Posted March 12, 2012 (edited) Umm... First RP Poke me if I did something wrong Plot ~My attempt at a bit of a plot and what has happened before Into the world a few people who were different were born. They didn't fit in. Some people called them angels, others called them demons. These few people had wings. They were cast away from everyone else because many people believe they will bring the end of the world. Police hunted them down, to hand them over to scientists to be tested. They ran away from their homes after their parents tried to hand them over to the government. Now they have to stick together to survive. Watching each others' backs. Will they ever be accepted into life as people, Humans? You are one of the few children/teenagers who are part of a small group of winged people. The only thing you all have in common is wings. Everyone here has wings. You were born with them. After running away from your home, someone here has found you. They showed you where you all sleep, The tree house. It's still rather small and you hope to expand it. The whole world is looking for you and this small group. You have to fight to survive. This is your new family. Place Earth, England present day. The base is a small and basic tree house,next to a small stream with fresh water, big enough to fit 5 grown adults lying down comfortably. It's in a massive forest next to the city of London. Basic map General Information about what you can do Your character's wings are as big as they need to be to lift their weight off the ground. It's hard for them to lift off the ground when they are young because their wings haven't become adjusted to the body, they can normally start flying for about 15 minutes when they are 7-8 and, when they are about 11 they can stay in the air for around 1 hour; it goes upwards from there. When they aren't using their wings, they just fold them close to their backs, like birds or dragons (this is how their wings fold up). Player Sheet Username: Name: Age: How old they look: Gender: Appearance: (What type of wings they have, hair and eye colour, Height???, etc.) Personality: History: Good things about them: Bad things about them: [B]Username:[/B] [B]Name:[/B] [B]Age:[/B] [B]How old they look:[/B] [B]Gender:[/B] [B]Appearance:[/B] [B]Personality:[/B] [B]History:[/B] [B]Good things about them:[/B] [B]Bad things about them:[/B] Rules Don't powerplay, godmod, chat speak, leet, etc. Keep flaws in your characters, and make them realistic. No swearing. Keep everything PG 13. Minimum of 4 sentences per post. Respect each other. Negative behavior (OoC) is not acceptable. Please try to use proper spelling and decent grammar. Character sheets should be posted here to be approved. A limit of 2 amount of characters per player. Try and keep with everyone else (don't go off somewhere, like the Antarctic when everyone else is in England or something). Everyone can control NPCs; they are just here to give a bit more to the group. NPCs Name: Flint Age: 19 How old they look: 20 Gender: Male Appearance: He's a young male with dirty blond hair. His eyes are a friendly brown. His wings are brown and webbed. His clothes are rather ragged, but they fit him. He, like all the others, is rather slim. Personality: He's friendly and will do quite a lot to look after the rest. He's a good team mate but prefers to stick with the same people. History: He ran away from his home when he was 15 because his parents tried to hand him over to the government. He found his way to the tree house after he was forced to take cover in the forest. He was one of the first to find it. (The rest can be made up.) Good things about them: He's friendly and caring and likes to help and can have a good laugh. Bad things about them: He normally likes to stay around his close friends. He has a rather bad temper so people tend to try not to anger him. He can be rather violent. Name: Sarah Age: 15 How old they look: 14 Gender: Female Appearance: Blonde hair and blue eyes. Her wings are white and webbed. Her clothes are rather muddy but still fit her well. She, like all the others, is rather slim. Personality: She's independent and prefers to be left alone. She's only good friends with a few others. Most new members to the group stay away from her. She's a vegetarian History: She was kicked out when she was 14, and has been on the street since. She found the tree house while she was trying to get food in the forest. Good things about them: She's a good friend once people know her. She gets most of their herbs and vegetables. She knows most about cooking. Bad things about them: She can get quite snappy with people, and likes to get revenge on people who annoy her, usually by using their food. When she gets angry, it takes her a 5- 24 hours to calm down. If anyone wants to make some more, check with me first, these two could use some more description and that. Accepted Characters: Username: Shadowwolf6 Name: Ebony Age: 11 How old they look: 12 Gender: Female Appearance: Ebony Something like that She's about 5ft 1. She has black feathery wings. Personality: Ebony is quite a bit like wolves. She likes to spend time with others, she works well as a team, she looks on the bright side quite often. She can always make a joke about something, no matter how serious History: She was abandoned as a baby and then adopted by a small family living on the street. She grew up in a world full of danger. She had to stay hidden for quite a lot of her life. Her foster parents died along with her older brother a few years ago due to the people hunting her down. She learnt how to fly after they died Good things about them: She's nice to other people and will look after most other people if they get lost. She likes to play around. Bad things about them: She's often wary of new people and can get into fights. She likes to look around places so she gets into quite a bit of trouble sometimes. Username: Firebird Name: Legend Age: 19 How old they look: 13-18 Gender: F Appearance: Avatar. Her wings are white with feathers, like an angel's. Personality: Keeps to herself and is wary of others. Sometimes shy. If she gets intimidated or angry enough, she tends to get agitated. History: Her mother and father were murdered when she was 7 years old. She lives alone right now in a junkyard to avoid people. Good things about them: She likes to listen to people and try to comfort them. Bad things about them: She has the horrible knack of trouble finding her. Username: ReileeRizzle Name: Dolores Blair Fortunatar Age: 17 How old they look: 14 Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: Dolores Blair is a very shy, daydreaming, 'Away with tha faeries' kind of person. There is nothing she loves more than talking to the ghost children, Two children that nobody can see exept for her, and playing with animals. History: When Dolores Blair was born, she was taken straight to the government. In one of the science labs she say that there were to winged humans that had been killed while they were being tested on. She sais that the ghosts of Emily and John are her friends, and they go with her everywhere. When she was just 4 years old she, emily & john all escaped the science lab and lived together in a forest. Good things about them: She is nice and very helpful. Bad things about them: Everyone things she is coocoo. Username: StormofHolly Name: Riley Age: 12 How old they look: 14 Gender: Female Appearance: She is a short, black haired girl with light blue eyes. She is a total of 5'5" in height, 125 pounds in weight. Her wings are bird like with a wide array of red, white and black colors. Personality: She is calm and productive, wise but shy at the same time. She is very intelligent, but at the same time lacks in the skills to think clearly due to her ADHD. With this disability, she makes up for it with her strength, wisdom and grace. History: She was born. Yes, she was given birth too, believe it or not. When she reached 4 years old, her parents tried to catch her, but she pushed away and ran off into the woods, knowing she would have been brought to the authorities. 8 years later, she is wandering in the woods, waiting to be found. Good things about them: Strong, wise a calm. Bad things about them: Show off, ADHD. Username: WinterWhisperz Name: Nova Age: 20 How old they look: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: Kind and generous, very caring for her friends, almost motherly History: Was the only child in her family, and was the oldest, her parents hated her wings and when she was young, they tried to cut them off, obviously being unsuccessful they tried to tie them down or strap them to her so they wouldn't show, they hated the fact that she wasn't normal and thought she was somehow possessed. So when they thought she was old enough to fend for herself, they threw her out of their house. She wandered the streets for awhile scavenging until she learned to hunt and fish. She survived like that for awhile until the government decided they wanted to take all of the different children for experimentation. It was that announcement that drew her parents to go and find her and try to force her over to them, she had barely gotten away. Good things about them: Shes a kind hearted girl, she helps them gather food and likes to take care of everyone. Bad things about them: She can get too attached to things, can become too emotional, neglects herself for the good of others. Username: Silver_Voices Name: Charlotte Marvin Age: 17 How old they look: 15 or 16 Gender: Female Appearance: http://arifee.unblog.fr/files/2007/08/897.jpg She wears the gloves to hide needle scars on her arms. Personality: Charlotte is usually the adventurous type, but out in the wilderness she's overly cautious, with what she does, who she speaks to, and where she goes. If you start talking to her, she seems like she's hiding something. A big secret. She often curls up and stares out, as if watching for something. She'll do that for hours on end being completely still. If you try to force her out of her comfort zone, she'll turn on you, either slapping you or landing a punch on your stomach. She's not someone to mess with. But if you earn her trust, she'll follow you to the end. She'll protect you with her life. History: Charlotte's father was a scientist. He performed private experiments on her himself. Her life at home was just as bad as it might have been in a lab, but she stayed with her father and mother because she loved them. Eventually, her mother could not stand the abuse to her daughter and drove her into the woods at 14 years old, leaving her there and giving her a bag of survival items and a note with instructions. She refuses to let the bag out of reach. Good things about them: She has amazing survival skills. She can find food, hide, and escape detection with the best of them, even with her red wings. She treats you very well if she likes you, putting your safety and needs above her own. Bad things about them: She can be pretty violent if she doesn't like you/you do something she doesn't like. Also, she often jumps into situations, not thinking about anything first. She often becomes malnourished when caring for someone else. She becomes so worried about the other person she forgets to eat. Username: Mousia Name: Sirin Age: 20 How old they look: 21-22 Gender: Female Appearance: (Sirin has grey eyes, black hair and larger wings, though) Personality: Her words are sharp as a spear and blunt as a club at the same time. She is tough to those she hates and those she doesn't know, but when she gets close to people she is protective and stubborn, she doesn't want to lose them. History: Sirin had a life of blissful mischief, but, when her parents grew sick and old, she scavenged for food and begged for work. When her parents died within a day of each other, all of Sirin's hopes for life were dashed. On her own, she grew more and more angry at the world. Finally, she lashed out on the city by lighting houses of her bullies on fire laughing as they all choked on the smoke and begged for mercy, for she had locked the doors beforhand. When the dust settled, she realized that she was a cold-blooded killer and fled, though she would have been banished anyway. She focused hard on containing herself, then, one night, a very old and frail fae dumped her on the boat to the school, where she found guidance, found herself. But, the old killer is still there, it will never go away... Good things about them: Protective, cares about friends + loved ones Bad things about them: Stubborn, hothead, holds grudges, has been in very bad places in life Username: Dauntingale Name: Iris Win Age: 16 How old they look: 15 Gender: Female Appearance: Strawberry blonde hair sprawls down Iris’ back and nearly flows past her wings, which are an off-white color with hints of dark yellow matching her hair. Her long lashes constantly conceal her bright green eyes. She loves wearing bright clothing and sneakers. Personality: A clever and cheerful girl no matter what the situation. She tried to make the best of things and look on the bright side. If she isn’t smiling, the world must be upside down. She isn’t battle hardened whatsoever and is still adjusting to all the abandonment her wings had caused her. She is sensitive on the inside, though she doesn’t show it outwardly. History: Her loving parents tried to accept her and help her live a normal life, but it got to pressuring for them and Iris saw that. One day when another family showed public disrespect of her parents in her father's own business--a small restaurant--she decided she had caused enough trouble and grief for her loved ones. The next night, she packed a few things, left a note, and ran away. Good things about them: She tries to make the best of things and look on the bright side. If she isn’t smiling, the world must be upside down. She is very witty and can get out of many situations with her brains and nimble fingers (she used to play many instruments). Bad things about them: She isn’t strong (physically and emotionally) and is still adjusting. She doesn’t always make the best decisions in life despite her cleverness.[/size] Edited July 10, 2012 by Shadowwolf6 Share this post Link to post
Posted March 12, 2012 They are just normal human beings with wings right? which means no special powers whatsoever? Share this post Link to post
Posted March 12, 2012 They are just normal human beings with wings right? which means no special powers whatsoever? Yes, all they can do is fly Share this post Link to post
Posted March 12, 2012 Ahh, I see. I'l send in my form soon, either here after the RP has been approved or directly via pm, if that's okay with you :3 Share this post Link to post
Posted March 12, 2012 Ahh, I see. I'l send in my form soon, either here after the RP has been approved or directly via pm, if that's okay with you :3 Sure ;D *Is a newbie at roleplaying* So, have I done anything wrong? I wouldn't be suprised if I didn't do well with spelling Share this post Link to post
Posted March 12, 2012 Username: Firebird Name: Legned Age: 19 How old they look: 13-18 Gender: F Appearance: avitar. Her wings are white with feathers, like an angel's. Personality: Keeps to herself and is wary of others. Sometimes shy. If she gets intimidated or angry enough, she tends to get agitated. History: Her mother and father were murdered when she was 7 years old. She lives alone right now in a junkyard to avoid people. Good things about them: She likes to listen to people and try to comfort them. Bad things about them: She has the horrible knack of trouble finding her. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 12, 2012 (edited) Username: Firebird Name: Legned Age: 19 How old they look: 13-18 Gender: F Appearance: avitar. Her wings are white with feathers, like an angel's. Personality: Keeps to herself and is wary of others. Sometimes shy. If she gets intimidated or angry enough, she tends to get agitated. History: Her mother and father were murdered when she was 7 years old. She lives alone right now in a junkyard to avoid people. Good things about them: She likes to listen to people and try to comfort them. Bad things about them: She has the horrible knack of trouble finding her. Added. Put in a junkyard in the scenary, that's where they get all of their stuff . Made a very bad map Edited March 12, 2012 by Shadowwolf6 Share this post Link to post
Posted March 14, 2012 (I meant to type Legend as the name. Sorry! lol! And the map idea is neat!) Share this post Link to post
Posted March 15, 2012 (I meant to type Legend as the name. Sorry! lol! And the map idea is neat!) We can't start in the Unapproved section so you don't have to use brackets I'll edit your character's name Share this post Link to post
Posted March 27, 2012 Bump, It's been over 2 weeks since this was started, Yes? If I'm correct, I can now PM an approver? Share this post Link to post
Posted March 28, 2012 1: Because many people belive they will bring the end of the world 2: There arn't that many of them to begin with, they will expand the treehouse as more people come, there is enough space in the treehouse too fit about 5 grown people lying down at once comfortably. 3: Their wings are as big as they need to be to lift their weight off the ground. It's hard for them to lift off the groun when they are young becuase their wings haven't become adjusted to the body, they can normally start flying for about 15 mins when they are 7-8 when they are about 11 they can stay in the air for around 1 hour, it goes upwards from there. When they arn't using their wings, they just fold them close to their backs, like birds or dragons (Took a while to find what I mean). 4: Well, they might be older around the world, but they only started appearing about 19-20 years ago in England. 5: They Folded their wings very tightly and put their clothes around them (This got painfull after a while, the first place they could get to was the forest) 6: Becuase they haven't been spotted, they begin to go out more, thinking that everyone had forgotten. But they get spotted (Rest is going to be kept secret Makes it more fun) Hope that answered most of them, THanks for replying Share this post Link to post
Posted March 28, 2012 1: Because many people belive they will bring the end of the world 2: There arn't that many of them to begin with, they will expand the treehouse as more people come, there is enough space in the treehouse too fit about 5 grown people lying down at once comfortably. 3: Their wings are as big as they need to be to lift their weight off the ground. It's hard for them to lift off the groun when they are young becuase their wings haven't become adjusted to the body, they can normally start flying for about 15 mins when they are 7-8 when they are about 11 they can stay in the air for around 1 hour, it goes upwards from there. When they arn't using their wings, they just fold them close to their backs, like birds or dragons (Took a while to find what I mean). 4: Well, they might be older around the world, but they only started appearing about 19-20 years ago in England. 5: They Folded their wings very tightly and put their clothes around them (This got painfull after a while, the first place they could get to was the forest) 6: Becuase they haven't been spotted, they begin to go out more, thinking that everyone had forgotten. But they get spotted (Rest is going to be kept secret Makes it more fun) Hope that answered most of them, THanks for replying Try adding these in your plot and other information so that everyone can get this info. :3 This is just personal preference, but I would have plot/setting/history/any other RP info like that before the rules. Makes the thread a little more clear and the RP a little more welcome, in my opinion. ^^ Share this post Link to post
Posted March 29, 2012 Try adding these in your plot and other information so that everyone can get this info. :3 This is just personal preference, but I would have plot/setting/history/any other RP info like that before the rules. Makes the thread a little more clear and the RP a little more welcome, in my opinion. ^^ Will do sock Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2012 I don't know, I think you need more in the story, maybe you would like to see some other role plays? The other ones have a lot of story. And, how did the teens become Angels or demons? Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2012 I don't know, I think you need more in the story, maybe you would like to see some other role plays? The other ones have a lot of story. And, how did the teens become Angels or demons? They arn't angels or deamons. They were born with wings... SOmething happened with DNA I think O.o Ok, adding more onto the story Into the world a few people who were different were born. They didn't fit in. Some people called them angels, others called them demons. These few people had wings. They were cast away from everyone else because many people belive they will bring the end of the world. Police hunt them down. The world is at war with them. They were kicked out of their homes by their own parents. Now they have to stick together to survive. Watching each other's backs, caring for each other, living the life of a street child. Will they ever be accepted into life? You are one of the few children/teenagers who are part of a small group of "Angel" people. The only thing you all have in common is wings. Everyone here has wings. You were born with them. After being kicked out of your home, someone here has found you. They showed you where you all sleep, The tree house. It's still rather small and you hope to expand it. The whole world is looking for you and this small group. You have to fight to survive. This is your new family. But some of the other roleplays don't have much plot on them, about half of what I have... Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2012 Oh, those are free forums. Ones that haven't had much crit. Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2012 Umm... First RP Poke me if I did something wrong Plot ~My attempt at a bit of a plot and what has happened before Into the world a few people who were different were born. They didn't fit in. Some people called them angels, others called them demons. These few people had wings. They were cast away from everyone else because many people beleive they will bring the end of the world. Police hunted them down. They were kicked out of their homes. Now they have to stick together to survive. Watching each others' backs. Will they ever be accepted into life? You are one of the few children/teenagers who are part of a small group of different people. The only thing you all have in common is, wings. Everyone here has wings. You were born with them. After being kicked out of your home, someone here has found you. They showed you where you all sleep, The tree house. It's still rather small and you hope to expand it. The whole world is looking for you and this small group. You have to fight to survive. This is your new family. A little grammar issues....((like, only 3 x3)) Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2012 A little grammar issues....((like, only 3 x3)) Thanks for correcting me Share this post Link to post
Posted March 31, 2012 I don't believe you answered all of my questions in the roleplay yet. Which ones haven't I answered? Share this post Link to post
Posted April 1, 2012 1: Because they had never been seen before, and people believed that god had sent them, this extended to the government because it was happening and it wasn't just some belief with no proof (they are the evidence) 2: Well, yes, they do kinda want to test them, but the group have been resisting so they have to be more violent, so they can contain them and test them. But, you wouldn't want someone poking you, would you? 3: Yes, I'll change that, thanks :3 4: Well, Some of them have been kicked out when they were younger (take my character for example) But others' parents have kept them, like a bond between mother and child, but when they were older, they simply decided they were bringing too much trouble, so they left them. I think it would make more sense if the government just wanted to test them... Share this post Link to post
Posted April 2, 2012 (edited) Updated: Into the world a few people who were different were born. They didn't fit in. Some people called them angels, others called them demons. These few people had wings. They were cast away from everyone else because many people believe they will bring the end of the world. Police hunted them down, to hand them over to scientists to be tested. They were thrown out of their homes. Now they have to stick together to survive. Watching each others' backs. Will they ever be accepted into life as people, Humans? You are one of the few children/teenagers who are part of a small group of winged people. The only thing you all have in common is wings. Everyone here has wings. You were born with them. After being kicked out of your home, someone here has found you. They showed you where you all sleep, The tree house. It's still rather small and you hope to expand it. The whole world is looking for you and this small group. You have to fight to survive. This is your new family. Edited April 2, 2012 by Shadowwolf6 Share this post Link to post
Posted April 3, 2012 Is the bit about the scientists all you added? No, I changed a few things... I've had an idea so editing again... Into the world a few people who were different were born. They didn't fit in. Some people called them angels, others called them demons. These few people had wings. They were cast away from everyone else because many people believe they will bring the end of the world. Police hunted them down, to hand them over to scientists to be tested. They ran away from their homes after their parents tried to hand them over to the government. Now they have to stick together to survive. Watching each others' backs. Will they ever be accepted into life as people, Humans? You are one of the few children/teenagers who are part of a small group of winged people. The only thing you all have in common is wings. Everyone here has wings. You were born with them. After running away from your home, someone here has found you. They showed you where you all sleep, The tree house. It's still rather small and you hope to expand it. The whole world is looking for you and this small group. You have to fight to survive. This is your new family. Bolded the things that have been changed Share this post Link to post
Posted April 4, 2012 ^^ Fixed all of those, and some other problems I noticed Share this post Link to post
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