,956 BBY- Revan discovers a Star Map on Dantooine with Bastila Shan and begin to search for the others located on Korriban, Kashyyyk, Tatooine and Manaan. Revan and his crew discover the Star Forge then discovers two Rakata Tribes on Rakata Prime after being marooned there with his crew. The Battle of Rakata Prime begins and ends when Malaak is killed by Revan. The Star Forge is destroyed by the republic so it is never used by the sith or anybody else ever again, or so the story was told. Description: These are the Rakatans still living today on unknown and unexplored planets in the galaxy. They live in tribes in the current time period, and the tribes are scattered across the planet. But with the small amount of diversity across the planets they are found on, suggests they were part of a once unified Empire that has been forgotten since, known as the Infinite Empire. (Read more about the Rakatans and the Infinite Empire here: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Infinite_Empire --- The Following Races are extinct and cannot be use by ANYONE!!!: Arkadians: Image: Unkown Era(s): 254,997,200 - 49,000 BBY (249,948,200 Years) Historic Dates: 254,997,200 BBY- Arkadian race is born from the evolution of cells and officially becomes the first Master Race. 254,996,000 BBY- Arkadians develop two Hyperrings (Much like the rings on stargate) that teleport them to their first victim planet, this eventually sparks the Ultimate Empire. 254,993,500 BBY- The Ultimate Empire is officially established on the planet of Arkada, the Arkadians' home world. 253,000,000 BBY- The Arkadians break into two sects, the Rakata and the Archeans with the Archeans still being the dominant of the two. 252,900,000 BBY- An Archaic Alliance is formed between the Ratakara and Archeans. 250,000,000 BBY- The Ultimate Empire reaches it's peak and remains there for hundreds of millions of years. 200,000,000 BBY- Construction of the 50 sacred computers to hold the knowledge of the Arkadian Race, in hopes that if the civilization collapses it could keep knowledge of its greatness, begins. Many of the Architects and builders died in the process of building the great temples to hold the sacred computers. 190,000,000 BBY- Construction ends after 10 million years of slave labor and hard work. 50 Knowledge finders known as Seekers set out to gather all the information in their given sector of the Empire of the Arkadian Race, Religion, Culture and all other aspect of their life. 150,000,000 BBY- All knowledge of the history of the Arkadian race is collected and stored in the 50 computers. 100,000,000 BBY- War breaks out between the two Sects of the Arkadians, the Archaic Alignment is broken, the 100 Million Year War begins. 500,000 BBY- Actual Battles begin to break out across the galaxy. 400,000 BBY- *Battle of Lehus *Battle of Manaan *Battle of Raxus Prime *Battle of Arkada - Arkada destroyed marking the gradual fall of the Ultimate Empire *Battle of Kashyyyk *Battle of Reuban 450,000 BBY- *Battle of Taris *Battle of Taris II *Battle of Taris III *Battle of Couroscant 350,000 BBY- *Battle of Taris IV *Battle of Kathol Rift *Final Battle of Taris *Second Battle of Kathol Rift *Battle of Korriban *Battle if Rataka, Rataka Destroyed forcing Ratakara to move to Lehus 300,000 BBY- Head on combat ends for a time of recovery and planning, peace shortly spreads War is not over though. 150,000 BBY- Ratakara becomes more diverse and splits into two sects, Selkath, and Rakata, Rakata inhabit Lehus and rename it Rakata Prime 100,000 BBY- Civil War between Selkath and Rakata break out 93,000 BBY- Rakata win Lehus Civil War, Selkath are forced to relocate to Manaan. 90,000 BBY- War sparks up again between Rakata and Archeans. More battles ensue, Selkath remain neutral party. 60,000 BBY- Second Battle of Manaan takes place, battle leaves a scarred world. As a result climates change on Manaan, Manaan's surface is covered in water, Selkath forced to adapt quickly to survive. 55,000 BBY- Selkath build City of Ahto, Selkath remains a neutral party. 50,000 BBY- Rakata win war and secede from the Ultimate Empire leaving Archeans endangered through secluded parts of space. 49,000 BBY- Extinction of Archeans but diversion into the hundreds of different species across the galaxy. Edited October 31, 2010 by Danniphantom Share this post Link to post
Posted August 18, 2010 (edited) Force Powers: The Force powers had three areas, according to the depth of the Force-user's sensing of the Force. These areas were Control, Sense and Alter.[1] Every area contained easier, quicker powers and harder ones that required a higher level of concentration. Control area"Control is internal. It is the Jedi's ability to recognize the Force in himself and to use it to his benefit." Jedi Master Bodo Baas "Control, Control, you must learn Control" Jedi Master Yoda. The powers of the Control area modified the Force-user's body in a necessary way. Most powers were defensive, but not all. The Jedi Order's teaching method began with the Control area, but its powers were rarely taught to the Younglings. They meditated to achieve greater understanding of the Force in themselves and later, as Padawans, learned real Control powers from their masters. Art of the Small Battlemind Breath Control Force Absorb A trained Jedi may have converted all kinds of Force attacks used against them to additional Force charge. As the energy used to perform Force-related powers was limited, a Jedi could use the enemy's attacks to their own benefit, instead of receiving damage from them. Force Body Force Comprehension Force Concealment (Also known as Force Stealth) Force Enlightenment Force Ghost Force Healing Force Protection A power only achieved by high-rank Jedi Masters, Force protection made the bearer invulnerable to a wide range of attacks; the ultimate power in terms of defense. Force Speed Force Valor Hibernation Trance Morichro Tapas "Sense area"...Sense involves the next step, in which the Jedi recognizes the force in the universe outside herself." Jedi Master Bodo Baas The powers of the Sense area required deeper feeling and understanding of the Force to acquire information about the world around the Force-user. The information could be physical, emotional, Forcelike, or other. Jedi Younglings began learning Sense powers early in their training, near the time of Lightsaber combat training. Battle Precognition Comprehend Speech Farseeing Force Empathy Force Listening Force Meld Force Seeing Force Sense Force Vision Precognition Psychometry Shatterpoint Telepathy "Alter area"Alter is the third and most difficult area to master, for it involves the student's ability to modify the Force and redistribute its energies." Jedi Master Bodo Baas. The powers of Alter area granted some kind of influence to the universe to make changes in it. A Force-sensitive could modify the surroundings in a most spectacular way, seemingly by will. Jedi Youngling usually were not taught in this area, as they could accidentally harm each other with its powers. Alter Damage Alter Image Alter Environment Animal Friendship Battle Meditation Combustion Crucitorn Deadly Sight Dopplegänger Drain Knowledge Droid Disable Electric Judgment Force Bellow Force Blinding Force Cloak Force Confusion Force Defend Reduced damage taken by Force powers. Force Deflection (without a lightsaber) Force Destruction Force Drain Force Fear Force Horror advanced version of Force Fear Force Insanity the most advanced version of Force Horror Force Flash Force Flight Force Illusion Force Jump Force Leap Force Light Force Lightning (Organic limbs & extremities required) Chain Lightning variation of Force Lightning Force Shock variation of Force Lightning Force Storm (lightning) advanced version of Force Lightning Wall of Light Can be used by the combined might of many Jedi, though the results may be catastrophic. Force Orb Force Persuasion Less powerful than the Mind Trick Force Projection Force Pull Force Push Force Resuscitation Force Scream Force Stasis advanced version of Force Stun Force Stasis Field the most advanced version of Force Stun Force Slow Force Affliction variation of Force Slow Force Plague advanced version of Force Slow Force Storm (wormhole) Force Stun Force Suppression Force Breach advanced version of Force Suppression Force Throw Force Travel Force Wave advanced version of Force Push Force Repulse another advanced version of Force Push Force Weapon Force Whirlwind variation of Force Push Force Whisper Force Wound Force Choke variation of Force Grip Force Grip advanced version of Force Wound Force Crush the most advanced version of Force Wound Kinetite Levitation Not restricted to Jedi usage Malacia Mechu-deru Midichlorian Manipulation Mind Control Mind Trick (Also known as Affect Mind) Protection Bubble With this Force power, the user could create a defensive sphere around the body, which would protect him from a wide range of attacks, deflect laser blasts, and inflict a certain amount of damage upon contact with the enemy. Plant Surge Ray Revitalize Sever Force Sith Alchemy Spear of Midnight Black Spirit Transference Telekinesis Torture by Chagrin Thought Bomb Using Force powersAccording to the theory that the Force is one, the light and dark sides did not actually describe the Force, but rather defined how an individual used it: to directly harm his enemies or to help himself overcome situations. Thus the aggressive or vengeful abilities inherently belonged to the dark side, while those which were healing, defensive, self-empowering, or diversionary belonged to the light side. A Jedi combining Force jump and Force speed."Remember: abilities are not inherently good or evil, it's how you use them." Kyle Katarn For example, a Dark Jedi could cast powers that inherently belonged to the light side (like Persuasion). Kyle Katarn, who allied himself with the light side, made use of dark side powers such as Grip and Lightning, possibly because of his experience while fighting Maw, and later on Dromund Kaas. This indicated that skillful Jedi of strong character could use these abilities according to their wisdom since their high experience prevented them from drifting towards the dark side. Core Yoda using telekinesis to lift Luke Skywalker's X-wing. The Core powers were the first powers a Jedi learned, and directly affected his own body or objects without actually harming or benefiting anything (except for Push, which could be used against enemies). Force Speed Force Cloak Force Concealment (Also known as Force Stealth) Force Sense Farseeing Force Empathy Force Seeing Telekinesis Force Jump Force Leap Force Pull Force Push Telepathy Universal Yoda using Force Deflection.Universal powers were generic Force techniques which were associated with neither side of the Force. Almost all Core powers also qualified as Universal powers, but many of them were uncommon and not an integral part of basic Jedi training. Art of the Small Aing-Tii fighting-sight Battle Meditation Breath Control Comprehend Speech Dopplegänger Force Bellow Force Body Force Comprehension Force Confusion Force Deflection (without a lightsaber) Force Listening Oppo Rancisis using Battle meditation.Force Flash Force Illusion Force Meld Force Suppression Force Breach advanced version of Force Suppression Force Throw Force Vision Force Whirlwind variation of Force Push Force Wave advanced version of Force Push Force Repulse another advanced version of Force Push Force Weapon Force Whisper Precognition Psychometry Sever Force Shatterpoint Tapas "Light"A Jedi uses the Force for knowledge and defense, never for attack." Yoda Light side powers were the Force powers that the user accessed through the Force's light side. The Jedi used them for protection, increasing physical and mental capacities, and for defense. They could also inspire and increase the resolve of allies. Certain light side powers could also be used offensively, but did not directly cause physical harm. Nomi Sunrider, using the power of Force Light.Alter Environment Animal Friendship Battlemind Battle Precognition Combustion Crucitorn Droid Disable Electric Judgment Force Blinding Force Enlightenment Force Healing Force Ghost Force Light Wall of Light Can be used by the combined might of many Jedi, though the results may be catastrophic. Force Orb Force Projection Force Protection A power only achieved by high-rank Jedi Masters, Force protection made the bearer invulnerable to a wide range of attacks; the ultimate power in terms of defense. Force Defend Reduced damage taken by Force powers. Force Absorb A trained Jedi may have converted all kinds of Force attacks used against them to additional Force charge. As the energy used to perform Force-related powers was limited, a Jedi could use the enemy's attacks to their own benefit, instead of receiving damage from them. Protection Bubble With this Force power, the user could create a defensive sphere around the body, which would protect him from a wide range of attacks, deflect laser blasts, and inflict a certain amount of damage upon contact with the enemy. Obi-Wan Kenobi, a master of Jedi mind tricks.Force Stun Force Stasis advanced version of Force Stun Force Stasis Field the most advanced version of Force Stun Force Valor Hibernation Trance Levitation Not restricted to Jedi usage Mind Trick (Also known as Affect Mind) Force Persuasion Less powerful than the Mind Trick Malacia Morichro Plant Surge Ray Revitalize Dark Darth Vader using Force Choke on Admiral Motti, after he called the Force an "ancient religion"."A Sith knows when to unleash the fury of the dark side, and when to hold back. Patience can be a weapon if you know how to use it, and your anger can fuel the dark side if you learn how to control it." Darth Bane Dark side powers were used to harm, debilitate, or kill. Some, like Rage and Drain, were used to benefit the user personally, akin to powers of the light side, with the difference that these were used at the expense of his or her own health or another individual's Force reserve. The dark side drew its power from emotion, and while the intent behind their use may well have been good at the time, it was most likely to lead one to further spiritual corruption from overuse, without the proper self control and mindset. Continuous use of dark powers was shown to have a physically corrupting effect on the Force-user, regardless of intent, due to the body's inability to handle such power for long periods of time. Deadly Sight Drain Knowledge Force Destruction Force Drain Force Fear Force Horror advanced version of Force Fear Force Insanity the most advanced version of Force Horror Force Flight Force Lightning (Organic limbs & extremities required) Chain Lightning variation of Force Lightning Force Shock variation of Force Lightning Force Storm (lightning) advanced version of Force Lightning Emperor Palpatine using his feared Force Lightning technique.Force Resuscitation Force Scream Force Slow Force Affliction variation of Force Slow Force Plague advanced version of Force Slow Force Storm (wormhole) Force Wound Force Choke variation of Force Grip Force Grip advanced version of Force Wound Force Crush the most advanced version of Force Wound Kinetite Mechu-deru Midichlorian Manipulation Mind Control Sith Alchemy Spear of Midnight Black Spirit Transference Thought Bomb Torture by Chagrin Force powers applied to lightsaber combat. The Jedi and other Force organizations that used lightsabers also developed specific Force techniques especially for lightsaber combat. Alter Damage Dun Möch Saber Barrier Saber Throw Telekinetic lightsaber combat ((I found all of these at http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Force_Powers you can probably get some explanation for some of these there....)) Edited November 6, 2010 by Danniphantom Share this post Link to post
Posted August 18, 2010 (edited) Mah Bios: Name: Marcus J./ Aaron M. Flint (Known as Flint or Mark) Age: 26/26 Gender: Male/male Race: Human Appearance: But wears: Armour and Weapons: A photon pistol as his side arm. And a pulse rifle. http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs36/f/2008/261...ed_by_SgtHK.jpg Personality: They are very kind but only trusts close friends and each other. They are able to get along and communicate with other advanced aliens because of their way above average IQ. Short History: When Flint was 14 he took an IQ test and was classified as a Genius with the second highest score in history. At 15 he was accepted into Harvard University and graduated with a doctorate in mechanics, mathematics, astronomy and theoretical physics before his 25th birthday. When he was out of college he joined the Galactic Patrol and was assigned on board the star ship Ambassador. He worked his way up through the ranks and eventually became the captains favorite and first mate. When the captain died during a raid Flint took up the position of captain. Other: A pulse rifle uses a photon coated bullet with a plasma outer coating. Because of the properties of the photon and the plasma the bullet slows down quite a bit. The bullet can be seen as a black streak about half an inch long and the stream of plasma trailing behind it is about 4 inches long. Although one could see the bullet and its slowed rate you have as much of a chance of dodging it as you would trying to dodge a normal bullet. http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs37/f/2008/258...le_by_SgtHK.jpg. Marcus and Aaron are twins, Marcus is a jedi and Aaron is not yet realized as being force sensitive. --- Name: The Ambassador Type: Federation Cruiser (Specific to the galactic patrol fleet) Appearance: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs16/f/2007/133...r_by_ToBiOh.jpg Follow link... Alternate Appearance: (This is the Federation Station) Holds about 30 cruisers: http://www.freakygaming.com/gallery/game_a...ace_station.jpg Weapons: Mostly Photon, Plasma and Pulse cannons but they have Mass weapons as well such as missiles full of ball bearings to destroy homing missiles and do massive damage to the hulls of ships when going at high enough speeds. Crew: (Whoever wants to be a part of the crew can just pm me and ask) Marcus J. Flint - Captain--- Name: Darren (Sting) Age: 37 Race: D'Ni Gender: Male Appearance: (That is also his ship if you can't put 2 and 2 together) Weapons: A photon pistol as his side arm. And a pulse rifle. http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs36/f/2008/261...ed_by_SgtHK.jpg History: In story Personality: Well he's a bounty hunter so.... Other: A pulse rifle uses a photon coated bullet with a plasma outer coating. Because of the properties of the photon and the plasma the bullet slows down quite a bit. The bullet can be seen as a black streak about half an inch long and the stream of plasma trailing behind it is about 4 inches long. Although one could see the bullet and its slowed rate you have as much of a chance of dodging it as you would trying to dodge a normal bullet. http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs37/f/2008/258...le_by_SgtHK.jpg --- Name: Crystal Age: 27 Race: D'Ni Gender: Female, duh -.- Alliance: Jedi (Good side) Description: D'Ni are simply humans with extended life. They live for up to twice as long as a normal human and are twice as strong, fast and all over twice as good as humans. They are identified in two ways. One is that if you look at the middle of their back, between the shoulder blades on the spine there is a crystal that holds their life force. It pulsates in sync with there heart via a flash of dim light. This is usually the place that is guarded most heavily by a cortosis armor, cortosis, being a mineral that makes armor of any kind or weapons resistant to the blade of a lightsaber. The D'Ni use this mineral in weaponry and armor making. The second way is by their tail and slightly pointed ears. The D'Ni simply have not evolved out of their tail, it is ape like as the D'Ni, like humans, evolved from the primate family. Clothing: In the pic Powers: Confuzzled, force, being a jedi. Weapon(s): Lightsaber, and cortosis infused long sword. Appearance: Her ligthsaber is blue though. History: Later in the rp Other: She is fluent in several languages throughout the galaxy. Force Power Proficiencies: Heal, Push, Pull, Lightning, Telepathy, Telekinesis and Animal Friendship. Edited November 14, 2010 by Danniphantom Share this post Link to post
Posted August 18, 2010 Characters: Name/Age/Gender/Race/Affiliation (Jedi sith bounty hunter etc.)/Class (Master padawan etc.)/Username Share this post Link to post
Posted August 18, 2010 Timeline: Dates are given in BBY and ABY, the events of this thread take place in the year 2,800 ABY+, to see timeline follow below link: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dates Share this post Link to post
Posted August 18, 2010 Race Application: (If you want to make a race and get it put on the list to alert people of your race for developing your character or so people can use them, follow this application) Name of Race: Image of Race: Is your race part of an Empire?: (Yes or no) Name of Empire: Date of Origin of Empire AND Date of End of the Empire (if your are making a really old race that was once part of an empire the end date is optional): Example 30,000 BBY - 1,360 BBY OR 30,000 BBY+ Historic Dates of Empire: Historic Dates of Race: Expansion of Empire: Description of Race: Description of Empire: (Purpose, like is it an empire like the Infinite Empire that was a conquering Empire or is your empire a buisness empire or what?) Notable People in History of the Race: Notable events in History of Race: Notable People in History of the Empire: Notable events in History of Empire: NOT ALL INFORMATION WILL PUT ON THE LIST THIS WILL ALLOW ME TO GET THE BASIC IDEA OF YOUR RACE AND EMPIRE SO I CAN MAKE THE DESCRIPTION MYSELF!!! Delete EVERYTHING in parenthasis '()'. Share this post Link to post
Posted August 18, 2010 (edited) Classes: (I am open to any suggestions you may have for classes so please PM me or let me know on the OOC thread and we can discuss it.) Sith Stalker: Stalkers are a feared class of warrior in the Galaxy. They are trained by Shantaar himself as a small Elite class of assassins. Those who see them in action know their talent and fear them. They are the best of the best and not many who face a Sith Stalker live to tell about it. Only a select few have been lucky enough to fight a sith stalker and live to tell about it. One of which is Kendith Bindo, a wise old jedi who wanders the halls of the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine. Stalkers wear a light but strong armor: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars...lkerCloseUp.jpg Force Powers of a Sith Stalker must include: -Jump -Push -Pull -Invisibility -Battle Meditation -Seeing -Choke -Destroy Mind -Dominate Mind These force powers will be learned over the course of the rp but those who choose to be a sith stalker will have 3 extra force power options but MUST choose from the above list. Because of the small number of Sith Stalkers and their power I am only giving the position out to those who ask and I see fit to use them. Physical Abilities: Sith Stalkers must have intense training to succeed. Several Abilities include: Scaling walls and ceilings Taking a blaster shot point blank to the chest or back HALO Jumping (High Altitude Low Opening) HEOPTIL Jumping (High Earth Orbit Precision Tactical Insertion Landing): HEOPTIL is like LEOPTIL which is a type of HALO jumping where Stalkers jump from their orbiting personal shuttle towards a planet surface. They are required to land with pinpoint accuracy so that when they land they could dive through a single opening less than a meter wide. Their armor takes 90% of the impact leaving the Stalker able to get up and continue their mission with nothing more than a bruise no more than a nickels diameter in size. LEOPTIL (Low Earth Orbit Precision Tactical Insertion Landing) --- Also our banner: Edited August 10, 2012 by Danniphantom Share this post Link to post
Posted August 21, 2010 (edited) Post! Edited November 15, 2010 by Danniphantom Share this post Link to post
Posted August 21, 2010 Would just like to point out that you have a LOT of in-universe issues. Share this post Link to post
Posted September 1, 2010 First off, congrats to you for doing this. Star Wars is long and scary and detailed-ridden and so will make a great RP. Kudos. There are a few issues I found that I would like to help you smooth out, since is a very good RP that you've obviously invested effort in. I'm going to start with the intro. Who is/are training the new Jedi, and what are Jedi, Sith, Bounty Hunters, ranks of the Jedi, ect.? What destroyed the Empire? With the subject of the kid 'not having it' you repeat yourself several times. Why did the Unknown Legends have to step in instead of the Jedi handling the Sith? How are the Unknown Legends able to escape detection from the Sith, who are just as force-sensitive as the Jedi? My head spun when I saw all those Force powers. Could you get rid of the doubles so the list is less confusing and explain some of them? That would be it. I hope this helps! Share this post Link to post
Posted September 2, 2010 Well, I got the list from the wookieepidia, so explanations are there, I don't know about the doubles because I didn't look at every single one, I know it's head spinning but it's just there if people are confused on what force powers to choose from. The Empire was destroyed sometime After the battle of Yavin, it was the empire portrayed in the last three episodes of star wars. Usually the empire from the movies are many times seen as "The Galactic Empire" because that was the name of the empire... The ranks are simple, Jedi are the Jedi Sith are the Sith Bounty Hunters are mercs, they work for anyone I don't think I have to worry about explaining that because really anyone who doesn't know what a Jedi, a sith or a bounty hunter is don't belong on a Star Wars thread... Ranks of the jedi are in the bio format, many of them are from star wars but I added mentor, it's basically a tutor, one who assists the jedi who need assistance but they are not masters so they don't get an apprentice to train in the ways of the force. As known in the movies, the Jedi were not wiped out, merely endangered, slowly over the 2800 years of peace more and more force sensitive children were discovered, so the jedi were trained by the already existing jedi. That seems obvious. I am not sure though how the sith would not detect them, I guess it allows the viewer to think of their own reason and adds more to the mystery of the Unknown Legends, the force is powerful, it can be used to do many things, even mask itself if needed. I guess the Jedi have become more secretive, they are not open like they used to be, so all Jedi are jedi of the unknown, because they train in secrecy so the jedi of the unknown ARE the jedi, just with a fancy tag at the end... Other than that, thanks. Yes, this did take me a long time, especially creating the race of the Arkadians, It is very hard to make a race and if I was any good at drawing I would draw what the Arkadians look like... though all I can say now is they are similar to the combination of the Selkath and the Rakata, but that's all I can say, maybe with an elongated face towards the mouth like selkath, but only a little, and the elongated forehead and skull like the Rakata, I can't say much else... Share this post Link to post
Posted September 26, 2010 (edited) Just because some people haven't seen Harry Potter doesn't man they wouldn't like to be part of a Harry Potter RP, so I think you should explain what the rankings and differences in each. Only recently have I learned that the Jedi weren't completely wiped out except of Obi-wan, so for anyone who has only seen the movies it wouldn't be that clear. Oh, would you mind if I organized your force-powers list? And off topic-ish question here: what are Selkath and Rakata? My knowledge of Star Wars species goes only so far as the basics, like Gun-Guns and Huts. Edited September 26, 2010 by 14darkness Share this post Link to post
Posted September 28, 2010 I'm sorry if I correct you here because it's really bugging me, Gungans and Hutts, the selkath and rakata races are found in the game Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic (KOTOR for short.) one of my all time favorite games. You should take the time to play it. As for everything else I'll put a link to a place that's better fit to explain the star wars universe, it's where I got all my info and a lot of info on it is certified to be authentic and valid. Share this post Link to post
Posted September 28, 2010 You're fine in your corrections and right to correct me. My brother is the finatic (and would probably shake his head at my lack of knowledge) so what I know is limited to the movies and the Hard Contact series. Besides that, putting up a link is a good idea and one that'll help a lot. Share this post Link to post
Posted October 1, 2010 ((Yeah, I am a Star Wars fanatic but I am not the one to come to when in need of explaining it...)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 3, 2010 ((Would someone please accept this already! I've been waiting over a month!)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 16, 2010 ((The link you provided for more information about the Rakatans and Infinite Empire no longer exists so you may want to find a new link to another website that will off the information. You have a few run-on sentences. Use periods instead of trying to stuff all your ideas in one sentence and connecting them with commas~ aalthough he was born of 2 Jedi who were very powerful, this kid didn't have it. That needs to be capitalized and spelled correctly. You have other misspelled words. Run this through spell check~ Make sure Sith and Jedi are capitalized consistently throughout your RP.)) Share this post Link to post
Posted October 28, 2010 (( They use tools they make out of metal stone wood and other materials they work with. You need a comma between eack of these objects because it is a list~ In the historic day part you have some pretty extensive run-on sentences. End each new idea with a period, not a comma. Fix this and you should be about ready or ready to be moved~)) Share this post Link to post
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