Posted April 15, 2012 alright I'll change stuff. Also I did have a unique note system, astricks, but they were way more confusing then numbers. I will change the first post more soon, but right now I'm eating and don't have the time Share this post Link to post
Posted April 22, 2012 Alright as well as a bump I'd like to note I changed what needed to be changed, and this rp is officially more than 2 weeks old. I will now approve characters and we can start. Share this post Link to post
Posted April 23, 2012 (edited) Your "plot" section has no plot. What is going on in the roleplay, aside from the characters just running around doing not much of anything? The whole plot is that they are supposed to adapt to life in the tribe, while combining their life in the real world with it, while fending off mythical creatures, humans, jealous rejected shamans, and regular animals. Not every good RP needs a definite "Oh there's this big boss guy you gotta find/find out about then find and beat!" or something. Maybe I'll throw in some big mythical creature that is causing big problems that they need to find, but there is no definite foe for the whole RP. And why don't I spell out character? Cause I have a hard time spelling that word >.> Also Main should be capalized, Realm also did though it is referring to it as a different dimension, so a place. NPC's is plural. As in more than one NPC, because it can be their FAMILY not just one member So their whole family could be NPC's. Edited April 23, 2012 by akiraa Share this post Link to post
Posted April 24, 2012 ah, and I added a plot summary to the bottom of the plot section Share this post Link to post
Posted April 30, 2012 I'll join sometime tomorrow, just wandering is there a possibily you can make up a list of rules for characters, like a law. For example, it is against the law to kill another Spirit animal person(or whatever they are called) Share this post Link to post
Posted May 3, 2012 (Shaman, and the spirit animals wouldn't accept them if they would kill someone like that.) Share this post Link to post
Posted May 8, 2012 (Wahh yes Kept forgetting to send pm's saying we can ) Share this post Link to post
Posted May 9, 2012 ((so where does everyone start? who is already in the tribe?)) Share this post Link to post
Posted May 9, 2012 (Akira is and you can if you want. If you want I can start off having Akira and a whole huge group of kids in the field seeing you char. coming. It's up to you.) Share this post Link to post
Posted May 10, 2012 Nate was walking home from school. He sighed, wishing-not for the first time-that he had some friends. Suddenly, he found himself in a forest! "How'd I get here?" he asked aloud. Share this post Link to post
Posted May 11, 2012 (... I'll accept this but please try to post a bit longer It's hard to work with small posts...) Akira was in the large clearing near the tribe, the same clearing where she first ended up, with a lot of the children from the tribe. As usual she had her bow and arrows on her back, the only thing unusual for her was that she didn't have her katana. She decided to leave it home since the kids tend to want to play with it. The arrows on the other hand were common so they didn't care. Suddenly the clearing went quiet and Akira looked over to see a potential tribe member. But instead of feeling happy, she had to resist the urge to grab her bow. They could be dangerous still. But instead Akira quickly said in their native language so that the new comer couldn't understand them "Get behind me." The kids quickly did as she said. Then Bear Claw quickly stepped forward. He nodded at Akira and quickly started saying in English "Welcome, potential brother..." And went on with his usual speech to the new comers. Share this post Link to post
Posted May 14, 2012 Throwing his backpack over his shoulders, Ethan navigated his way through the mass of high schoolers as the last bell rang. Most of the other students were talking to their friends while they waited for their rides or walking to their cars. Ethan glared enviously at the owner of a brand new Hummer as he passed him just chilling in his car listening to the radio; the pizza place where he worked after school was about mile and a half away from the school. None of the bus lines ran past there and he didn't know anyone well enough yet to ask for a ride. And after staying up until 4am the previous night studying for an AP Chem test, a mile and a half walk seemed like torture. Nevertheless, Ethan gritted his teeth and started walking faster. The sounds of excited teens and cars faded, but he was so lost in thoughts that he didn't notice at first. Okay, I get my paycheck next Friday, he mused. The rent's not due 'til the Monday after that, but I still owe about fifty dollars because I came up short last month... I'll have to try to get overtime pay again or skip a few meals- Wait, what the hell? Ethan's thoughts were interrupted as he finally noticed that he wasn't in the suburbs anymore. When did they build a park here? he wondered as he looked around the clearing. He assumed it had to be a park due to all the children and teenagers hanging around. "Excuse me, but where the hell am I?" he asked as he approached the oldest looking teen. Share this post Link to post
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