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Cynder chuckled softly, nuzzling Spyro. "I love you too. Oh, and..." she sighed. "The wedding was supposed to be two days ago. It never happened." she sounded sad, but it soon vanished when she watched Aslan play in the snow. "Christmas is... Well... There are a lot of ways to explain Christmas. For one you get presents, but it's mostly a time to spend time with friends and family." she shrugged. "I never had a Christmas before so I couldn't tell you how it is." she said, turning a bit red.

((Sorry, computer locked.))
((The wedding could be tommorrow. I have no school. How about you?))

"Well, is it too late to give you this?" Spyro handed Cynder a ring. "It's my wedding present to you."
Aslan stared at the ring, seeing his reflection in the black stone. "Pretty... That for you, Ma?" He asked Cynder, ahppy for his mother to have Spyro to give her gifts with him inside them.

((I do... I don't have school on Thursday to Tuesday. You?))

Cynder stared at the ring for a moment, blinking a few times. She narrowed her eyes, mad at herself for not getting Spyro anything. She took the ring from Spyro and put it on, admiring it's beauty in the faint moonlight. She smiled, kissing him. "Thank you. It's beautiful. I'm just guilty I didn't get you anything..." she said, glancing over at Aslan. She chuckled. "Yep. It's for me." she held out her paw in front of Aslan, so he can see it better.

((Brb.))

((you crazy. we have school tommorow. im talking to cyda luva83.))

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"Don't feel guilty, Ma. Da loves you no matter what." Aslan hugged Cynder tight. Loving her with that annoying cuteness
"I guess Aslan stole the words right out of my mouth. But we'll be happy. A happy family. A happy life. Everything will be perfect." Syro kissed Cynder, which made Aslan gag. "I love you so much Cynder. Nothing will ever change that."

Cynder raised an eyebrow at Aslan. She chuckled to herself. "Since when does he know anything about love? He sure didn't get this smartness from me. That's for sure." she said, kissing him back. Hearing Aslan gag made her chuckle some more. "Oh comon. Nothing is ever perfect. Nothing." she shrugged, looking up at the stars. "Nothing..." she breathed, swishing her tail back and fourth. She looked at Spyro, a playful smile on her face. "So if I somehow got into an accident that made me ugly as hell, you would still love me?" she asked, grinning a bit.

Aslan jumped on Spyro's back and hopped up and down. "Ride! Ride! I wanna ride!"
Spyro laughed. "As long as you still loved me for getting you into that accident. I'm a clutz..." Spyro tripped on his tail when Aslan crawled on his back and wanted a ride.
Aslan fell over sideways laughing when spyro tripped and he landed in the snow. "Da's a clutz." He repeated to Cynder.

Cynder chuckled, throwing a snowball at Spyro. "He sure is." she said, smiling. She was going to pounce him, but missed her aim and slipped. She started to roll down the hill on the cliff in the snow, nearly burying herself in a snowball. You can hear screaming and laughter getting fainter and fainter as she continued to roll down the hill. Once you heard a small thunk when she got to the bottom, the laughter got louder. "I'M THE CLUTZ!!" she called to them, rolling around in the snow laughing.

((RISL. (Rolling in snow laughing))

"But i want christmas nao!" Nick said "Can we atleast get the tree?" Nick begged "With lots of nice lights?" Nick asked pleading with his eyes

Spyro jumped up and somersaulted in air. then he fell the ground and started rolling in a snow ball like Cynder did. "Come on, Aslan!!!" He called up, his voice getting fainter and fainter.
Aslan had to lean forward real far to hear what Spyro said. He finally leaned too far and started rolling too. "You and Ma are nuts." Aslan said, shaking off the snow wwhen he reached the bottom.
Spyro grabbed a tree branch in his mouth and shook it. Snow fell all over Aslan. "Nuts are we, eh? I'm not the one under snow."

Keisha sighed, shaking her head. "Not today. Tomorrow morning alright?" she asked, suddenly feeling dizzy. She coughed a few times before she groaned, falling to the floor. Her eyes slowly closed as she slipped into unconsciousness, as her head was paining her like hell.
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Cynder laughed, picking up some snow and walking behind the tree. She appeared on the top and threw snow all over Spyro, giggling. "Now you are." she said, sitting down on the branch. She snickered. "Can't get me." she said, waving her tail at the both of them.

((I gotta go for the night. Cyda make Cynder get knocked out if you don't wanna be in limbo. Night!))

((Nick: Okay, we're through here. Kapiche? You need to start writing longer posts. I know you can do it because I've seen some of your posts in Lone Wolves 3. I've been watching you. Just because this is DC RPs doesn't mean you can get out of making your posts interesting.

The rest of you guys (and Nick): Gently remind each other to write more than one line. I don't mean one sentence. I mean one line. As in, it goes the whole length of your post and continues onto the next line. Use the edit button and make your post more interesting. Please don't post again until you've made your previous post longer? 'kay? 'kay.

kthxluvubai.

-Mouldy))

((I only posted short because my parents are yelling. I'll delete this post and edit my last one in the morning. Night!))

(But there is some kind of block, thats keeps me from writing, its so weird, in lone wolves III I can do longer post easier for some reason.)

Aster was sitting on the windowsill, looking out t the stars. Branchrunner had gone to sleep a few minutes before. She took a deep breath and jumped out the window, testing her new wings. She flapped her wings quickly. The world seemed to be going in slow motion. She gulped as she fell, not getting any lift at all. She screamed and flapped her wings harder, not making any difference at all.

This post has been edited by chemist98 on Nov 23 2009, 09:41 PM

((You're just going to have to figure it out, Nick. All I'm asking is a few more words. If you have trouble with increasing word count, try this:

Questions to ask: Where is he? Who is he talking to? What kind of facial expressions as he making? How is he standing/sitting/doing whatever as he speaks? What is he thinking as he says this? Why is he saying what he's saying?

I can end up something like this:

Nick sat down huffily on the couch ((where)) and looked at Keisha ((who)) with big puppy-dog eyes ((facial expression)). "But I want Christmas now!" He begged his mom, clasping his hands in a pleading position. "Can we at least get a tree? With lots of nice lights?" He liked Christmas lights so much. They were so pretty when they shone in the dark ((why)). Maybe, he thought hopefully, we can have the icicle kind! Those are so cool! ((What he's thinking))

I would like you to practice by putting some of those things in your writing. If you want, you can label them so you know what you've already put in and what you haven't mentioned yet.

Another thing I would recommend is "quoting" the post you're replying to. I use this when I have brain farts and can't think up a good response.

This is Keisha talking to Nick. You wouldn't know Nick was replying to her from your post. So, we're going to put her text into your post.

Look at that! You used Krissi's post to both make yours longer and have it make a ton more sense! Plus, you only did half the work! This is a great way to get started with writing longer posts, plus, it's totally legal. As long as you don't use the other person's exact post, you're free to it.

Hope this helps.))

Aster screamed again and flapped her wings as hard as she could, but to no avail. She closed her eyes and waited to hit the ground. She felt herself hit the snow. She sighed in relief as she felt herself slowing down. When she stopped, she started digging towards the top. But, she passed out before she made it out. She stayed in the snow, cold.