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> DNA Dragons, Part dragon, part human, all freak.Open!
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Posted: Mar 5 2012, 06:38 PM
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OOC found here.

History:

In the far future, humans have discovered bones of ancient dragons. Some wished to exploit the find to create new dragons. (Humans have the technology to make ancient beings come back to life.) Some wished to leave the bones in peace. There was a HUGE debate on the matter; those who wanted new, living dragons won.

When the new dragons were freed to live as they would, people captured their eggs. They raised the dragons into adulthood. After years of this relationship with dragons, humans got bored. This wasn't the excitement they had anticipated. Soon, they melded their DNA with that of their pets. Not all people did this, but the ones who did became the DNA Dragons. They were freaks, partially dragon, partially human, they did not fit with one or the other. These people realized too late what they had done to themselves to reverse it; they left to the countryside, to hide their shame. The DNA Dragons felt even more shame toward themselves upon leaving, but, for that shame, there was no escape.

However, there were some DNA Dragons who found no need to leave. One was a sixteen-year-old girl, whose parents were the ones who discovered Mt. Helga. Mt. Helga was in a valley the girl's parents, Helga and Marcos, had been studying in. They stopped when they found a volcano inside it; they were going to run before the thing blew. They didn't escape fast enough. The girl was named after her mother, Helga. When Helga found out that her parents were dead, she named the mountain after her dead mother, but it was seen as vain; everyone thought she named the mountain after herself.

Helga became a DNA Dragon in hopes that the power she was given would help her destroy the mountain, before it killed anyone else's family. After the other DNA Dragons left, Helga was forced into being a slave to a man named Vincent Garmasor. In the years she waited for the others who had escaped, she became Vincent's best slave, his second in command. She continued to wait until Garmasor became the tyrant of a mega country; then she stopped. She was now one of the most powerful DNA Dragons out there. Helga controlled half of Vincent's entire empire, but she still wanted that snow-tipped volcano gone. Several other DNA Dragons lived with her, fighting the DNA Dragons who wanted to free them. For some of them, it was the only life they knew.

In the countryside, there were disputes as to where to settle. The DNA Dragons who merged their DNA with that of dragons from a volcano or alpine wanted to live near Mt. Helga. Forest and jungle dragons wanted to live in the nearby forest; coastal dragons wanted to live by the sea. Desert dragons wanted to live underground, where they could simulate different habitats. Despite the suggestion of the desert dragons, they all split up and agreed to meet up when they knew what exactly they could and could not do.

After decades of shame, the DNA Dragons who left had a vote to decide if they should go back to their home. Most of them voted to leave the countryside, but there were several who didn't. The hard-headed Mt. Helga colony and the peaceful Coastal colony thought it best to stay, but when the vote came out against them, they were forced to come.

When they made it back, they found that home was ruled by a tyrant, our good friend Vincent Garmasor. Home was incredibly different; people like them were trapped in cages like animals, forced to do labor too hard for normal humans. They were slaves. The DNA Dragons had to do something.
Before they could act, they were noticed.

Plot:

You are a human, dragon, or DNA Dragon who wants to either free the slaves or keep them. You will fight for one of these causes:

Save the Slaves!- You want to free the DNA Dragon slaves. This cause can be dragon, DNA Dragon, or human.

Keep the Slaves!- You don't want the DNA Dragons free. To you, they are valuable workers. This is only human.

Keep Your Pampered Life!- You are one of Garmasor's main military leaders. If the DNA Dragons are freed, your awesome life of riches and coolness is over! This is exclusively human.

Leave Life Alone!- You are a human who isn't really interested in participating in the war, but you don't really want to free your slaves either. So, you decide to hide, but how long do you think you will be able to run with your DNA Dragons?

Stay a Slave!- You are a DNA Dragon who doesn't know a life not being a slave. You kinda like it. (You can also work with a human who is in "Leave Life Alone!")

Flee to Home!- You are a DNA Dragon who didn't want to come back to the main country in the first place. Your goal is to get back to the place your colony was centered.

Protect Your Friends!- You are a Dragon Rider who has DNA Dragon friends in one of the colonies. You hide them in your home, but how long can you keep this up?

Help Garmasor's Army!- You want DNA Dragons to stay slaves, so you join the army. This can be dragon or human.

Weaken the Military Building!- You want to help the DNA Dragons free their friends, but you know they can't get in while the military building is still this strong. Your goal is to get the characters fighting for the "Save the Slaves!" cause into the military building. You can be dragon, DNA Dragon, or human. DNA Dragons and dragons cannot just say something like: Shinga used her amazing dragon/DNA Dragon abilities to destroy the wall! The walls are made of a super strong metal that will bring you to your knees.

Setting:

This is set in the year 3047 in London, England.

Character sheets-

Member name:

Character name:

Species: (Human, dragon, or DNA Dragon?)

Personality: (What cause are you fighting for?)

What your character looks like: (I would like full sentences for this.)

Powers:

If your character is a human, are they a Dragon Rider?:

Password:


Rules:

1. No godmodding or floodposting.

2. No Mary Sue's or Gary Stu's.

3. No swearing.

4. No Tinsels or Guardians of Nature.

5. ((OOC chat should be written like this)) "As opposed to story chat being written like this," said TSparkle123.

6. Use correct spelling and grammar, it hurts my brain when you use text-speak.

7. No one-liners, this is a semi-lit RP.

8. The password is your favorite Rare Egg if you were born in the months January-June. If you were born in the months July-December, the password is your favorite Halloween Egg.

9. If you don't post for a month (unless you give notice) you will be banned.

10. Have fun! Or I might have to sick Cerberus on you.

~Trolls and anyone who disobeys any of these rules will be kicked.~

Accepted Character Sheets


Member name:TSparkle123

Character name: Shira

Species: Gray DNA Dragon

Personality: Save the Slaves! She's a good friend of Helga, and she hates being a slave. She had gotten used to a pampered life when she was a simple human, and, when raising dragons had begun to be her favorite hobby, she wanted to be able to talk to her favorite dragon, Storm. In order to do this, she figured she had to splice her DNA, and what a mistake putting her choice into public was!

What your character looks like: She is young, but has light gray hair streaked with black. Her gray eyes seem to reflect the weather as it happens.

Powers: She can cause awful storms, but prefers not to.

Dragon Rider?:

Password: pumpkin



Member name: RainDash

Character name: Karyra

Species: DNA Dragon (Electric)

Personality: Save the Slaves! Usually ADD, but once behind a cause, follows it into the grave or until fruition.

What your character looks like: Slitted eyes and semi-pointed ears. Her foldable wings can easily be hidden, but rather than flap, she merely manipulates the air into gliding her around. She can be laid back, or very violent when it suits her. There is no telling where she;ll go or what she'll do, but she is most often the one saying 'causes cannot be abandoned.'

Powers: The most she can do with said powers is cause a mild thunderstorm (when she's concentrating and with no distractions.) And (if she's lucky) stir up a massive amount of rain.

Dragon Rider?:

Password: Black Marrow


Member name: RainDash
Character name: Aya

Species: Hellfire Wyvern DNA Dragon

Personality: In a word? Slightly Psychopathic. She cares very little for others well being or feelings. She has no loyalty except to the one giving her power and respect. She follows Garmansor, even if it is only because its more fun for her. She enjoys using her flames for torture.

What your character looks like: She has balc hair that fades to blue at the tips. She keeps it long and due to her constant need to have more power, she looks more like a dragon than most DNA dragons. She has claws instead of fingertips, and the inside of her arms can burst into flame when she is upset or needs to intimidate someone. Her wings are always out, except in Garmansor's castle. Her signature is a large burned X to poit toward where he latest victim lays burned to a crisp.

Powers:
Actually breathing fire. Her mouth has been enhanced to avoid burning it, but she needs to build it up to use this power.

She often ignites the backs of her arms in combat, and they are usually so hot they are blue colored.

She can conjure fire and execute several kung-fu style moves while shooting flames at her enemies. (firebending basically)
Password: Black Marrow


Member name: TSparkle123

Character name: Vincent Garmasor

Species: That's a secret, but not a dragon.

Personality: Keep Your Pampered Life! He is a cruel tyrant who enjoys the pain of others.

What your character looks like: He has gray hair with little black flecks throughout, green eyes, and he usually wears dark robes.

Powers: That's also a secret.

Dragon Rider?: Again, a secret.

Password: Pumpkin


Member name: TSparkle123

Character name: Kirian

Species: DNA Dragon (Misfit Pygmy)

Personality: Weaken the Military Building! Kirian is slightly insane and has been blamed for several crimes throughout her colony, the worst being murder. Most people find her more pleasant to be around than would be expected.

What your character looks like: She is short and has the orange swirls on her cheek that are on Misfit Pygmies. Kirian has sea green eyes and multi-colored hair.

Dragon Rider?:

Powers: She has a knack for finding the weaknesses of others, but she has trouble finding their strengths. Kirian doesn't know her own weaknesses.

Password: Pumpkin


Member name:Celebi112

Character name: Red

Species: Dragon, female dark myst pygmy

Personality: Save the Slaves!

What your character looks like: (I would like full sentences for this.)Red is named such because instead of having regular wings with purple, she has wings with red, a bright, blood red. No one knows why, but they seem to be the source of her powers. The rest of her is like that of any other Dark Myst pygmy. The size of a small cat, jet black color, a cheerful nature.

Powers: Flamewing Charge- Red's wings ignite in midair as she charges

Flamewing grace- Same as flamewing charge, only it heals all surrounding allies...

Flamewing Fire- Her signature move, she basically creates a giant fire bubble around herself and burns everything around her.

If your character is a human, are they a Dragon Rider?:

Password: Probobly a pumpkin, just 'cuz they're cute...



Member name: Xarria

Character name: Nyx

Species: dragon

Personality: (What cause are you fighting for?) SAVE THE SLAVES!!! Even though she thinks the DNA dragons were idiotic for taking dragon DNA and putting it in themselves, she still doesn't think that they should be slaves.

What your character looks like: (I would like full sentences for this.) Can I paste a pic? If soo...
http://images.wikia.com/dragcave/images/b/...alker_Adult.png
I'm just a LITTLE darker in shade.

Powers: Invisability when frightened.

If your character is a human, are they a Dragon Rider?: Not a human, but could be a dragon rider's dragon.

Password: Oct 8: I like the Black Marrow eggs. They look so cool!!!


Member name: Narvix

Character name: Gregor

Species: Human

Personality: Gregor is... a brute. He doesn't care who you are, he'll hurt you if you're in the way. He tends to be more cruel than gentle and do as he pleases to get what he desires. That includes slavery. Though he more prefers DNA dragons as his free labor, he'll put regular dragons and humans among his workers if he sees fit. Doesn't matter if it might be illegal.
What your character looks like: Gregor is a tall man, about 6'3" or so. He has a muscular frame and a roughened face. His chin is squared with a beard concealing the sharp appearances of his jawline. His black hair falls to his shoulders and can be seen either left alone to drape down from his skull or tied back in a loose ponytail. He usually wears dark jeans with a form fitting t-shirt, wife beater, or even shirtless. On cooler days, he often dons a dark green coat.

Powers: N/A

If your character is a human, are they a Dragon Rider?: No

Password: Rosebud

Member name: Narvix

Character name: Crystaline (Crysta for short)

Species: Royal Blue Dragon

Personality: Crystaline has a very sweet nature and she'll gladly help others in need of aid. She is against the cruelty of slavery and, while she doesn't enjoy conflict, she'll fight to free the DNA dragons. She despises ill-natured beings and prefers not to associate with them in any way possible.

What your character looks like: Much like a normal Royal Blue, her scales are dominantly blue in color with silver highlights. Swirls run up her legs and shoulders. She's a bit smaller than average but it doesn't deter her.

Powers: Crysta has a very limited control over Time. She can manipulate it only on herself and up to three feet from her in any direction. She can either speed up Time around her or slow it down. Each direction has a side effect. Speeding up her time makes her age faster than most. Slowing down time reverses her aging and leaves her paralyzed for a few minutes.

If your character is a human, are they a Dragon Rider?: N/A

Password: Rosebud



Member name: Narvix

Character name: Trivon (Von for short)

Species: Nebula DNA Dragon

Personality: Trivon only wishes to go back home. He had originally been alright with returning to the mainland until the DNA dragons realized something was wrong. By then, however, it was too late. Trivon was captured and sold into slavery. Since then, he's mourned for his freedom and loathes most of the human and dragon kind. He knows there are some dragons and humans who wish to free the slaves and put an end to the tyrant, Vincent. With this knowledge, he holds onto even the faintest sliver of hope that, one day, he'll see the stars again.

What your character looks like: In the way of appearances, Trivon is more draconic than human. His arms have grown wings that mimic one of the lesser-known star clusters he's chosen to adorn and his hands have partially morphed into claws. Standing straight, he reaches about 6' but there's a slight hitch in his back now that makes him hunch over a tiny bit. His legs have given way to that of a Nebula's, the dark scales melting into existence from his human flesh. Most of his skin, previously a light olive tan, has faded into a darker shade towards his extremities. There are shackles around his ankles, around the middle of his neck, and at the end of his tail. When he's not locked up, the shackles are chain-less. Along his back and flanks are a number of scars from multiple whiplashes whenever he does something wrong or disobeys.

Powers: In the way of abilities, Von doesn't have many. He has knowledge about many stars and nebulas. Camouflage could be considered an ability but it only works if he's flying high in the night sky.

If your character is a human, are they a Dragon Rider?: N/A

Password: Rosebud


Member name:TSparkle123 (Twi)

Character name: Shinx

Species: Dragon- Royal Blue.

Personality: Cause is same as rider. She trusts Jak with her life and would do anything for him. Shinx isn't quick to trust anyone, but will trust those her rider trusts. She is generally quiet and usually only speaks to Jak through thoughts.

What your character looks like: A general Royal Blue, except a small white symbol next to the silver swirl on her left leg.

Powers: Magic, telekinesis, and flight. (Not including the powers of her rider.)

Dragon Rider is: Needs one!

Password: Pumpkin


Member name:RainDash)

Character name: Jak

Species: Human

Personality: Flyboy. He used to pilot aircraft before becoming a dragon rider, so he is very cocky and confident. He is also a big time flirt. However, he 'shockingly' never hooks up with anyone besides his dragon.

What your character looks like: Jak looks like this. (Darn my laziness.)

Powers: Magic, flight, and shape shiftng

Dragon Rider of Shinx

Password: Black Marrow


Member name: Ashes The Second

Character name: Freed'm

Species: Silver

Personality: Chaotic, yet organized. He has to have everything a certain way or he'll begin attacking aimlessly until someone fixes the problem he encountered. He's known as a monster to a lot of dragons. When human-ish, this desperate OCD need is decreased to fixing the item of interest.

What your character looks like: [I can't get an image up, but basically a leopard silver with chains and a belt, and a lot of extra feathering.]

Powers: Orginization

Dragon Rider?: If chosen, yes.

Password: Pumpkin Egg



Characters:


TSparkle123:

Garmasor

Shira

Kirian

Shinx


RainDash:

Kar

Aya

Jak


Celebi112:

Red


Xarria:

Nyx


Narvix:

Trivon

Gregor

Crysta


Ashes the Second:

Freed'm

This post has been edited by TSparkle123 on Jul 27 2012, 02:23 PM
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Posted: Mar 5 2012, 07:02 PM
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QUOTE (TSparkle123 @ Mar 5 2012, 07:38 PM)
In the far future, humans have discovered bones of ancient dragons. Some wished to exploit the find to create new dragons. (we have the technology to make ancient beings come back to life) Some wished to leave the bones in peace. There was a HUGE debate on the matter, those who wanted new, living dragons won.
When the new dragons were freed to live as they would, people captured the new eggs. They raised the dragons into adulthood. After years of this relationship with dragons, humans got bored. This wasn't the excitement they had anticipated. Soon, they melded their DNA with that of their pets. Not all people did this, but the ones who did became the DNA Dragons. They were freaks, partially dragon, partially human, they did not fit with one or the other. These people realized too late what they had done to themselves to reverse it.
Long, lonely years were spent learning the limit of their powers; until they banded together and went back home. When they came back, they found that home was now ruled by a tyrant in one mega-country.
Home was horrible. People like them were trapped in cages like animals, forced to do labor too hard for normal humans. They were slaves. The DNA Dragons had to do something.
Before they could act, they were noticed.


--I came up with this idea after reading Virals[U] by Kathy Reichs


~~ My character is Sanama, and she's the child of two DNA Dragons. Sanama wasn't aware of the existence of a human country until her parents decided to take her and the rest of the small colony back. She is a short Magi-girl with black hair and dark brown eyes.~~


Rules:
-No boyfriend/girlfriend situations.
-No deaths. just tell me when you're done with it and I'll figure something out.
-Have fun coming up with a cool story that has a PLOT!

Interesting story.
There is a little bit I don't understand.
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Long, lonely years were spent learning the limit of their powers; until they banded together and went back home.

When did they LEAVE?
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There are also a handful of grammar errors. I can show you them if you like. First, though, you should paste this into a Word document (Or something similar;) it will recognize most grammar and spelling errors.
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Posted: Mar 5 2012, 10:29 PM
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Thanks for the critique, thegreenrobby! I just wrote that when I was kinda bored, so I know I really could have done better. Thanks for the offer of showing me the grammer mistakes, but I think I can find them on my own.
So, what don't you understand about it? Maybe I could explain a little bit. smile.gif

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QUOTE (TSparkle123 @ Mar 5 2012, 11:29 PM)
Thanks for the critique, thegreenrobby! I just wrote that when I was kinda bored, so I know I really could have done better. Thanks for the offer of showing me the grammer mistakes, but I think I can find them on my own.
So, what don't you understand about it? Maybe I could explain a little bit. smile.gif

The thing that really confused me is when you said that they 'Went back home. To my knowledge, they never left home. You may just want to edit your story a little bit, to either remove the part about coming home, or writing a few sentences on how/why they left.
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Thanks! I'll edit that after school... or maybe during LA... Whenever I have time. I did add right before "Long, lonely years..." that they left, but I know I should add more.
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Nice idea! me likey...
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Wow. Cool idea. Like it! biggrin.gif

So some questions...
1) Is there a character form?

2) Can players be any DC Dragon-human mix? I'm assuming cheese and paper are out. A lot of RPs rule out Guardians of Nature as well. What are your thoughts?

3) How many years have passed since the first DNA dragon was created? I'm particularly curious how old the offspring can be (or grand offspring. The country did somehow become a mega country while they were gone, and that probably took quite a number of years...)

4) Do DNA dragons live longer than average humans?

5) Does every DNA dragon get some sort of power?

6) Any rules against godmodding or floodposting?

7) Can people play pure human or pure dragon characters?

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Before they could act, they were noticed.


Does this mean players start the RP off already imprisoned?
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Posted: Mar 6 2012, 06:45 PM
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yeah, I agree, but I also think that we should be able to use cheese and paper dragons because maybe they could be somewhat alive due to modern science? Also, here's an idea for the character forms, TSparkle;


username:
character name:
speicies: (Human, dragon, or DNA dragon?)
powers?
personality:
other: (Maybe there could be some kind of extra information as a password to prove they read the rules?)

Hope you like it! biggrin.gif
p.s. how many characters can one person have? can dragons have riders?

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Thanks for the ideas! I'll add to the original post, when I have more time. I have homework to do. (curse the day the idea was created!)
Here are some answers to Kigyptnee's questions:
1) not yet.
2) Yes! absolutely yes! I'm going to allow cheese and paper dragons, since people in my future have brought ancient bones to life. Maybe not Guardians of Nature... that would make it way too easy for players to free other DNA Dragons and escape. biggrin.gif
3) I'm thinking 20-40 years have passed, the youngest of the grand offspring is 16 (example: my character).
4) Yes. They live to be around 1000 years old, I'm thinking.
5) Yeah, they get powers that go with the type of hybrid they are.
6) I'll edit that in. Thanks for noticing I didn't have that in there. smile.gif
7) Yeah, if they're human, they have to pick whether they're on the DNA Dragon side or their government's side. If they're a dragon, well, they can't just destroy the government building.
8) Nah, I'm thinking they start off trying to escape the guards. Some will get captured, thus the point of the role play.
Celebi112: I'm gonna limit amount of characters one person can have to 3 (I want to be able to keep track of who's who as well as I can.) Dragons can have riders, they just have to be slightly limited.

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indeed. I can't wait! biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

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Hello~ I'm gistofeverything, and I'm one of those magical people who can get your RP Approved~

Please don't publicly accept character sheets until this is Approved.

Your sections aren't clearly defined. There is also some missing information here: History, Setting, Character sheets, I see none of this. Define your sections, please?

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This is done by (()). For example: ((I'm talking in OOC)) vs OOC: I'm talking in OOC - (()) saves clutter.
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Thanks, this is my first RP, so I wasn't exactly sure what I was supposed to do.
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Umm... so... Do you think the storyline needs any more editing? I don't see anything...
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I think it looks good. Drag an approver here. By the ear, preferably.

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gistofeverything already came and said it needed some fixing... But once that's done, maybe it'll be approved!
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I went through and fixed the stuff she said to fix, so I just need to get an approver and drag 'em over (as thegreenrobby said). And, yes, by the time I'm done with them, their ear will be bleeding.
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*is dragged by the ear* OWWWWW...!

There's still no plot?! *is sad*

Write me a plot, please?
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I can agree that the plot needs a little more spaz to it. TSparkle?
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QUOTE (Celebi112 @ Mar 13 2012, 11:23 PM)
I can agree that the plot needs a little more spaz to it. TSparkle?

Pointful. What exactly HAPPENS at the new land they come to?
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sad.gif I'll go through it and do whatever I need to....
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